willreign Posted September 5, 2004 Report Share Posted September 5, 2004 Let me remind you what you did for us to be together I reminded you that I’m mister lover but it doesn’t matter You better remember that time that you made me turn And wanted your ex boyfriend 2 be burned I haven’t stopped the beat, co’s my time is short And I admit that I’m guilty in the freaking court Honey from the last chorus I started to choke And when I am without you my heart just lock We are happy together from now until forever Wanna get rid of me? Too late now (ha ha), never never All my body get musty when I near you Wanna share something? I’m here with you Remember that we can live happily ever after I’m breakable so try 2 b gentle, that will be safer So let me remind you about that crazy churs If you wanna jump into my bed I’ll say – of course Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted September 5, 2004 Report Share Posted September 5, 2004 What is it you would like us to give help with? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
willreign Posted September 6, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2004 preoblems in preper english... and mistakes that u thinks it worng... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted September 6, 2004 Report Share Posted September 6, 2004 OK... This is the version in more correct English: [quote]Let me remind you what you did for us to be together I reminded you that I’m Mister Lover, but it doesn’t matter You had better remember that time that you made me turn And wanted your ex-boyfriend to be burned I haven’t stopped the beat, because my time is short And I admit that I’m guilty in the freaking court Honey from the last chorus I started to choke And when I am without you my heart just locks We are happy together from now until forever Want to get rid of me? Too late now (ha ha), never, never All of my body gets musty when I'm near you Want to share something? I’m here with you Remember that we can live happily ever after I’m breakable so try to be gentle, that will be safer So let me remind you about that crazy chorus [i](or do you mean curse?)[/i] If you wanna jump into my bed I’ll say, "Of course."[/quote] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members badboys Posted September 6, 2004 Members Report Share Posted September 6, 2004 I like this verse man... here are a couple of errors-your asking to correct them.. I haven’t stopped the beat, [color=red]co’s[/color] my time is short Cuz And I'm not sure what you mean by chur's.... but other than that you're good to go. Pretty cool verse :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted September 6, 2004 Report Share Posted September 6, 2004 "cuz" isn't correct though badboys. Like I said, "because". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members badboys Posted September 6, 2004 Members Report Share Posted September 6, 2004 Oh... my bad Prince... Yeah Willreign- use because Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted September 6, 2004 Report Share Posted September 6, 2004 Anything else you want help on WillReign? :dancingcool: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
willreign Posted September 7, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2004 churs... is between the first vers 2 the secound... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted September 7, 2004 Report Share Posted September 7, 2004 That'll be "chorus" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
willreign Posted September 8, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2004 ha ha that the same 4 me... thanks 2 all of u very much...!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted September 13, 2004 Report Share Posted September 13, 2004 Post the audio!!!! People would want to hear it! Its dope! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
willreign Posted September 14, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2004 I've already posted my audio of "not forggeting" man... lol... this ill record probobly next week... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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