Members Daedalus Mortality Posted August 12, 2004 Members Report Share Posted August 12, 2004 (edited) [b]My style of ryming is verry diffrent from most here, but I still wanted to post some verse. (And if you don't like it just tell me so:P) (Sabian is me and Double F is my friend.)[/b] [i]Sabian and Double F// Spit until we got no toungsels left// Until all sides of our loungs connect// and we could stil blow rappers ofa stage// mic and all, whit controlled breath// When i'm runnin past,up your steps and ya mother asks// what i'm doing at yalls adress Ill open up my bomber jack// and ask her what does the bomb sugests?// More or less, Microphones gets smashed to bits// On rappers foreheads, for bringing that avarage sh*t// To me whats apperent is that after you battle this// Youre not taken serious nomore, like marriage is// Mark my words, so when their heard in anothers verse// You can tell it was Sabian, who wrote the bars first// Rappers whole boddies get burned and roasted// untill theire on hospital beds// looking like "the mummy returns" posters// My suspession is that from great distances// I'm able to communicate with indians// cus i smoke someone in every line// whenever im kicking ****. A mystesist// that thinks ghosts and jins exists// The type you smoke insance whit// I'm so self absorbed its redicilous// If you write down and make intertwine// all of the times I pronounced the letter I// you could prolly make a line from Paraguay to Palastine//[/i] Edited August 12, 2004 by Daedalus Mortality Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted August 12, 2004 Report Share Posted August 12, 2004 [quote=Daedalus Mortality,Aug 12 2004, 10:51 PM](And if you don't like it just tell me so:P)[/quote] For real man... I'm going to keep it real with you. By the way, interesting rap name... Where did that come from? Firstly, I'm liking the consistent punch lines through that... "To me whats apperent is that after you battle this// Youre not taken serious nomore, like marriage is//" "untill theire on hospital beds// looking like "the mummy returns" posters//" "I'm so self absorbed its redicilous// If you write down and make intertwine// all of the times I pronounced the letter I// you could prolly make a line from Paraguay to Palastine//" I like those... Funny and yet not over done. Good structure and rhyme scheme, some clever lines in there I had to read twice... The sort of thing that I like to put into my freestyles. There is some room for improvement, although now I've said that and re-read I'm not exactly sure where. I've said to others not to use swear words to rhyme, but oddly enough yours seems to fit with the rest of it. I rhymed it along in my head as I read it, and I can't see any obvious flaws in flow. Last time I saw you rhyme was in early 2002 when I got 2nd place to you in the JJFP fans title back then. You should be in the next battle here... I think you would be quite a strong entry, thinking of how you lay the lyrics down and the aggressiveness in them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Daedalus Mortality Posted August 12, 2004 Author Members Report Share Posted August 12, 2004 (edited) Well [i]Sabian[/i] is actually a brand of drum cymbals :P. And my father is a profecional drummer (Elected best jazz drummer in [i]holland [/i][i]belgium[/i] and [i]luxemburg[/i] a couple of times. :switch: ) And he is sponsored by [i]Sabian[/i]. So he got this pretty expenzive baseball jacket from them (and it says [i]Sabian[/i] really large on the back). And he gave it to me, and I wore it for about 5 years, couse im like really poor myself ;).SO thats how :P Edited August 12, 2004 by Daedalus Mortality Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted August 12, 2004 Report Share Posted August 12, 2004 :ditto: 2 Prince, dope lyrics, dope flow, J-o-e Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted August 13, 2004 Report Share Posted August 13, 2004 Hey I didn't know u rapped! I like it, you should post more often man! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazzy Julie Posted August 14, 2004 Report Share Posted August 14, 2004 yeah man your good, to be honest your better than i thought u would be. How come we have so many talented ppl on here, there might even be more closet rappers we dont know about. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted August 14, 2004 Report Share Posted August 14, 2004 lol Julie I've known about Daedalus Mortality rapping since late 2001. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 14, 2004 Report Share Posted August 14, 2004 Ya right. that was something different. I'm thinkin almost wit a Mobb Deep presence. It was pretty good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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