rawad_m

what i meant by it is that we keep on posting you know quickly so its sort of like a real freestyle thing

joe dont be a shmuck, with this rhyme seriously duck, im gonna make ya look like a quack, withe every single win that i rack, i hope ya like the way i annialate, the way i make my opponents strart to hate, the end is coming, the only thing to do i suggest start running 1 min rap(as fast as i could type)

when i went to download it it said 21 users have already downloaded it, so does that mean i cant download it anymore?

i'll start it off: with this battle i'm gonna take you out, as if my lyrical mastery was ever in doubt, i dare any one of y'all to respond, make your reply a swansong, cause though i'm a rookiei got a veteran state of mind, my rhymes well paced and placed every time, come on take me on ...i dare you now don't you go trying to hide away somehow, if you dare to post your reply to your mc career take one look back and say your goodbies, at first i'll go all easy on you, dont wanna get you to flee away after a post or two, but then as a cheetah on the kill, i'll strangle you slowly just for the thrill, good preparation for the tasty banquet , any rap blood you had i just drank it, yeah thats the way that you'll end up, get you wishing for the immortality cup, but there'll be no point, the next progigy annoint, my future is predicted, any challednger the crystal ball shows i've licked it, o.k. i'll leave you know to reply, your response make interesting don't let me sigh you gotta make it great, or your future'll be eaten away on my desert plate

man frenetic no offence, most of your ratings i agree with, but miami 7 out of 10?

Guys, I was wadering how much an artist would need to sell of their CD's in order to make a decent profit. For e.g will's born to reign sold i believe around 300000 copies so was it a financial failure( I dont think so but your opinions)? How much is considerd good sales?

me and kbfprince are joining together

batman kicks ass

Anyone want to enter with me, i'm new to freestyling, (and so i kind of suck) but if there are any other people that are new this with me, give a shout, rawad

man, some people take thing way to literally , you gotta chill, read things openly i was just using a bit of jest, not something to take to the chest, never take what people say as literal truth, or you’ll fast become known as a cooke get it? i dont wanna make you quit joe, but i wanna make you so despondent that you mull over doing just so, u saw me wearing my sisters dress? what are you some perv watching through a window as people undress, lol, is that your past time preoccupation, hoping to see someone at there home gyrating, or maybe you'll score and find some people mating! a free triple xxx show in the waitng, just grap the popcorn and binoculars and wait all paitiently, this is a hell of a lot better then that big brother reality, dont have a life to bother with, it's a has bin so i'll just get my fav chair and tune in!.....bla bla this rhyme is seriously screwed up so i'll finish it off and do some more important stuff, oh yeah i forgot to reply to bracesup, his rhyme speaks for itself so it's enough, allright i'll leave you guys yill next time, if you can still be bothered posting your rhymes, no offence meant, get it straight, till next time...stay straight!

Right on!

j.o.e your getting me pissed off, what your saying is way off, beside the point 16 or 23 lines(yours), who seriously gives a ****, all that matters is if the words fit, if they exemplify your wit, your gonna sislocate my joints, acting all rough and hard ain't gonna score you any points, i called you out so we could have a real contest, a slug fest, but your a mess, launching all this crap at me, none of it makes sense honey, you gotta put yourself together, get your head screwed on a hell of a lot better, cause the way your rhyming now is killing me, no way thriling me, like a clown show that never ends, giving you nightmares that'll never end, dude, get your mouth in place, your mind together so you don;t look like a basket case. or disgrace, cause thats what it looks like to me, you understand the gist of waht im saying joey, dont make me wack that smug ass of yours now, listen to waht i say now, or i'll force you to throw in the towel, cya

will for president!

It’s been a bit of time since my last reply, No I diden’t die, I wanna make this reply potent, Make it good enough to quote it, Sorry bout the corniness last time But it was truly a freestyle, almost every line, No j.o.e I don’t hope to shine all the time, As I said, it was the first thing that came to mind, If I took some more time you’d acknowledge it was more sophisticated But this is the way I wanna do it, I don’t care if u hate it Fail I like the line I’ll talk to God before you go ahead and pray it, I like that, not ashamed to say it, But brace killed me, Come on, made me laugh is more like what he did to me, Rapping about my funeral and his puny dick, No offence brace, but those lines were pretty ****, Anyway I’ve gotta get some sleep, Got my exams in 3 days, and 2 next week, I don’t wanna fail, so I’ll cya’s all later, now all hail! Cya’s

Thats awesome man. And it was intersting-i wanted to keep reading what came next, which is a really good sign

You have the courage to respond, I admire that, this wont take long, I’m gonna rip you apart like I stated, I told you your destiny is fated, To trip over like you did before, Man ya gonna look worn Like a right hand to ya jaw, But you want more, o.k. that’s your decision, you got no vision, got ya wishing, gloves off, I’ll start my dissing: i am sick and tired of all this crap, i'm gonna take you out with my hands behind my back, that's a fact, i'm gonna reduce you to a vanilla, i'm gonna gonna get you praying to the buddha, or allah or if u believe in nothing get you wishing for karma, your fate's been predicted, but this battle's got u addicted, give up now the time's right, rip upart your mike how much more can u take, gonna sink like the drake, i'm gonna expose u as a flake, i'm gonna make u pray, you have had your day, wish it diden't turn out this way, but you coulden't let go, beaten by the ego, lost your flow, now the show's over, move over,

i've returned to tear you to shreads, a little more and you'll be needing your feds, i'm a gonna give you another chance, one more dance, i'm gonna start this show begin the expo make you like wow show you what it's all about remove the doubt i wanna set the spark to the fire, do it like kanye west doen to the wire, set the bar higher, i'm gonna show the real players from the liars, let the show now get started, let the fakes be carted, they ain't ever gonna be charted let the real contenders now take their place, but let them now make some space, as the mak has entered the race, i'm gonna get ya all pumped as you've never been, as excited as you've ever been seen get you to put your hands up get you all pumped, i'm gonna get y'all to grin, ask where this guys bin, ask if theres any ghostwriting, but there ain't no ghostwritning, so just take it on your chin, acknowledge the real thing,

not bad huh? i'm kind of proud of myself!

guys sorry for the delay of mine, but cause of the delay i'll make this damm fine, pay attetion y'all line by line: im gonna give everybody what they be wanting to hear, that brace should be slappd on his fat ugly rear, you dont want that mushy mushy stuff dear o.k. its on, but you gotta put on your defences, as with this rap on you i'll pass my sentence, i'm gonna send you back to your mummy, screaming for mercy, i dont think your gunna be able to take this much longer, more and more becoming a wonder, come down under and i'll wack you in a real batle, your probably one of those stange freaks who like heavy meatle, i'm like the president, the king, an assassin in this rap ring, it aint my aim but easy to get the bling, joe, you wanted some dignity, o.k. but i'll still ace you so easily, don't wanna brag but i'm looking like a prodigy, i'm scoring all the 3 point plays, all the slam dunks, as jeff says the brand new funk , i'm gonna trip you in every verse you brake, make the people like quit for goodness sake, a crowd i'll get as excited as they can, show tem who's the man, give them their adrenalin blast, leave my opponents in a cast, leave my enemies in a rut as to how they can combat me, they'all all be out ideas so they gotta launch crap at me, cant find a decent way to diss this, wish they could do this, the lyrical trpohy is is in it's rightfull place, no longer in the hands of those that disgrace

p.s. i realise the irony of me cursing previously! don't point that out , i just wanted to do something along the lines of will's lost and found

this aint no front no front, no stunt, i'm gonna show you how fine poetry is done, how it's created every line is weighted, verses fated, your gonna like the way i do this, cause i'm going to do this delicatley, patiently, you guys rapping about all ya sex tapes and how ya gunna make me pay, get out of my way, as Will would attest, profanity aint needed by the best, if ya aint got anything good to say then don't say nothing, if ya abide by that rule you won't end up sucking, cause the weak rappers are the ones that must curse, cause theyre minds so thick they gotta think the worst, the most influential rhymes never need that, trying to look all tough and hard everybody seen that, rhymes are meant to be real, to that everybody will relate, do that and your rhymes will never date,

joe joe joe here we again go at it, by now i would have thought you'd had it, given up, thrown your towel in, but you want to hold up ya chin , your a persistent little ****, but your gonna need my good will kit, you say you've got a licence to thrill, you aint no james bond dill, your rhymes are way over the hill, your subject matter in over kill, you say that im whack and you gunna split my teeth, oohhhh scary scary, thats your best beef, yes i did say you had the best skillz, but how many rappers have skillz \how many gigs do they fill, and brace why you copying switch now, that aint your song clown, do your own thing now, dont't let me go over then and slap you now, man what aphrodesiac have ya been taking brace, your getting more horney every line you make, man, lol, what the hell are you sippin, can you even see what the hell your spitting?

brace your getting all horny, please, no body wants to see your scenery, and you’ve got a girl, the very thought makes me churl, please help her please, i hope she doesn’t catch some disease like herpies, ewww, girls run away, cause the freak brace wants to horseplay

your trying to lift your game joe, but your so impotent you need ginko, but as a favor I’ll respond, cause there’s a chance your more clever than a dumb blond, you seriously need help to ‘get jiggy with it’ as it were, man your rhyme is more boring then Chaucer, But it would seriously be amusing to see, Who’s stupider, you or martin sheen, Im gonna out rap ever verse you make, After reading this your wind’ll brake, Oops, guess it already has