mfuqua23 Posted April 20, 2007 Report Share Posted April 20, 2007 Ok, here's my notes. Where I Stand - Scratch idea was cool, but it could've been better to scratch lyrics to fit what "Concept" was all about. U had nice aggressiveness, fairly good. Precipitation - Very smart & cool. Production was good, and you being deep. Stop the Clock - Nice sample. Lyrics was cool. I think you could've left the sound effects out on this song. Overall, this track is a fav for me. Coppa - Would've been a lot better if the sample was more rhythmicly sync. If the beat was on, you could've flow'd a lot smoother. Otherwise, this would've been a fav as well. The beat's offness just kept that from happening. Like a Little Kid - One I think most would skip. Since I know a lil better personally, I could get the Mos Def "Children's Story" idea. Apocolypse Now - Vocals should've been lowered. Echo was overdone. I think if you'd a tried different echo technique and levels, the song couuld be better than what it is. Planet Earth - Another track that could've done without sound effects Complete Anatomy- Beat sounded off. Lyrical delivery was cool 2050 - Decent beat. Could've rapped stronger in telling it as a story the way you did. Nice thinking ahead. The Concept Effect - Love the intro. Beat was awesome. Lyrically U were smooth. Probably my most favorite. Blind - Guitar could've been better. Beat thru U off. Sounded like U tried to hard to sing. I could tell your rock band presence a lil bit tho. Writers Block / Inspiration - Felt your honesty. Liked the beat change up. Your parents, I don't know. The 4:35 beat was cool. Lyrics was nice. ----- Lyrics: B Flow: C (U got off, could've delivered some songs better, or approached tracks different. Overall: 3/5 or 6.25/10 I take my hat off to U for all the work U put in. I don't know if your cover matched the sound of your cd. I think you could've allowed photos to be more personal, like "studio" or around friends, in school, etc. The electicness of your beats and lyrics is a skill you could truly take advantage off. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members djemiliot Posted April 22, 2007 Members Report Share Posted April 22, 2007 I"ll check it out Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members yoshiPL Posted December 28, 2007 Members Report Share Posted December 28, 2007 thanks mate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted January 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2008 this is horrible as i look back hahaha. so just wait for my next album. its basically done. all i got to do is record the guests and ill put it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted January 17, 2008 Admin Report Share Posted January 17, 2008 so you have kept improving? nice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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