fan 4ever Posted January 3, 2007 Report Share Posted January 3, 2007 I haven't written a song in a long time...but what everything going on my life right now I felt like writing! Let me know what y'all think! (oh Yeah, the chorus is from the Lupe Fiasco song "The Instrumental") ______________________________ Stars & Scars Chorus x 2 Now you can’t tell me just who you are You buying them clothes just to hide those scars You built that roof just to hide those stars Now you can’t take it back to the start Verse 1 A million question are bouncing through me mind And the answers are locked up, really hard to find Lesson learned from the mistakes I’ve made Don’t ever EVER loose your faith I’m a sucker for love with no backbone A home is just a house when the love is gone I’m counting my blessings and learning my lessons While we fade away like intersections We wane be lovers but don’t know what romance is Ready for the long run but don’t know what the plan is Can this…really be going on Or am I…just making it up in this song When lips come together they do one thing Separate cause it would only be a one night fling My eyes are red and my cheeks feel wet Cause you like a metaphor…you hard to get Chorus x 2 Now you can’t tell me just who you are You buying them clothes just to hide those scars You built that roof just to hide those stars Now you can’t take it back to the start Verse 2 You’re my sunlight in the middle of the night And my moonlight in the broad day light… You just don’t make sense! And I’m feeling a little les confident I know I’m loosing my strength Hit my head against the wall, it’s a dead end And I wane be more than just a friend The weakness of the heart is what keeps us apart That’s why you can’t take it back to the start I laugh and I cry, live and I die While this life is passing me by I’m breaking the rules and paying my dues Making my moves, try walking a day in my shoes I’m covered with sadness and blackness Cause life doesn’t look too attractive The matter of fact is, I’m affected By my love you rejected, neglected So I’m taking this feeling and eject it Cause I tried but failed to perfect it Chorus x 2 Now you can’t tell me just who you are You buying them clothes just to hide those scars You built that roof just to hide those stars Now you can’t take it back to the start Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted January 3, 2007 Report Share Posted January 3, 2007 That's graet man keep it up, it's good to see you've found something to write about, keep it up man great work!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted January 3, 2007 Report Share Posted January 3, 2007 "I’m a sucker for love with no backbone A home is just a house when the love is gone I’m counting my blessings and learning my lessons While we fade away like intersections We wane be lovers but don’t know what romance is Ready for the long run but don’t know what the plan is" - Absolutely awesome. Period. "My eyes are red and my cheeks feel wet Cause you like a metaphor…you hard to get" - please explain that 1st line to me. That 2nd was nice. Good usage. "I laugh and I cry, live and I die While this life is passing me by I’m breaking the rules and paying my dues Making my moves, try walking a day in my shoes I’m covered with sadness and blackness Cause life doesn’t look too attractive The matter of fact is, I’m affected By my love you rejected, neglected So I’m taking this feeling and eject it Cause I tried but failed to perfect it" - The flow is killer dope. Nice switch up with how you wrote it We should get a FuQ & Tinus reunion in the future, cause you stuff is sharper since the last time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fan 4ever Posted January 4, 2007 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2007 "My eyes are red and my cheeks feel wet Cause you like a metaphor…you hard to get" --> I'm just saying that I was crying... Thanx 4 the comments!! Anyone else? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted January 4, 2007 Report Share Posted January 4, 2007 The matter of fact is, I’m affected By my love you rejected, neglected So I’m taking this feeling and eject it Cause I tried but failed to perfect it Now thats sick. Keep it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ash trey Posted January 4, 2007 Report Share Posted January 4, 2007 "I laugh and I cry, live and I die While this life is passing me by I’m breaking the rules and paying my dues Making my moves, try walking a day in my shoes I’m covered with sadness and blackness Cause life doesn’t look too attractive The matter of fact is, I’m affected By my love you rejected, neglected So I’m taking this feeling and eject it Cause I tried but failed to perfect it" Wow! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fan 4ever Posted January 7, 2007 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2007 Thanx 4 the comments y'all! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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