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Well, the chorus actually gets said 4 times. I might come up wit something more, but it'z cool like that. Thanks man. Feedback appreciate. I can't wait 2 put it down this weekend. Then I'm one step closer to finishing the album.

Nice rhyme. Great flow. Keep it up.

Talib Kweli - Around My Way (any1 gonna get his album?)

U got a witness. btw, willsmithfan1 is a girl. I'm surprised she posts.

This will be one of the songs on my ?double disc? album. 'Human Nature'. I'm using Nas "The Second Coming" Instrumental 4 it. Check it out. [i]Sept. 2, 2004 (10:55 p.m. - 12:15 a.m.)[/i] The dayz feel so strange in the way times change So do my actions and I gotta explain how I came Blame me, feel so deranged when I'm speakin my freedom God's here 4 everyone, and I chose 2 believe Him Proceed into the story with all facts, nothing's a riddle Blessed with the care of strong medicine, but not in a hospital With little time 2 prepare, being born premature All went wrong b4 and after, when it began on the floor She feel a pressure of pains in place 4 the sex games Temptation 2 much so hurried it up in the fast lane The only brother 2 help out, was that of a sibling But in a blanket, kick me away, gave me bad breathing Calling the Life Lite Helicopter in flight U weren't there, but feel it'z presence with this lyrical recite Fight it, the pain has scarred me, so I could never let go The scenario on Houston Street, I Came From God's Ghetto CHORUS: Can't believe it'z the way that I live Comin outta that crib 'It'z all good kid' Couldn't look at me as a future child prodigy So the chance of survival seemed less than probably Put us both thru it 4 nothing, should've just had the abortion 2 weeks, then out the door, I need regular supporting In court, just then, I'd have some type of family again Catch em during a new life and making amend I have no problem with my reflection, but they do wit complextion Constantly testing, and asking the questions I'd stay'd the same with everything that I knew And it'z hard 2 ask about my past comin outta the blue My concerns grow as I get older Gotta refresh my steps, so when I look back, nothin seems like a blur Ain't no art of storytellin, I'm rockin da ears about my birth, August 2nd, 1986 the year Kept me here 4 somethin' and 2 scars show The beginning of me Came From God's Ghetto CHORUS Look at me now, I don't feel like a ghetto inhabitant But I know where it started, and I will never 4get Imagine it if I was still there, always doin something wrong Can't be touched, invincible, but that wouldn't last long On the hill, keepin it real with all the dealers Desperate needs 4 money, becoming one of the stealers Bein a playa, gettin wit girls, the most sexy appealers Or bein dangerous wit a gun, becoming the most feared killers 2 be the one that kept that riot, instead of bein quiet Instead of having good, having evil excitement Luckly, that'z not me, easy 4 u 2 believe but it'z ok wit me cuz I got goals 2 achieve Rhyme 4 a reason, believe in the future Vibe and listen at the same time, love the way I move ya There it is, full effection of a flow wit a rapper who Cam From God's Ghetto CHORUS

Anticipation is back up again. I'm gonna watch 2morrow.

I'm not even gonna discuss Switch anymore. I feel like I'm talking about thin air. Sshh!!!. Switch? I didn't hear that.

All we got is VH1, MTV, BET. that'z about it. Unless U have Digital Cable comcast or whatever. We do downstairs. I have 2 check 4 all of em. The only other one I know of is MTV2.

I haven't heard the others, but I love the original.

Hey. As long as it gets out, I'll make sure Will's stuff gets promoted.

U know, if that woman fart as he bit into the fruit, u know he would've been done wit Diddy's Party.

I'll tell u whose affiliated wit JJFP. Me, I'm a fan. Come on. "We want Switch... Smith!!!!" (numerous)

In the midst of this pic... here's what'z been said. [i]Will[/i]: Let me hear ya say "oooowwwwww!!!" [i]ShaQ[/i]: (thinking) What is this fool doing? That'z not on the damn cue cards.

Well, if Will would hurry his ass up, there wouldn't be this kind of tension. Damn U str8 2 heck Will Smith. Stop wit your excuses. Get a lil crazy round new album anticipation.

If I met Will and we talked bout Jada breakin up wit him. I'd say.... "U brought this on Ya-self!!!"

I think he did like it a lil bit. I 4got his expression. I think Will respected Petey 4 so tracks on his 1st album. much like i did.

What a concidence.

I will never get anything right in this game.

Must be some good music, if it won an award at MTV. (well more or less)

Funny man. AJ.

Really pissed at U. j/k. Aw man, I wanna meet Will someday.

Y'all 4got da Philly girl. Eve. 2 be honest, Fabolous makes a lil more sense than Jadakiss. But their verse were actually pretty good. The beat is dope. They all rocked the house.

Eminem is a really good artist. I think maybe he's lost his edge as a solo artist tho. It should just be his crew on the records. He can be on a few. And produce the sounds 4 them. He shouldn't become the next P.Diddy. That'z a bad way 2 go Em. Don't do that. I got his "Infinite" and I love that album. I respect him 4 when he 1st came out. I remember seein "My Name Is...", that caught my eye. It was cool. And his album, the Marshall MAthers LP. He had his controversy, creativity, and such. I don't think people mentioned and made fun of Will bout the way he raps in their rhymes until Eminem did it. Peeps like Fredro Starr "What If" (he's a good artist), and "The Truth" by 50 Cent or somebody. I know there's some well known artists included.

U know Jim, being an independent underground artist. Wait let me rephrase that. :dunno: We got some new category in the building. Artists like us can really connect wit our fans. And we want to, right Brakes? As long as they all aren't "Simone"s. :thumb:

Is it almost like "What's Going On?" by the MTV All-Stars? JAdakiss is on it? U mean he actually is Waking Up? I'm not 2 sure wit Jadakiss. Like how his fans will be wit him. How he used 2 rap and now he's "socially aware". I don't know. :dunno: