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[quote=JumpinJack AJ,Sep 14 2004, 12:18 AM]Nah, it's just slang. It's not very current either, i can't belive u havn't heard it said 100 times before.[/quote] Hold up. I know "ma" is slang. Cam'ron used it wit "Hey Ma". I just laugh everytime I hear the word. Like when I think about what mothers R 2 children. It'z hilarous 2 me. "How ya doin ma This ya song ma we get on ma" It just cracks me up. That'z a bad slang word 2 me.

I never thought this post would be the work of AJ. That is scary. When U see animals, not just birds come in packs like that. I hate Stephen King making us afraid of common things in the world. that and sci-fi. @ me rite y'all?

2pac + Outlawz - High Speed I LOVE da HOOK.

I think the "tail feather" has been fully pluck off the butt. Will could've made a longer lasting hit.

[quote=J-o-e,Sep 14 2004, 08:34 AM]i share my lyrics wit the real people who tell me the real truth about my lyrics, i respect all the artists here[/quote] Yes. That'z all good. But accept "the Truth" itself, not what you personally make it out 2 be. Both being told it and telling it.

All three storys dealt wit death of youth. U could vary the subjects of the song. Quite real. Almost like "Teardropz & Closed Casketz" - 2pac & Outlawz. It'z a nice read. Could definately have a great listening presence. Good job. :thumb: Keep it Up.

Why would U have a :dunno: 4 your own song? Now R U sayin that alotta people will probably say it'z bad? Or r u thinkin that yourself? I understand trying 2 raise up those ghetto girls. I'm not attracted 2 the song as a romantic struggle. You've got a different way of saying "I'm not perfect." I lost the continuation of the song in a couple spots. (might just be me) It'z a good effort. I've heard of the lifestyle you're talkin about, but I just don't feel it.(and an understanding manner) And I don't believe it'z bad. But if U do, then I have no need 2 form an opinion. note comment: U claim your underrated. Your a rated MC. Thing is U feel U need 2 be rated. Your a rated MC. But I'm a respected MC.

I'm gonna love watching this. I might be able 2 sleep after I laugh so hard.

[quote=JumpinJack AJ,Sep 13 2004, 03:07 PM]i just love females and like being their 4 them since so many guys are over-touchy and aggresive.[/quote] I'm the same way. I prefer girls over guys when it comes 2 alotta stuff.

Actually just in general. I don't use cool edit, so I couldn't really tell U everything U need 2 or could do with it.

I was surprised when i heard Will say "ma" in his song. Is that a Philly thing or something?

The only Nelly I have is the St.Lunatics Free City. That'z all the taste of Nelly I need. Altho I did love Nelly's hitz when they 1st came out.

(in my head) Jagged Edge - Wednesday Lover

[i]Real[/i] - Nice opening wit the beat. OK lyrics. It'd fit wit a mixtape. Work on your deliver. The beat gave U more power and u didn't capitalize on it. [i]Don't Get Down With Me[/i] - The beat again gives an artist a power. Almost like Eminem's "the Way I Am". Kinda off wit flow. U didn't follow the beat (which a good thing), but your audience should be able 2 tell where U put ya flow and where it'z going (most cases anyway) Since I wasn't sure, I listened 2 it twice. Overall, if your gonna stay wit this; U can grow as an artist. U need a better deliver. I don't care what kind of wordplay or lyrics an artist has, as long as they present it like they need 2.

I got my verse tho. Now we want up-tempo, postive give off beat rite?

If people aren't getting the song, I think it'z my fault. Sorry.

It might be my fault. I was gonna remove the song and re get it. I missed up the 1st link. But got it on the 2nd. I feel like such an knobjockey if it'z my fault.

Good job, and it is wit the congratulatory post that I pass up W3. 781. Good job again man.

Absolutely great flow. Wordplay was str8 power of emotion. U'd really make your listeners think. 4 some reason, that title seems familar. But anyway. All the way round amazing song.

I love the ending of the 2nd poem U posted. Poetry and lyrics R 2 different things. But they all relate in a release of emotion or creativity. I actually have some poems I've written. might but some up sometime. Poetry is a great thing.

Thanks Jim. And I got "You Saw My Blinker" as a loop beat on my JJFP instrumentals. Don't think it'd fit 2 well. Feedback appreciated.

Yeah. I got it in the 1st post.

Ok. I got it. Thanks.

How do I download it so I don't have 2 be online 2 listen 2 it?

How do I get it so I don't have 2 be online 2 listen 2 it?