mfuqua23 Posted September 3, 2004 Report Share Posted September 3, 2004 This will be one of the songs on my ?double disc? album. 'Human Nature'. I'm using Nas "The Second Coming" Instrumental 4 it. Check it out. [i]Sept. 2, 2004 (10:55 p.m. - 12:15 a.m.)[/i] The dayz feel so strange in the way times change So do my actions and I gotta explain how I came Blame me, feel so deranged when I'm speakin my freedom God's here 4 everyone, and I chose 2 believe Him Proceed into the story with all facts, nothing's a riddle Blessed with the care of strong medicine, but not in a hospital With little time 2 prepare, being born premature All went wrong b4 and after, when it began on the floor She feel a pressure of pains in place 4 the sex games Temptation 2 much so hurried it up in the fast lane The only brother 2 help out, was that of a sibling But in a blanket, kick me away, gave me bad breathing Calling the Life Lite Helicopter in flight U weren't there, but feel it'z presence with this lyrical recite Fight it, the pain has scarred me, so I could never let go The scenario on Houston Street, I Came From God's Ghetto CHORUS: Can't believe it'z the way that I live Comin outta that crib 'It'z all good kid' Couldn't look at me as a future child prodigy So the chance of survival seemed less than probably Put us both thru it 4 nothing, should've just had the abortion 2 weeks, then out the door, I need regular supporting In court, just then, I'd have some type of family again Catch em during a new life and making amend I have no problem with my reflection, but they do wit complextion Constantly testing, and asking the questions I'd stay'd the same with everything that I knew And it'z hard 2 ask about my past comin outta the blue My concerns grow as I get older Gotta refresh my steps, so when I look back, nothin seems like a blur Ain't no art of storytellin, I'm rockin da ears about my birth, August 2nd, 1986 the year Kept me here 4 somethin' and 2 scars show The beginning of me Came From God's Ghetto CHORUS Look at me now, I don't feel like a ghetto inhabitant But I know where it started, and I will never 4get Imagine it if I was still there, always doin something wrong Can't be touched, invincible, but that wouldn't last long On the hill, keepin it real with all the dealers Desperate needs 4 money, becoming one of the stealers Bein a playa, gettin wit girls, the most sexy appealers Or bein dangerous wit a gun, becoming the most feared killers 2 be the one that kept that riot, instead of bein quiet Instead of having good, having evil excitement Luckly, that'z not me, easy 4 u 2 believe but it'z ok wit me cuz I got goals 2 achieve Rhyme 4 a reason, believe in the future Vibe and listen at the same time, love the way I move ya There it is, full effection of a flow wit a rapper who Cam From God's Ghetto CHORUS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted September 3, 2004 Report Share Posted September 3, 2004 that was one of the best i have ever seen you wrote, its dope, the lyrics is tight and the flow maybe even flighter, i enjoyed reading this, and i was wondering if you are going to speak the chorus or rap it? or getting a singer sing it? whats your ideas on the chorus because it is quite short if u rap it, my thoughts J-o-e Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted September 3, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2004 Well, the chorus actually gets said 4 times. I might come up wit something more, but it'z cool like that. Thanks man. Feedback appreciate. I can't wait 2 put it down this weekend. Then I'm one step closer to finishing the album. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted September 3, 2004 Report Share Posted September 3, 2004 I'm looking forward to the audio! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted September 3, 2004 Report Share Posted September 3, 2004 I like the song a lot, I like that you like to let the audience know about your life through your songs, a lot of rappers are fake but you rap straight from the heart, keep on flowing! :clap: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted September 3, 2004 Report Share Posted September 3, 2004 :ditto: he aint fake Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted September 4, 2004 Admin Report Share Posted September 4, 2004 yo that is deep... well done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted September 4, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2004 Prince - I might put this up on soundclick. I certainly have plenty 2 choose from. bigted - actually I think I rap about this part of my past too much. But I always seem 2 present it in a variation. I think this is my best one. I don't know if U can say alot R fake. They just all seem 2 be cut from the same mold. Or they advance so much in the industry, they 4get where they came from. J-o-e - even if I was or tried 2 be, it be so hard. My rap career would be over b4 it even started. Some of my older raps almost make me seem like that, and I don't feel those as much. But I never took it so far, I would be like, this is SO not me. I feel better being successful by being myself. Hero1 - yeah. I rapped it back a bit last nite. I really feel I can grab my audience wit this one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loco Posted September 8, 2004 Report Share Posted September 8, 2004 It' deeper than the Deep Blue Sea! I'm looking forward to hear ya album! My Album is mastered! Me and my potnaz will do a little promo for our album. And than we will make a releasejam! Your name is in my thank yous!!! Because this straight from the heart thing, it helped me a lot. one Luv Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted September 8, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2004 Whoa. Good luck on dat album. Is it like almost a major underground step 4 U? U can't go wrong if U rap what U know and feel. Plus it doesn't hurt 2 have creativity. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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