Members Hip-Hop/Rap Contact Posted November 19, 2007 Members Report Share Posted November 19, 2007 {Talk Intro} Lord You Gotta Talk Back On This One. {Female Singer Chorus} Aint Nothin Bout This Country That Aint Goin Wrong Jesus Help Us All, We Aint Got Nothin To Survive! You Are The Way The Truth And The Light You Are The Reason We Will Win This Fight! {Hook} Ive Fought The Good Fight, Ive Won The Race All Ive Done At Such A Slow Pace To Easy To Where You Have No Clue Its Like Ashes To Ashes Dust To Dust, You Don’t Know What Theyre Leavin Behind For All Of Us {Verse} Live Each Day Like Its Your Last Don’t Stop Your Lyfe Short In The Past Your Future Is Not Set In Stone Accidents Can Happen Even If You Aint Prone It Aint Un Usual To Get Boned By Your Best Friend You Could Get Stabbed In The Back By Your Best Friend Your Best Friend Could Be The Death Of You And Someone In Your Own Family Could To Face It Your Lyfe Aint Perfect You Got To Ease Up Though Before you Get Frost Bit By The Girl you Thought Was The One But In the End She Was Just With You for Fun Then It Happens Your Sleeping With Her Sister In The End Though Its Just To Get Her Pissed Off So Shell never Speak To You Again But Don’t be To Sure Because Your Life Just Ended She Murdered You Because Of all You Put Her Through Wasn’t Such A Good Idea Now Was It Spu? You Were To Packed Up With Hatred But Now She Has To Face The Facts Of What She Did {Chorus} {Verse} It’s the ladys Part Of The Song now The Girl That Blew Her Boy Friends Head off But Why Girl Because he Slep Arround? After You Were Gone He Thought He Was Safe And Sound Your Facing Charges of Murder in The First Degree All Signs Point To You, But You Still Plea Not Guilty You Are In Court For 2 Straight Years Being Held In Jail You Realize What you’ve Done And Change Your Plea, But Theres Still No Bail You Hate How Small Your Cell is And The Food Is Stale Your Sentencing Hearing Is To Day, Youll Be Put To Death It Was Stupid Of you To Kill Somebody In Texas They Have The Death Penalty and They Actually use it (God your Stupid) You Have your Choise Of Injection Or Gas And You Reject It Every Day, But In The End It Was You You Stupid Ass Its been 25 years And Your Exicution Is In 3 days And You Don’t think that they can do that to you So You Start swallowing Razor Blades And You Go To The Hospital And That Buys you A Few Extra Days But You Die In A Week a More Painful Death Than You Would Have Had And now your Life Was Looked At As “So Sad” {Chorus} {Verse} Now Im Going To Tell You Both Where you Went Wrong You Denied Jesus Christ As Your Lord And Savior You Lived Life As An Agnostic With Noone To Save Ya Now You Both Are Burning In Hell Its An Eternal Death That You Can Never Appeal You Chose Satan Over Yeshewa And Now Your Payin Your Going to Spend Eternity Diein Just Because You Spent Your Whole Life Liein… {Hook} {Chorus} {Outro} This Was Not A True Story, But It is To Get People To Realize How Much They Need Jesus, Living You life In Jesus Is An Option With two Choices, Heaven Or Hell, Hell is Eayser To Get To, But remember This, Life Has Many Choices Eternity Only has Two… ----------------------------------------------------- Im Not Sure If Im Going To Go All The Way WIth This Song Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted December 1, 2007 Report Share Posted December 1, 2007 Reminds me a bit of 2pac. Which seems rather obvious from ur sig and stuff. Everything was cool. You put together a nice chorus and hook. I liked how you used examples to tell a story and make a point. The only small flaw I have for this song is, "They Have The Death Penalty and They Actually use it (God your Stupid)" - You're trying to convince people to learn right from wrong, and empower religious beliefs as the way out or for help. All that's ok, but just take out the "God, you're stupid". Maybe instead say "That's so stupid". But other than that, all the verses is ok. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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