Admin Hero1 Posted January 4, 2007 Admin Report Share Posted January 4, 2007 you inebriate to alleviate pain seeps through and penetrates hate peeps through your inner state reflected inward is a deeper state a coccoon of emotions shelled at a higher rate trudging up a river to a lighter state its hard to become alive when your dealt with fate broken branches leave bleeding trees inate abilties flowing through these inner seas divisive currents sub serviant numbers pulled out of the inner eye, is that where they truly lie luckless life where demons reside and thrive before you die minds spinning from this dizzy ride left to wonder why the days go flying by, progression sitting idly by wishing spite would sprite into action just for a distraction little satisfaction no fruit from angry factions lacking tact and basic understanding ranting and raving with damning accusations its nothing new and sad but true the closer you head for eventual death you begin to care less and less Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted January 4, 2007 Report Share Posted January 4, 2007 That's just once again great. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted January 4, 2007 Report Share Posted January 4, 2007 What is a 5 cent word to describe this rhyme? - HOT. Tim you've got amazing wordplay every time I see you post something. "pain seeps through and penetrates hate peeps through your inner state reflected inward is a deeper state a coccoon of emotions shelled at a higher rate" - Truth. "pulled out of the inner eye, is that where they truly lie luckless life where demons reside and thrive before you die minds spinning from this dizzy ride left to wonder why" - That's deep "its nothing new and sad but true the closer you head for eventual death you begin to care less and less " - Something that makes ya go whoa. Simply because truth just slapped you in the face. I read that verse again and seen that title. That was creative. Do you ever plan on recording something Tim? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted January 4, 2007 Author Admin Report Share Posted January 4, 2007 thanks guys I havent written anything in months.. thats all i got out of me in 5 minutes.. I'd record if I had a professional mic..and I could rap :4-only1ha: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted January 5, 2007 Report Share Posted January 5, 2007 for 5 minutes that is impressive! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted January 5, 2007 Report Share Posted January 5, 2007 thanks guys I havent written anything in months.. thats all i got out of me in 5 minutes.. I'd record if I had a professional mic..and I could rap :4-only1ha: if lerkot does audios..you can do it..come on!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted January 5, 2007 Report Share Posted January 5, 2007 ^Oh.. Luigie vs. Lerkot..lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted January 6, 2007 Report Share Posted January 6, 2007 that would be a good battle lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted January 6, 2007 Report Share Posted January 6, 2007 damn guys..you're actin like the media we hate, lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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