Ace Of Spades Posted August 26, 2007 Report Share Posted August 26, 2007 My rhymes iz terminal in every sense of da word i gotta hit da pad, since all we got is da curb im haukin up mucus and spitin it at these losers when u destroy, destroy completely, da laws of rulers i got bars 4 days like a gym these is my foot soakin flos, u don't wanna see me swim feelin hopeless cuz nobody recognizes me feelin like I got evil hatchin up inside of me iz da best rapper since Pac somethin Ima have 2 die to be if so, oh well, who wanna ride wit me im so sick of livin in this prision no cell bars 2 see my vision jus rapper intution but in da dark i still hit da mark wit precision dont stress, even tho I probably curse before I bless jus az real as my dad iz in eternal rest Im ressurectin da real, and burnin da rest an i kno my message is contreversial but Im BA, even tho it hurts 2 not be admitted 2 da O.R even tho Im so surgical but not too many niggas operating these days are aint lookin 4 perfect days, just somethin betta than these days are momma kno an I kno that she raised a star i thank GOD homie, i don't praise no stars cuz wit a hot album, guess da outcome I'll be where they are that aint 2 say that I dont wanna spit wit niggas like Jay but reguardless how happy i seem, i can't jus up an forget da past like K but da saddest part about it iz suicide, i thought about it but Im more concerned wit my kids and how they gon walk up out it scarred 4 life, they can't pay that price **** I couldn't deal wit it if my dad died twice an if mama ever pass away i pray 4 whoever pass my way an that they watch what they say or da AK will spray im am mentally sick, but u should kno dis **** it shows itself in every ryhme, no matta how I flow da **** an my life in general I can't cope wit who knows if Id be alive if GOD didn't bless me wit dopest **** i write every one of these ryhmes like my last testament that's why I talk about so much 2 da best that i can spit my gravestone seems too invitin we need more than jus that west 2 be re-unitin we need 2 be a united people, 2 face what we fightin tha devil in flesh R we even fightin the devil yes but even I got sins, i must confess an yes, Im a repeated offender hell raiser born in december how god gon' destine the hottest 2 be born in winter I started out so innocent and lively now I don't kno what's worse tha demons inside of me, or what I might DIE tryin 2 be im a painful poet, not really a rapper persay i just kno how 2 rip a beat wit wordplay so in dis closin arguement, I'd like 2 state what can come from a baby feed hate and at what rate, does he begin 2 make mistakes an iz it death he'll face, before he completes his first tape does god's favorite goe thru hell before the well or am I a dellusional bastard, BORN 2 FAIL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted September 17, 2007 Report Share Posted September 17, 2007 Damn man that some strong sh!t, keep it up let the emotions fall off man it really is the best way, to be honest when reading it seems that u mentioned your fathers death twice, which is cool but when we listen we gonna be like "Well we just heard that" u know, but its your song and its dope... Keep it up homie! J-o-e Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace Of Spades Posted September 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 thanks man. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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