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That Girl (Remake Rap Version)


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I thought i would put a rap towards MH's song "That Girl", here it is, its his chorus written, how do you think it would sound?
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That Girl


i looked at that girl but she aint all that
dont you realise i only want you back
you dont compare to them hollywood bitches
you thought you turned me just like them snitches
falling down ditches, your my women and please believe
why i dont where my heart on my sleeve
begging please falling down to my knees, crying
girl im not lying, believe me when im high and say im trying
but you dont believe me and theres no trust
which turns to lust in a furouis fust to make a fight
can you see the light its so ****ing bright
ive loved you will all my heart
knowin one day we will never be apart
girl ive never called you a bitch a ho or a tart
just look in my eyes and please realize
that my lies arnt even lies so why look suprised
let me take it back to the day we first met
my terrible opening day, you wishing you'd forget
but i came back and i dont regret, the bet
that made you my girl cause you though it was so sweet
tender love made you mine in a heart beat
so if i look at other girls, they dont compare to you
i love you girl, and believe me i always will do, ugh

If I Wanted...That Girl
Than I Would Be With...That Girl
But That One Aint For Me...
Shes Fine As Hell But She Always Be
That Girl, Nuttin More Than That Girl
No Matter What She Do She Dont Compare To U....(Haha)

walking down the street hand to hand
i looked back but im just a man
its hard for you to understand my plan
but i bet you my conversation stopped your hesistation
that my information increased your elevation
maybe the reason you discussed it with that guy
made me get concussed and thats why i had to fly
im gonna miss the way you smile if you leave
i had to get my own space, you needed to breathe
we started when we was young and loved you since then
why do you think i would cheat because im well known?
your my queen and im the king who owns a golden thrown
but i need you by my side for the rest of my life
not only my gangster bitch but someday you can be my wife
so dont start sayin i was lookin' cause my heart you tookin'
your burnt my heart and left it to be cookin'
just get into your head that i dont want to be away from you untill im dead
i dont wana get out of bed, just remember what i said
loved and lost aint better than never loved at all
cause its like your ontop of a building then happenin to fall
believe me i've been throught the stress and complication
im looking to get my medication, dont wana save the nation
just wana save you girl and thats all i wana say
i dont want you to go away, and hopefully find a better way

If I Wanted...That Girl
Than I Would Be With...That Girl
But That One Aint For Me...
Shes Fine As Hell But She Always Be
That Girl, Nuttin More Than That Girl
No Matter What She Do She Dont Compare To U....(Haha)

do you forgive me or forget me
would you live with me or regret me
tell me these answers as im about to ask
the arguements we had, it was a blast from the pass
remembering the day you wantin to whoop my ass
i wanted you to do it quicker
so i can get back to my chair and drink my liquour
i treated you like **** and i cant forgive myself for doing this
but believe me i was being cussed and i just had to diss
you stood by my side, dont leave me and hide
your gonna hurt my pride, that girl dnt mean **** to me
why cant you see, your the girl i wanted and did it probably
but didnt, so i shouldnt and couldnt and wouldnt **** it up
but i did so i gotta smack and slap somebody up.
you made me angry but made me sad
i was all good but when i bet that girl i was bad
please forgive me for only looking, its not like i cheated
lookin at all these fancy things, i froze your hands and feet
made you smile and through this it was worth while
when i was hustled to the streets my homies making me freestyle
so forget that girl shes out of my life
she aint my life materail you can be my wife
what you say huh?

If I Wanted...That Girl
Than I Would Be With...That Girl
But That One Aint For Me...
Shes Fine As Hell But She Always Be
That Girl, Nuttin More Than That Girl
No Matter What She Do She Dont Compare To U....(Haha)

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feedback will be nice, thanks 4 readin

J-o-e
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look i gotta be honest.. that was damn awful...

[b]you dont compare to them hollywood bitches

girl ive never called you a bitch a ho or a tart

why do you think i would cheat because im well known?

not only my gangster bitch but someday you can be my wife [/b]

:pleasxplain:

come on man these lines are terrible..keep it real please :werd:
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ive gotten terrible feedback from u for ages, so u think i listen to you, cause u dnt curse, so what i curse, its not like ur ever gonna make it, ****,

yeah MH is marcus Housten, just a bigger beat in the song could make it aight, i thought it was ok for me
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I agree with Tim. Only rhyme about stuff that's real. Not lies. This song is fake, because it's all out of your head. And FuQ and Tim are far closer to making it than you are Joe, because they don't talk **** in their rhymes.

You ask for feedback and get it, damn.
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Wow what the dickens?! Joe calm down man. I think you need a few days cooling off period!

Also, can people check out my post "My rhyme"! Feedback appreciated, especially if anybody can work out the hidden message :sonny: Edited by Enemy of the State
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Why would wanna remake a song from somebody that does songs with B2K, that's wack! :nhawong: You gotta be able to take criticism if you wanna make it, if somebody doesn't like they don't like it, you could do better, if you can't take the heat don't rap! :ditto:
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[quote=bigted,Sep 5 2004, 01:59 AM]Why would wanna remake a song from somebody that does songs with B2K, that's wack! :nhawong: You gotta be able to take criticism if you wanna make it, if somebody doesn't like they don't like it, you could do better, if you can't take the heat don't rap! :ditto:[/quote]
Word man, word.
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hey that was constructive criticism.. i gave him quotes of lines that i thought were wack and where he wasnt keeping it real..

and vegito..whoever you are..he posted that wanting feedback..you would rather he gets no replies?
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[quote=J-o-e,Sep 4 2004, 12:49 PM]ive gotten terrible feedback from u for ages, so u think i listen to you, cause u dnt curse, so what i curse, its not like ur ever gonna make it, ****,[/quote]
what the hell are you talking about? i never said anything about you cursing in my reply.. and you've posted some dope stuff before and ive told u that..so i dont know what you are talking about.. what are you rapping abt gangster bitches tho? what do you know about a gangtsa bitch..please enlighten me
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