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Chapter One: Love of the Game


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been bored and writing, don't know exactly where I'm going with this, but let me know what you think so far:

Chapter One: Love of the Game

My dreams of writing would be untouchable if i didn't respect the art

It would be pointless to lift a pen if the words weren't from my heart

I wanna make the spirit cry, I wanna touch the soul

If you're feeling incomplete I want my words to make you whole

I wish to be rich in my successes, something like Lady O

But I refuse to let where I've come from be overshadowed by where I could go

There's no time for people trying to throw a wrench in my plans

There's a miracle in my mind and a pen in my hand

So excuse me as I take this moment to digress

Because the key to my future unlocks the door to my success

I dream in full screen technicolor of life- changing rhyme

My heart bleeds for the universe because this world is mine-

For the taking

This is history in the making

I'm one step closer to my greater calling;whatever it may be

The end is near, the sky is falling, something I never thought I'd see

And that makes it more important for me to take this given opportunity

Add a dash of me and a splash of ingenuity

Stir it up, let it cool, then dish it out in bits and pieces

If this was an observation of my life, this part would be the thesis

Just a sneek peek, a little teaser of one chapter

This is only the beginning the greatest stuff always comes after.....

(to be continued with Chapter Two)

-ashley

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Wow. This was very good. Each line was deep in it's own right. I really liked this.

"It would be pointless to lift a pen if the words weren't from my heart" - so true.

But I refuse to let where I've come from be overshadowed by where I could go" - Nice way to let it be known ya aint playin'.

Question, why exactly is this put in "chapters"? Some type of inspiration? A different way to organize a song? A song that's an audio novel or book perhaps. Interesting spark of an idea I'd say. :thumbsup2:

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actually i really don't know ( pitiful ain't it? lol) but something is telling me to take it in that direction, b/c there's lots more i want to say and i wanna kinda connect it, so far i'm not sure how i'm gonna do it, i'm just gonna let the words guide me lol

thnx for ur input i really appreciate it

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