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This is my song "Dear God"


SEALK

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Tell me if I need to change anything.


Dear God

Dear God, I'm writing you a letter today/
and believe me it's hard to put into words what I'll say//
I've done bad, been dishonest and even betrayed trust/
And like every man, I’ve thrived for lust//
I've done things I'm not proud of, and you know that/
I sometimes dress gansta, baggy clothes and backwards hat//
I've loved and at the same time though unnatural thoughts/
People diss me cause I take verbal cheep shots//
You've seen how I live, I live better than some/
I can buy a CD every week, some only buy gum//
I gotta car that cost three grand, I didn't spend a dime/
I got it on my birthday, others save in time//
I've taken advantage off the things I have/
And I know I'm not the only one who's ever done bad//
I'm not a bad guy, I just feel guilty inside/
Thought about being different, really I tried//

(Chorus)
I confess to the sins so I can be with you/
You've always been there for me, I'm here for you//
I wanna live life clean, and do what I can/
Play my cards right and be a better man//
Learn by the mistakes from the men who came before me/
Let me give the true definition of enzayne//
I'll do only things that I am aloud/
I promise you God, I'll make you proud//

Dear God I’ve been so bad, I apologize/
For all the pain I’ve caused and all the lies//
But my eyes fill up with tears of sadness/
When I’ve realized what I’ve done caused this madness//
I wondered if anyone cared if I died/
It scared me so much that I broke down and cried//
I realized lots of people have it worse than I do/
But I feel better about myself when I talk to you//
I admit I’ve never been to church, or drank from a holey cup/
I believe in you God, is that enough//
If not then a lot of people are gonna go to hell/
But an angel gets its wing when you ring a bell//
God I know I’ve done wrong, I know I’ve done bad/
I just wanna make you happy and never mad//
I'm not a bad guy, I feel guilty inside/
Thought about being different, really I tried//

(Chorus)


God thank you for all the things you gave me/
Good friends, good life, and great family//
You’re always around when I need you real bad/
Cause when I do something wrong, I feel bad and sad//
It seems like I’ve been sad a lot lately/
And now I’m talking to you and I think well maybe//
I’ll change my life, forget the stress and strife/
Drop the gun, put away the knife//
And tonight on my knees I still will pray/
Not just tonight, everyday I’ll pray//
I’m here for you, I know you’re there for me/
God thank you, you blessed me with my family//
Someday I know we’ll meet together in heaven/
I’ll see ya then God, sincerely Kevin//
PS, I'm not a bad guy, I feel guilty inside/
Thought about being different, really I tried//

(chorus)
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You don't have to change anything 'cause you spoke from your heart and I feel that since it takes a lot of heart to speak how you really feel! :werd:
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Nah, Dont Change a thing, if you think you can do better, read ova it, but loads of my songs i've written need improvements, i write to make myself feel better, writing lyrics to me is just like keeping a diary, i dont care if its whack or not, because its mine and mine alone, so its up to you

J-o-e
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  • 2 weeks later...
That's really really good. I agree if somethin' from the heart, U shouldn't change it. Natually, it will be good. I liked this at the end...

"Someday I know we’ll meet together in heaven/
I’ll see ya then God, sincerely Kevin//"

Keep up the good work.
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[font="Arial"][color=blue]Hey Sealk...

I thought that was really cute... I enjoy reading anything ppl write from their hearts, that touches me in a warm way... :thumb:

Keep it up...

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