[quote=J-o-e,Sep 19 2004, 04:52 PM]First off, i like the way that you made the song into a diary, personally i have never seen that done, your writing a rhyme taken from feelings from different days and i respect the way you make the flow work also, the point is taken directly because the topic i can relate to cause im 16, i liked the words you used and the lines you rhymed, one word to describe it, dope, i like reading your stuff,[/quote]
Nah, it'z not a diary. It'z the dayz that I wrote em. I guess U could kinda call it a diary tho. I just put the dates on my stuff so I know when I wrote it. Sometimes I'd include the exact time. I'm not ashamed of how long it takes me 2 write something. That'z the whole point of the song. 2 relate and remember previous years as a teen.
Appreciate ya feedback.