Pakalicous Posted March 25, 2007 Report Share Posted March 25, 2007 What's up people? Just recorded a new song.. Got the snippet for you to download :wickedwisdom: A different kind this time because many people started to say i was getting soft and made only party songs and love songs .. So I made a song that is very personal to me... I co-produced this song with my producer Jason Dean.. Just waiting the hook to arrive from sweden.. Hope ya'll like it... And please give me some feedback this time.. hehe. I almost never get any.. Pakalicous aka Abu - Past Present Future Lyrics: Past-Present-Future Verse 1 - Past i was not born in the slums, not raised in ghetto but i started off bad, with hands dirty like a con fellow hello, never wanted to do this gangster **** Cuz i couldnt do what gangsters did Growing up, I almost had no money to spend Used to use the time only on wanting some friends wanting some hands, to help me jump over the fence But a big pakistani was to funny to them I didnt give a ****, like i was supposed to do I made friends, who would never be close to you take the fall for you, do it all for you like everybody else wanna do it all for cool Started smoking the grass, started drinking the glass tryied to show those mother****ers how be kicking some asses my homies came for the rescue, i owe them And there is nothing in the world i couldnt do fo them Peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pakalicous Posted March 27, 2007 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2007 hehe.. Really? No one? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bart5 Posted March 28, 2007 Report Share Posted March 28, 2007 Pretty good first verse. Seems to be a pretty personal song. Your flow and rhymes were good, and I think you have some potential. I didn't really like the beat though, and I was a little confused about one thing. When you said your homies came to your rescue, do you mean that you got into a gang fight or are you just talking about how your friends are really close to you? Anyways, you did a nice job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pakalicous Posted March 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2007 Pretty good first verse. Seems to be a pretty personal song. Your flow and rhymes were good, and I think you have some potential. I didn't really like the beat though, and I was a little confused about one thing. When you said your homies came to your rescue, do you mean that you got into a gang fight or are you just talking about how your friends are really close to you? Anyways, you did a nice job. Thanks man.. I was talking how they helped me get out of some situations that was in.. If they didnt do that, then maybe i would be on the streets selling drugs and stuff.. So yeah it was about how close they are to me.. Peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bart5 Posted March 28, 2007 Report Share Posted March 28, 2007 (edited) Pretty good first verse. Seems to be a pretty personal song. Your flow and rhymes were good, and I think you have some potential. I didn't really like the beat though, and I was a little confused about one thing. When you said your homies came to your rescue, do you mean that you got into a gang fight or are you just talking about how your friends are really close to you? Anyways, you did a nice job. Thanks man.. I was talking how they helped me get out of some situations that was in.. If they didnt do that, then maybe i would be on the streets selling drugs and stuff.. So yeah it was about how close they are to me.. Peace Cool dude, I'm glad to hear that. Thats definitely a good message, and what real friends do. Edited March 28, 2007 by bart5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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