mfuqua23

Money isn't tha answer to everything, U can't buy life - Good point to make. Gangsta rap also lead U 2 do so, why u listenin' to dat crap If I could, I would have it agaist the law 2 have dat rap - Attacking personal taste. Interesting. :stickpoke: For songs like this, try to make your words a bit more diverse and maybe insert a personal, possibly recent or memorable event. It's still a decent rap tho. Why did you spell Violence with 3 Cs? I'm curious about that.

FuQ - Waitin (produced by MC2B) Hey guys. I need serious opinions. I got another track produced by MC2B. The flavor is almost neo-Hip Hop like. ----------- I remember back in the days, how our togetherness was made Now we're two lost loves nobody can save I lay across my bed, on my chest, tryna ease out my breaths thinkin' what's next, is the soft touch of ya hands caress My love is callin' for U, only for U, makin me stall in things to do like performin' rhymes at a spot or gettin back to my crew My cell stays lit, but it's the wrong numbers that flicker keeps disappointing me, I get more bitter It's a pain I don't wanna feel The 1st instance I'd see U, I wouldn't conceal Out my window, the rain water tilts down slowly Looks like I'm not the only one hurt, nature knows we need to be Despite what U may think, these are my honest feelins I been down too long, tryna get up wit this stamina building It's killin' me to wait, and nobody's in line I'm prepared to plead my case why U should be mine On the other end, a lady within a tee and jeans Fearin' to sleep, like I'm a nightmare cuz I be in her dreams She put me off too many times with that "I'm busy" line but I know the truth is she's just afraid inside I'm usually not take charge, but I told her what she had to do I thought it thru, U should too, couldn't have made it any smoother Time: Now, setting: late, every second is chased with memories of us, helping her with the decision to make And sure I had my faults too, with females before U but the only one I desire to have, will always be U My last words echo, while her curves tantalizin vibes Pacin back and forth, tryna search answers within her mind She's tryna call me back, as she look in the mirror Takin note of her face, when it's my voice she hear But I don't pick up, cuz I'm out back shootin' hoops Tryna take my mind off things and tryna get loose She starts rethinkin' how to go about it What our love means to one another, can we do without it Gonna go drive to my house, and wait at the door See how long it be before she won't wait anymore While she was headin' my way, I was headin hers Communication in a relationship is important to learn Got to her house, knocked on the door for about 10 minutes then sent her a message in hopes that she get it We was thinkin alike, on the same night Thinkin we didn't want each other, and that'd be the end of our love life No mic could hold the words that I had for her I felt relieved when she was at my door and ran across the curb Instantly romantic, as I whispered in her ear and she smiled, when she realized I was sincere To end it all, we laid in each others arms, on the patio as the breezes roll by in a nice easy flow Good things can in fact come to those who wait But this is better than good, matter a fact, it's great Let me run thru the chorus one more time to understand and appreciate the whole story line

HAPPY BIRTHDAY Lerk!!!

Jagged Edge feat. John Legend - Season's Change

I listened to it twice this morning. I really liked the mood.

"See where rare, plots thicken synopsis stick and build drops glistenin, and mist risen incisive incisions for derisive divisions, because you tripped on the listenin" - An addictive delivery. "true friendship is whisked in, but stirred to a consistency thats missin"; "best stress test is the mind" - Two lines I personally liked. I really liked the depth of the lyrics for this one compared to your others. Your lyrics have certainly been on a move as of late, haven't they? :2thumbs:

Black Star - Born & Raised

Jagged Edge - Watch You

Wise Intelligent - Unda Fire

Did anybody every look this guy up? He just might be real. I loved the poem "Listen to the street beat Listen to the box shock Listen...or I'll kill ya!!"

A Tribe Called Quest - Scenario Juggle (DJ Total Eclispe)

I seen this a a myspace blog, and I still feel the same. "Cause it’s the same old **** He said she said and you left with it" - So so true. "Common sense is leaving" - Tim, u got words that make people think and realize they're missing something so simple. "Theres more meaning in life Than the meaning of life" - :hmm: Gotta think about that one. It's certainly been one thing that has boggled my mind. "But if you don’t search for the answers Close your mind, it’ll act like a cancer" - Nice simile and ending. Did anything special cause you to come up with this?

What didn't and who?

With that kind of attitude, why bother? Personally, I thought the verse was ridiculous. I know a weakmind when I see one. Whatever's going on in there, I think you need to check. And if you know rhymes like this aren't appreciated on this forum, again why bother? Find a forum that is if it bugs you that much. ------- 1. If more than one user account is registered with the same IP address you will be automatically banned. 2. Do not talk to people in posts, asking them to chat etc, use the PM feature if you want to send a message to someone 3. Do not go ridiculously off topic in posts, we are more lenient in the caught in the middle off topic forum, but if you are posting nonsense in a serious on topic discussion you will be banned. 4. Do not lie, thats an automatic ban 5. Do not pretend to be anyone that you are not 6. Do not harass other members of the forum 7. Do not swear, this is a family friendly forum, a lot of younger people around, and Will doesnt curse in his records and we try to uphold that here 8. Do not post any pornographic material 9. Do not spam 10. Do not take something from this forum and post it elsewhere without first getting the permission from the member who originally posted that material. 11. Do not unnessecarily bring up old posts 12. Don't harass people with PMs 13. Don't Post copyrighted material 14. Do not flame posts if you have a problem with someone take it to PMs -------- I'm sure we've all been minorly guilty of these, myself included, but we still need to uphold the class of this forum, and being fans of JJFP.

Goapele - Closer

HAPPY BIRTHDAY AJ!!! Enjoy it.

I still remember the day it came out and I got it at Target. Hearing that album was one of my best days ever. I think this site played a part in L&F's success as well. We kept the buzz going for Will, and obviously are continuing to do so.

It'd be so interesting to hear the old and new of JJFP. They'll put out music that really show people how to party.

Black Star - Hater Players

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MissAshley!!!! Hope you have a real nice day.

Same here. I just download the extra songs. Reason usual they only do 1-3, is because if they add any more, it counts as a whole new album and sales start from 0 again. At least, that was the case when Mariah Carey did her's with 'Emancipation of Mimi'.

Ah ok. I thought there was more to it than that. haha

Donte (from Mood) - Temptation (produced by Hi-Tek)

I heard of them before. They were on the Juice soundtrack but I didn't like the song. I might give it a 2nd listen just for the heck of it.

for being without words is affecting my health - For you and writers alike. I like that line. a million questions in my mind... when did I break the ties that bind? what if my rhymes weren't as strong? my verse wasn't quite as long? - One of the things I love is when questions are put in to make the audience think. I tend to do that a lot myself when I write. if I were a rapper...yeah well... we've been there before so I hope and I pray that there's much more in store - Really nice ending, but I have a question about it. What exactly did you mean when you said "we've been there before"? How did that situation play out?