J-o-e

look at this, your stalling u cant help it, but your fallin u may not kno it, must trust me i curse coz who hasnt cursed at me? its simply ur raps are all the same mine i keep sane, with an aim to shame your an early cat, i can handle that he dont kno bout rap, ill pin him to the mat make him tap, why u rappin bout rappers who never heard of u they dont even wana word out of u, ill put word on u ok, we in a will smith forum, thats all cool but i aint gonna tell kids, drop outta school be a fool dont want them to have the same mistakes i did battlin off so many haters, no money makers when i was a kid i do agree with ur issues, but ur needed tissues how could u misuse? for that i must abuse.... its not my fault, i start beef, break teeth brush em off my shoulder just like a leaf.... ur rhymes are new school which mine are old i dont care coz imma be writing the game thats told... give me one day, imma grow the top cant stop till i drop it like its hot, i'd like to be known as a songwriter, not a lyrical fighter, making my game even more tighter understand every line, every rhyme, and every dime go into be progressin, but its a blessin, i took it as a sign now take yours and see who's is flawless, every night savin up just to get that cordless infra red micrphone...without any wires now i feel like Prince and Bago who gets fired... from this board of ours, no flashy cars, just ordinary people, cant take that then step back, j-o-e with the hat tilted back....

have a good 1 cookies!!!!

lol thats ok, ill reply soon

i do care if im a lyrical mess my flows perfect, come on and test bracesup, how many battle we had? some were ok, mine was good, urs was bad haters can brush they shoulders coz im the one pushin these boulders so much pressure on my back talkin bout little pricks, little dicks dont mean jack u sick if u wanted to make love to a fiction character now u find ur self a role model? aint u a rapper?

your flows confused me, ur frenteic hows that genetic? when ur plain pathetic let me start off with one really good line to kick your ass, one simple rhyme there only clinic u going to is a drug one stop taking that crack, its no more fun didnt ya'll think i'll respond to this? its the best gyst, a battle diss

I Liked that verse more than the other 2....but i still loved the other 2 haha

theres really not much u can say coz every single rhyme, wont go away rhymes bad and good, there always racing u never kno u can beat me, look who im facin its ridicilous how sh!t came to this ive never responded violently, without a fist always talk first then see if u can walk if u can, then ur the type of sicko who will stalk im sorry to interupt ur little B!tchin session but look at the master, just take a lesson its all ya need, to get the flow and the content explicit or not it dont matter cause im doing this constent i hope in a few years ill be rich and laugh at ya'll heavy day workin, just wana chill out and play basketball its a shame that the game aint the same its all strange rappin isnt rappin anymore, its completlely changed if u dont completely rip ur oppenet, u get ripped imma get pushed over the edge, i might of flipped but thats a matter that i have to take in my own hands im a man and the plan aint the same, i dont understand whats the difference between 2 lines and 20 lines? like the difference between 20 songs and 1 good rhyme its a mistake, i dont mean to break, your concentration might get too excited, kicks in the penetration call me whatever you like, coz honestly i dont care i cant bare that all the money i earn, i have to share its none of your problems, so why take it out on ya? if i flow for ya? maybe do a little show for ya? would u like it if i rap quick, rhymes so sick times running out, and all i can hear is that tock click....

why even compare the two, Jay z in my opinoin one of the greatest rappers who will ever live, hate him or love him, it just goes down to will write his lyrics, but jay z freestyles, two different styles and ya'll tryin to say whos better, and how can people stick up for jay z when this is a FRESH PRINCE column, its sorta stupid coz most of the majority who are involved with this post havent heard a jay z album at all. they have heard all his singles yeah....but albums? reasonable doubt i believe was a classic, a straight hip hop classic, the black album was an instant classic....but how can u compare will smiths "Lost and Found" against Jay Z "The Black Album" two different sorts of rap, and Jay z is a reality rapper because of the words hes saying in the black album, he was discribing what he went thru when he was still hustlin etc......but im not going to get in this arguement, i just think 3 pages for this sort of arguement is stupid, theres so many different points about each artist its like asking whos better, Doug E Fresh and Mobb Deep.

thanks

i liked it aswell.....cant wait 4 da audio

Get Em High - Kanye West Ft/ Talilb Kewli

loved it, storytelling is the best form of hip hop, keep it up

its about 2 of my best mates going to prision so....

thats how u went down elementary to penitentary from sellin rocks down town than be a rap mecernary (x2) aint it funny how **** changes fast we was once first, but now we last its a shame when talented men who's beated coz its how they rolled back then if someone touches u, we touched him eye an eye, back for a back but now to me u dont mean jack ok first thing to do is go to school then go to jail, no bail coz ur a fool i know u woulda loved to spit a verse but i did it first, without spillin a curse and the elementary couldnt prepare you it was just to get u ready, coz it scared you how can u learn to just fall? now tell me if u need a chat, just call u kno my number, so dont be so selffish remember ya'll alergic to shellfish ya girlfriend be freakin everyday but we set her straight and she goes astray aint it funny just yesterday i saw u in ur house now ur locked up, like a mouse tell me u still gonna be doing drugs cold turkey, we was misunderstood for thugs we made a village into a ghetto when from 2 dollar S**t to hollywood h*s but when u sittin in that 8 by 8 cell just rememba, u be out soon and we all livin well...haha chorus homie even in prision get ya hustle dont take it like a bitch, start ya bustle as b said, can u feel it in the air drinkin, smokin like u jus dont care need to learn, but boy u got burned try to be the best, it wasnt my turn coz its the elementary that got u wastin away i knew u never was afraid, see a better day i talked to ya moma, no more drama aint no high hopes for u comin back for the summer but homie ill pick u up in the ride u wanted homie imma get it for u then u can flaunt it.... we were homies since i was about 6 yrs old now u being sentenced, laws heart is cold but ill talk in bold, for u to come back u family misses u, we miss u, its whack ur standing against the system but he musta missed him, when he dissed him who ya'll think taught me to rap? who u think made me tough coz of one slap ive read the rules and they screwed to the beefs i had wit u, man that was a petty fude in my heart, u the man who had my reactions watchin ova my transactions, consiqence of my actions it happened, i started rapping, and u in jail isit hell in that cell when u cant get bail? and the snitch that u called a bitch he gonna suffer coz now coz i wana get filthy rich believe dat chorus

Ali? Julie u got me confused in where thats from, i swear ive seen it!!!!

:ditto: i liked the flow also, and the wordplay was good.

imma just do a little sumthin sumthin.... different people different rhymes different situations, different times things damn changed, the game aint the same if u got no fame no one understands the underground coz this is gotta hit harder than "lost and found" the particular rhymes i kick when i grap i mic, i spit its not my fault that i flow victory better than a kids poem than hickory dickory homie the courts switch to my offensce but dont get too sad, ur on defence im attackin and swiging all i can back to the wall, am i man? its funny coz my life is full of ups and downs went from gettin high, to rappin around clowns believe me this is no joke, all i need is a hit just one way to show my wit, cant forfiet im +running against time+, musics in my blood try and battle me, all i say is urs is a dud mentally im a hard worker, it just aint working went from, playa hatin to money makin, no jerkin around homie imma spit untill i die untill i cry, untill u lie, come on how u gonna match to this shoulda won the last battle, i cant handle 1 diss i made battlin in this place where it is no i wonder can i handle the show biz? sick of these short flows, short shows went from, clean girlfriends to dirty H-o's i dont mean to curse in this verse its just not my problem if im in a hearse crazy im lazy, shoulda gotta job at 1 time instead of forgettin about money, 1 rhyme regrettin in how i will live, i can stay here i wish i could but ma, i cant stay here look in the eyes of your baby boy when i was born, u shoulda born a mic as a toy then maybe i woulda finished this already but the pressures buildin, ready steady.....

Nice deep song there will is ill, rhyming was great, and i got the grade and day first time i read it

Beanie Seagal - Feel It In The Air

the stuff i was able to read was good, translate!!

Men In Black easy, cant believe i didnt see it before and the hint, agent k says haha my turn : "U Go 90 and i go 10, u dont go the whole hundred"

oh i voted for jay z, and i have heard rakim's stuff, Jay z does the same what every other rapper u name does, talk about his life, clamin he ain't good enough, whats jay z done that rakim hasnt, became a preisednt of def jam/roc a fella, succesfull clothing line, roc a wear, successfull platnuim albums, part owner of a new york sports team, Jay z is an inspiration to me, and i think a will smith jay z track would be great to hear, just because jay z doesnt spit as much knowledge as LL, Rakim, etc, because he makes his life, all rappers are writing a story to tell us, and hip hop is the greatest forms of story telling ever, whoever u hear in hip hop, somehow and someway they are telling you a story about what happened to them, what happened to a friend, etc,

thanks

Happy For Ya Ted....sorta the same for me!!

The Game has been my fav. artist from aftermath/shady for ages...ever since he came out a few years ago