willsmithfan1

Powerpuff Girls

Young Blaze - Top Chillin

FuQ - Check The Rhyme

Jaspreet

Thanks for the feedback. Any lines I can change let me know.

I wrote two verses yesterday, my first verse didnt go well so I started again. The 2nd verse was done yesterday and I didn't change anything. Let me know what you think, advice is always appreciated... At It Again My lyrics are goin down underground Hear dope beats lyrics and sounds I'll turn all haters to one scene Firing back at U as strong as gasoline U heard I stopped rapping for a while Makin s*** just ain't my style Bass runnin through my speakers Another underrated MC bleeder I dont need anybody, I make it on my own Other motherf***ers been doin their s*** all wrong F***ed up lyrics with beats callin them songs My rhymes are hitting as strong as steel Mix my lyrics with beats, too strong to kill 'If you still don't like my flow F*** off and I suggest you go Hot beats with lyrics so cold None of this s*** will get old Never forget the way the story is told I keep my s*** loud Even haters know how I keep it down' You don't have a line to rhyme with 'told' I keep my s*** loud Even haters know how I keep it down My lyrics are like rocks and stones Lines so heavy, it can break your bones Took time with and now it's all blown You'll see me in future ruling the throne You act like you hold the reign I'll give you lil something that can pop your veins My lines are hittin so hard Already got people treatin me like God Like the words that I'm spittin Nobody tells I'm quittin All of it turned out so deep Crazy lyrics that never put you to sleep Other people and music selling cheap Cuz they cheat They can't bring the heat with hot beats U hear my stuff in the middle of streets I'm takin it back to youth Never lie, always have to speak the truth Read my words line by line Outstanding stuff that always shines Written in two thousand and five Got the lyrics that keep you alive

Bad Boys Bad Boys II I,Robot Independence Day Men In Black

Young Blaze - 773 Chicago

Dre - Still DRE

Probably My Wife & Kids. One On One My Wife & Kids Wayans Brothers In The House Kenan And Kel Powerpuff Girls Tom & Jerry Pink Panther Scooby Doo Movies Looney Tunes Celebrity Deathmatch

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My Forgot About Dre Remix

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I'm guessing he's in G-Unit. He made a new track with 50 Cent called "Seductive" I dont know how long he's been in G-Unit though.

Yeah, who knew in a week I could get better. Thanks everybody. If it's that good, I might turn it into a audio track once I get a mic sorted. Thanks again for the feedback.

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Michael Jackson - Bad

213 - Groupie Love

Hey, I wrote some lyrics..poem today. Got the inspiration from Bow Wow's track Let Me Hold U. Decided to wrote how a guy treats a girl and then splits up. Let me know what you think and advice is always appreciated. Held Me Down It all began when I found the right one Was in the chillin in the mall U gave me your number and said give me a call U said “Let me introduce to my world Wanna do u right cuz u a beautiful girl” So I went home & picked up the phone He asked me if I’m all alone He told me to come to his crib I’ll never forget everything we did Next day we balled at the mall You were the best never let me fall We were like best friends I thought you’ll be with till the end There were no secrets, no pain, nobody playin games My whole life had changed and rearranged to an exchange My mother told me I was doing wrong I explained to her how to kept me strong Even your boyz thought you blowin me for dough But they don’t understand the things we know Next day it felt like fate Got close together and had our 1st date I told him he’s the one that I can trust And our love will never crust U kept me on the right track Were always there 4 me when I needed your back I knew you I would always do right As long as you’re right there on my side We flashed to your crib we chilled inside, We spent some time in your ride Days got harder as they flew Times & memories together always blew Day after day we went our separate ways Never came back to the same place We both drifted apart

Hey, I wrote my first poem a week ago. Let me know what you think. Advice always appreciated. The First Day It all starts from the day of your birth That's when you were introduced to Earth day by day you started to grow week by week more and more starts to show as you get older things start to change everything happens in its own range as you get older your life will get colder and there's nobody for you to tell people all the hard times you been through all you see now is people with crews and you have many different views as it gets harder, you start to crack mad as you are, you get your own back you tried to kill yourself all you did was hurt someone else now you're dead everything has shred as we get on with life with our own way always look back to your first day

Bow Wow - Let Me Hold You Down

FuQ - Speak On...

Happy Birthday

Eminem - Who Knew