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Yeah R_T, post some audios.

That's what I'm wondering. You really look like you're just putting up a front. God Blessa! Well, considering he's about 12 or 13 years old.. :hmm:

Ahhh, the no-plastic-knife problem! Especially on those occasions when, really, only a saw would suffice.

This is the only site I've seen it availiable, and you'd have to ask around. I just think that the only fair way to get this song would be to pay AJ for it, since it was him that bought it for a high price in the first place.

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Yeah, good battle. While both were good, I've seen better from you KBF, and I think on this occasion DJST came off with the stronger verse.

I love listening to uplifting music :hmm: I think you need to ditch this 'hard' act, and get some positive messages going. I don't know where you're going with this, (but I have a pretty good idea - emulating the likes of 50 Cent), but you really need to broaden vocab, structure it better, use wordplay. Whatever, just act like who you are for a change. :azzangel:

Renagade_Tim, back off. This isn't willsmith.com, so keep that trash off the board. :eusa_naughty: He only gave his opinion which is what you wanted. I seem to remember reading on WillsBoard.com that you wrote this song quite recently, so unlike you suggested, it isn't an old song. Of course, this was when you weren't biting other peoples rhymes and passing them off as your own. I assume that this one is written by you. It is, isn't it? :damnlorettas: You should post the audio, see what people think of it. I'll... refrain from commenting :hmm: :azzangel:

Yeah FuQ, awesome work. It's a shame this thread hasn't got much of a response. I've always admired your freestyling abilities, it's pretty obvious you're very capable of thinking on the spot, saying what you want to say, and getting out good vocab and structured sentences that makes sense. There are some pretty deep lines in there, keep it up. I look over the literary errors, because what else can you expect in a freestyle, also the good stuff kind of cancels out the mistakes. Know what I mean? Oh, and you said 'understand' 29 times, but I didn't see it as a problem at all. :2thumbs: These were some of the lines that I liked best: "Where ya destiny to be, gettin down on ya knees" "It’s like dark vs light, black vs white And wrong vs right, but that one’s ok, even tonight" "Where ya gonna hide when it’s understandin’ wit the statutory Never boring, understand you makin more and Lookin into Pac eyes, poster’s on my wall Tryna figure out if I can stand, and got the gaul" "And so I devour the power All these emcees think they last when they cds ain’t worth the hour What it mean to pay ‘em $18" "And it’s like that, not give a damn about a black man ???????? Black fists is understandin’, upliftin’ of the revolution And then a, how you do it when you gotta get into it Just to take ya melodies, try to follow felonies" "Feel and understand struggle for survival Rollin that dice, and it’s so six sided Six shooter, flip it, revolutionary writer Dealin’ how you divided playin Russian Roulette Then you understand the feelin, the bullet got more sweat than you do when it’s elixir, luxurious ya brain And understand, the heavy getter, back into contain And if it’s getting twisted with the lyrical abilities to killin’ emcees off like pop, pop, pop! Understand the drop, don’t think that I’m a fool"

I was only trying to be helpful, geez :worried:

Is this thread some sort of joke?

lol Julie, could you tell I was angling for some free stuff. Haha Anyway. Back on topic. bart, in my opinion it's all out of perspective, and you haven't measured anything up too well. I'm not sure any of them look like they do in the photograph. I mean, the height of Jeffs folded arms above the mixer, the width and size of RRCs torso, the height difference between the top of WS and RRC's heads. Look at the centre pin on the disc on the left - WS's shoulder does not extend beyond it, in your sketch it does. Look at Jeffs head in your sketch, then compare to the photo. It looks to me as though you ran out of space (if you measured up beforehand, this doesn't happen), and just tried to squash it in. Compare the size of his head to that of RRC - I'm not sure what's happened there. You also missed out the baseball cap on his head, which maybe contributes to how deformed the head looks, or maybe it's because you ran out of space. The use of tone dramatically improves a picture, you've elected to use flat shading which does nothing for it, and indeed just takes away from the overall image as a whole. Shading would make it look more 3D, and also you then wouldn't need to draw the noses like flaps. So, I'd like to see you measuring it all up better (holding up your pencil to get angles and measurements is really helpful here), and using tone to help structure it better. Just my opinion, I want to be honest with you rather than just saying "dope work", because while praise is very nice, it gets you nowhere. Constructive critism is what gets you to move forward.

Is there gonna be a prize for this one? I mean, I don't know about you guys, but drawings take up a lot of time, and that's time most people (including me) don't really have. So an added incentive would encourage more people to partake. I dunno.

Yeah I'd be down for that. I'll have to scan in some work from my Higher Art course :2thumbs: 3cookies would win hands down though.

AJ paid a high price for that one track, so I don't think you'll be able to download it for free - this isn't anywhere else on the net remember. I remember in 2004 he was offering to burn CDs for people, but at a price. It wouldn't be right if you got to download this (extremely) rare track for free, when others have had to buy it. So if you want it, I think you'll have to pay.

Actually, I came from willsmith.net, as did all the other old heads :2thumbs:

Will Smith - "I'm Comin'" here on JJFP radio from DJ Jonny 5.

12 Stones - "Running Out of Pain"

Nah, it was on the UK version of the Freakin' It single from Willennium.

Yeah, awesome cookies. Thanks.

Haha, awesome

Julie, you missed out the bit about the midgets, cow, and clams. :lolsign:

I would be willing to sell the story to you :lolsign:

Big mistake Julie. You now have the attention of every guy on this forum I know, why don't you let them try and guess the story ;) :lol:

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