Frenetic Posted September 3, 2004 Report Share Posted September 3, 2004 (edited) This is part 1 in a series of rhymes called "In the cause of Lyricism". It's a series packed with complex rhyming technique and structure of the text. this is really the most simple- Sometimes i come up with really ill punchlines. Sometimes i fortget 'em, sometimes i write 'em down. This is a collection of last weeks punclines, wrapped in a keystyle with kinda wack slow, but nice rhymes, alot of multiple syllables for those likeing that. Peeace! You dehumanize me with your sentiments - I’m a pull the race card and slit your face off with the edge of it - Lets keep separate spaces so I can flip my monologue - See there’s no room for mistakes like a trophy hall - Most of all its my ego that needs a breather - whenever I’m taking out the "scumbags" like full vacuum cleaners - I deter cats that say I don’t rhyme good - Haters should know I raise hell like damien’s childhood - I whoop you no matter who you are - I deliver assault and batteries to show you who’s in charge - I pull your card because your just a hoax - You can’t match me so I’m a make you go up in smoke - Someone must have hoped for a big surprise - and like a parachutist with a cold I was a blessing in the skies - I won’t stop dropping punch-lines ‘til the war is won - Now your life’s hanging by a thread like losers at forums - Edited September 3, 2004 by Frenetic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted September 3, 2004 Admin Report Share Posted September 3, 2004 ha! i like the last line welcome back frenetic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted September 3, 2004 Report Share Posted September 3, 2004 :thumb: That's Cool!!!!! welcome back Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted September 3, 2004 Report Share Posted September 3, 2004 Nice rhyme. Great flow. Keep it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted September 3, 2004 Report Share Posted September 3, 2004 Interesting... Like Tim, I like the final punch line. Nice way to end it and welcome back! :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted September 4, 2004 Report Share Posted September 4, 2004 [font="Arial"][color=blue]I didn't read it all, cuzi cant concentrate well at the moment..but it sounded good as far as i read it tho... :thumb: u got me wantin to flow a lil... haha... Welcome back bro.... peace, 3cookies [/color][/font] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted September 4, 2004 Report Share Posted September 4, 2004 [font="Arial"][color=blue]well dang...what happened to my cute little blue boxes under my avatar, Timboat~ mane???? I thought when ppl drink they see doubles, but im seeing less. lmbo... or u changed it or sumpthin...anyways...imma make a flow post, (what the hell is a flow post. lol...ryme,... im buggn,) and if it dont go up,...thats because i got bored with it and deleted it . lol peace, 3cookies [/color][/font] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted September 4, 2004 Admin Report Share Posted September 4, 2004 what? i havent done anything :dunno: are you talin abt your avatar? looks the same 2 me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Daedalus Mortality Posted September 4, 2004 Members Report Share Posted September 4, 2004 dope Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted September 4, 2004 Report Share Posted September 4, 2004 Maybe she 4got she's a potna. :dunno: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted September 4, 2004 Report Share Posted September 4, 2004 [quote=Hero1,Sep 4 2004, 03:43 AM]what? i havent done anything :dunno: are you talin abt your avatar? looks the same 2 me[/quote] [font="Arial"][color=blue]no...i was talking about the number of blue squares 'under' my avatar. I used to have 6 or so, now I've got 4...just figured there was a change done, or soemthing..no biggie tho... :thumb: peace, 3cookies [/color][/font] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted September 4, 2004 Report Share Posted September 4, 2004 Yeah... I had like 11. It's because as people are posting alot, Tim has to keep changing them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted September 4, 2004 Admin Report Share Posted September 4, 2004 yeah i had to change em..cause me and prince had 11 each.. they now go up to 10, 000 if any1 gets their! :roll: :roll: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted September 4, 2004 Report Share Posted September 4, 2004 Race you tim Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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