Members FreshPrinceFan Posted March 23, 2007 Members Report Share Posted March 23, 2007 I call this one I wish... I Wish by: FreshPrinceFan (Spoken) This is a true story, about a girl who never will get the chances we will, I dedicate this to her... Step through the doorway, walk down the aisle Got words to say, hoped they'd make you smile Wasn't prepared for what I would see You in a coffin, layin' peacefully Watched as they loaded you into a hurse Listened to the preacher, as he spoke the verse Followed the car, down the windey road The snow, like your body, was oh so cold As I stand here now looking over your grave I wish somehow, your soul i could save Wanna talk to you, see you, be with you, one more time But since i can't, I wrote this rhyme To express my feelings, say how i feel Wish that that night, i controlled the steering wheel Maybe if i did, could've missed that deer Maybe, just maybe, you'd still be here Hope tonight, by God you stand Then i'll see you again in the Holy Land (Chorus) I wish this feeling, would go away I wish you still stood here today I wish that you could truly see What your presence did for me I wish you could come back someday I wish you never would've gone away Nobody knows, but some may relate The actions I show, are caused by hate Those first nights, I was an absolute wreck God held tight, kept my emotions in check It's by his Grace, i'm still alive From that day, I promised to strive To spread his word, help those in pain Those whose feelings, are the same As mine were, however, i still miss you badly Look at your picture and i cry sadly, get mad b Why'd this have to happen to me I still wish, your beautiful face i could see Those of you, who have felt similar pain Please do not try to do the same As I did, you'll fall, you'll crumble You'll have to crawl cause you done stumbled Come humble, to the Lord Jesus' feet Stay awhile, sit down, c'mon, take seat Listen the first time, don't make me repeat Though I will if i need to, just to see who Will get saved, the way's been paved By me twice now, I told you how to get there You can't ask how I done told you, so i'm done now I'ma let the chorus hold it down, now (Repeat chorus 2x) I wish this feeling, would go away I wish you still stood here today I wish that you could truly see What your presence did for me I wish you could come back someday I wish you never would've gone away Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted March 23, 2007 Report Share Posted March 23, 2007 ablosutely beautiful. I enjoyed reading this, and it was very touching. Great job. on this particular line: Wish that that night, i controlled the steering wheel ...Maybe change it to Wish on that night, I controlled the steering wheel. and what does this line mean... the last letter standing alone...i didnt quite understand your msg.. Look at your picture and i cry sadly, get mad b keep up the great work... xoxo, cookie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted March 23, 2007 Report Share Posted March 23, 2007 Like Cookies said great job on that! Any plans to record? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members FreshPrinceFan Posted March 23, 2007 Author Members Report Share Posted March 23, 2007 Yeah Brakes i am in the process of doing that within the next few weeks with this song i put on here Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted March 23, 2007 Report Share Posted March 23, 2007 Make sure you post it up here! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Tiger Posted March 23, 2007 Report Share Posted March 23, 2007 Yeah, nice job. Pretty darn good. God Blessa! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members FreshPrinceFan Posted March 27, 2007 Author Members Report Share Posted March 27, 2007 Thanks guys, i'm in the process of recording that song so it'm looking forward to posting the audio on here Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted March 27, 2007 Report Share Posted March 27, 2007 It's very good. Cookie's.. He's using "B", for.. you know.. "Bee..", "Baby".. I guess. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members mireille ethers Posted March 29, 2007 Members Report Share Posted March 29, 2007 Lovely. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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