It'z not bad. some lines just made song incomplete like...
"leavin me on my own and i was scared
i admit it i was afraid of me being cared" - a lil off in concept, but I get the idea. Just feels like there should be more 2 it.
"again, my good friend, keep me happy
by wiping and putting on our sons nappy" - same wit this. just doesn't feel like it completes the song or whatever example or point U were trying 2 get across.
Plus it helps 2 type your lyrics in a proper sense. Slang is cool, but even that needs spelled right.