i think it still needs some finishing touches otherwise i think its good, tell me what you guys think!
Wordplay
Written by Mike (Concept)
Wondrous wordplay discompose my foes
Without woven words, it worsens their flows
Pens and paper persistently pause
Like no poetry power pumpin, possessing no cause
Ecstatic with energy exercising my mind
Like the only soul left within all mankind
Making minds move memories made
Motivation created but mans magic fades
Friendships fall, fierce fires fought
Fires inside, money conquers thought
Armor equipped brain, always alert
Excessively active only amongst the assert
Destined datelines die, promises decrease
Desire for the dollar, dares to dream decease
The liars lunge at leftover lyrics
Like the lions leap with all of their spirit
Don’t rap about death cause people end up dead
All lyrics are literal once they’ve been said
I rap about truth hoping peace comes through
And wish that people listenin adopt my views
Instead people are getting hypnotized with lies
Pimpin and sex is what all their flows advise
All I hear lyrical is about bitches and hate
Influence the kids and it switches their fate
Bloody battles blastin within their brain
Power, lust and reign which they can’t maintain
I’m a lyricist reborn came outta the ****
Now I don’t front hardcore whenever I spit
Ya’ll should really try the Concept effect
A.k.a. spawn an idea that can get respect
‘Cause then you get better’n and better’n
Then you spit like a veteran
Start to make the cheddar’n
Got everything you need: values and money
Respect in this game is sweeter than honey
I’ll tell ya, the taste of praise
Can get me going for days
And when im done, my lyrics always amaze