mfuqua23 Posted September 11, 2004 Report Share Posted September 11, 2004 (edited) Y'all, I need help wit this. Like should I go thru wit it fully. U think I should add in the song why the story was told the way it was? U kno? [b][i]edit:[/i][/b][url="http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/fuqmusic.htm"]FuQ Music Page (featuring latest song from New Album)[/url] [i]Nov. 15,2003 (2:03 a.m. - 6:13 a.m.)[/i] 1st time I met U, it was great; and felt like fate Was friends 4 a few years, then we had our 1st date As time went on, U had my heart chasin like crazy I got ahead of myself thinkin about our 1st baby U told me maybe, but we should slow down and neither of us R ready 4 that right now There was no need to debate and fight, U was right Like I said, we gotta keep our goals on site And that same night, ya mama called me up She said screamin "my daughter's not a slut" I said "I know, that'z one of the many reasons I love her Since we've been together, I could always trust her" Then she apologized and left me alone Once again, another disturbing ring on my phone This time it was your sister, and I had no idea at all Turns out, she wanted 2 meet me at the mall Why not? They gotta couple of cool spots I ain't been there in a while plus I need 2 shop On my way, I stopped at my mom's wit a dish I made on my own And told her what it was like to live in a place called home She was happy and kinda shed a tear inside I said I gotta get the goin and we said goodbye Got 2 the mall and said hi 2 ya sister I happen 2 seen a couple homeboyz, but I wasn't dissin her We helped each other make decisions when we couldn't decide Then we stopped in F-Y-E 2 pick out some music 2 vibe She said she wanted 2 stop at one more store That'z when I saw U and my heart, broke 2 the floor I couldn't believe it, U had me ditched Why'd U Become A Bitch CHORUS :Why'd U Become A Bitch (repeats thru-out) Ya sister got curious, while I was furious Then U turned and seen the both of us U went static, thinkin I was doin wrong 2 U It'z the other way around, U just switched the view Ya sister looked in my eyez, saw the sate of mind I was in Wanted 2 comfort me, but didn't know where 2 begin My feelins started 2 flar, from all the eyez that stare Had 2 calm myself down, so I got some air I leaned against the wall and I looked 2 the sky But I wasn't tryna ask "Why?" Then I str8-n up and reached 4 my keys Boom! (3x) I heard a gun squeeze Fall 2 my knees, see glass and blood fly Some people scream, others stay silent in their cries I'm on my side, tryin breath, raise my head off the pavement Then I see some shadowed figures invade it I reached 4 ya hand 2 try 2 ask why, but U made me touch your breast U screamed Rape! and they fired at my chest Even tho I was dead in that instance, I can remember the aftermath The cops and U were crooked and evil and just laughed While all except ya sister went 2 the back Y'all added an unnecessary attack The punk police considered U brave 2 have the audacity to stand there as they shot where I laid And they got enuff personal info, 2 steal all my dough Money I would've left 4 my family, and now they'll never know Once the true blue got there They just accepted all the info, they didn't care See, I wasn't even close 2 bein' rich Why'd U Become A Bitch CHORUS How does it feel, to know that no one knows what U did? Except ya sister who's havin nightmare everyday that she lives She's just waitin 2 die, she can't stand it 2 cry Wonda if the pain's increase since the night that I died She trys 2 tell my somebodies, but they won't listen And everyday that she wakes up, she keeps wishin to see my smiling face one day again Cuz the way this world's been 2 her, she feels I was her only friend And U was my only LOVE, why'd U let it end that way that night We could've still been friends, we could've still been tight I got a pretty good idea of what ya still doin Tell me, how many more lives have U ruined Did I get the worst? Was I the 1st? Or your one and only? Do U team wit others or do U do it lonely? I know my family tried 2 find U or find some clues I'm dead now, But I suffered world wide abuse I fell in love and it caused me stress In the final minutes of my death U were gonna be my wife 4 life I got done in 4 nothin and that'z real trife My days alwayz got better each time I'd see U Probably could've made my life without U, But I needed U I believed in U, U could've accomplished it U had a beautiful mind and then U dropped the **** Real quick, and never tried 2 get back cuz U felt all your work was overly stacked Would've gave U my last dollaz if it was needy But U had 2 take my life, cuz U was that greedy Ready 2 put a nigga in his casket quick Tell me why'd U become a bitch CHORUS Edited September 14, 2004 by mfuqua23 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted September 11, 2004 Report Share Posted September 11, 2004 yo dope, jus coz im beefin wit half dis board right now ill still say that was dope, your rhymes are always tight man, good story.... J-o-e Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted September 11, 2004 Report Share Posted September 11, 2004 I could tell that Nas inspired to write that one 'cause it's similiar to the way Nas did it on "Pussy Killz" on the God's Son Bonus Disc, I like it a lot, you do well with storytelling in your rhymes! :clap: Hey Joe don't take anything from the battles personal but when it's time to battle there is no time to be friends, let's keep the beef on the rhymes and that's it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted September 11, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2004 (edited) [quote=bigted,Sep 11 2004, 04:20 PM]I could tell that Nas inspired to write that one 'cause it's similiar to the way Nas did it on "Pussy Killz" on the God's Son Bonus Disc, I like it a lot, you do well with storytelling in your rhymes! :clap:[/quote] Actually. Nas didn't inspire this one. It was 2pac. (althought "Pussy Kills might be a nice alternate instrumental). I just had thoughts coming 2 me like crazy. Faster than I could write. 2pac's "Holla At Me" had me wanting 2 write about my bro who I hadn't seen in years at that time. "Wonda Why They Call U Bitch" is what did this one. I used these 2 girls who I liked kinda as the basis. It was story told in a reality. Yo J-o-e, don't fret man. The way I see it, the board is calling U fake. It'z not fake 2 speak about what U have. Some people R actually like that. More or less. I don't cuss much in my rhymes, most likely cuz I don't in real life. I may disagree wit the content, but your still an artist/writer (if U consider yourself that). i 4got 2 mention that the beat currently in use is 2pac "****in Wit The Wrong Nigga" Edited September 11, 2004 by mfuqua23 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted September 12, 2004 Report Share Posted September 12, 2004 i thought u got it from "Wonda Why They Call U Bitch", im listening to it now, but the girl dies not the guy, so nice switch there keep the beefin on the rhymes, i rap the way i wana call me fake fine.....dnt mata tho i still write Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted September 12, 2004 Report Share Posted September 12, 2004 Yea, when it's time for battles there are no friends. Anyway, back on topic. Nice one FuQ, I'm feeling this. It's something I can roll with, if you ever chose to record it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted September 12, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2004 J-o-e - I didn't write the song 2 follow the OG song. It put me in the emotion and thinking stage I needed 2 be 2 write it. Prince - well Prince, u CAN roll wit it. Cuz I recorded it last nite. And it'z done. Thanks 4 da feedback y'all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DevilsJim89 Posted September 12, 2004 Report Share Posted September 12, 2004 Nice song FuQ, when I was reading this, the beat of "you saw my blinker" was playing in my mind and it was nice. Lyrics are great, another dope song. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted September 13, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2004 Thanks Jim. And I got "You Saw My Blinker" as a loop beat on my JJFP instrumentals. Don't think it'd fit 2 well. Feedback appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted September 13, 2004 Report Share Posted September 13, 2004 Cool song man!! Enjoyed reading it! :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted September 14, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2004 In case this make note of a new post, the song is up. Especially 4 those of U that requested it. It'z a good song 2 kick back to and feel the emotion. Peace! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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