Kimmie Posted September 12, 2004 Report Share Posted September 12, 2004 (edited) [color=purple]Yes prince made me do this...ok he didnt make me but he persuaded me! :dunno: Its my poem thats getting published and the book comes out christmas/early next yearish time. the books called "the hearts content" if your interested lol. [u]My love for you[/u] [b]My love for you is held inside, Waiting to be free. All my emotion kept inside You are all I see. Like a droplet of water yearning for release, To flow and unite with the sea, My love for you is gradually flowing, Letting me be me. Telling you is difficult, It’s the hardest thing to do, Revealing all my secrets, All exposed and true. Sitting alone and thinking, Makes a lonely heart feel pain, But telling you how I feel, Has lifted all that strain. My love for you has matured, Into a love that’s new. Are you holding a river inside? Do you love me too?[/b][/color] Edited September 12, 2004 by Kimmie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted September 12, 2004 Report Share Posted September 12, 2004 Hey, I like it! Flows nicely, and well written :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kimmie Posted September 12, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2004 (edited) [color=purple] :peace: thanx :happysad: i had to make a huuuuuuuge commentary on it for my friends music teacher who was interested in it...i was like, meh! i only wrote it coz i couldnt get my feelings out and tell anyone, and now you want me to analyse it lol [/color] Edited September 12, 2004 by Kimmie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kimmie Posted September 12, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2004 [color=purple]but yeh, tell me what you think...honestly! i know its nothing like the stuff thats usually on here 1) im not as talented as u guys 2) its reaaaaaaaally short 3) it was only written to get my feelings somewhere apart from my head! [/color] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted September 12, 2004 Report Share Posted September 12, 2004 [font="Arial"][color=blue]HEy Kimmie, i enjoyed reading that. It was really pretty, and put me in kinda of a "chill" mode...just imagining living each word of the poem... I liked it alot..thanx 4 sharing it with us... peace, 3cookies [/color][/font] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kimmie Posted September 12, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2004 (edited) [color=purple]aw thanx cookies that made me feel ebtter. it is nice to hear positive feed back! :) i may post some more sometime. :grouphug:[/color] Edited September 12, 2004 by Kimmie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted September 12, 2004 Report Share Posted September 12, 2004 (edited) [font="Arial"][color=blue]Thats what we are here for...to encourage one another. It buggs me if someone puts another's writing down, when they invest time and their best effort into a piece... IF its good...i'll say so..and if im not feeling it,...i say so, but in an encouranging way so not to hurt anyone's feelings,...but so they will want to put forth more effort next tyme... and you should keep posting...the more we show our creative side, the more hidden talent we discover within ourselves...and theres a helluVa lot of talent on this board... :trust me on that... :thumb: peace, 3cookies[/color][/font] Edited September 12, 2004 by 3cookies Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kimmie Posted September 12, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2004 [color=purple][quote]theres a helluVa lot of talent on this board[/quote] yeh i know there is and thats what scared me lol! [b]Soft Tears (4th August 2004) Soft Tears caress my skin as I think of you, All my pain swells and then it flows freely. Freed with the gentle release of a single tear Trickling across warm skin, holding its cold feelings. I’m losing myself in an ocean of bitter salt Drowning helplessly with no one to save me I wish I could sail away from my problems But I’m marooned on this island of grief. The memory will dry up just like the tear But will always remain, ready to escape again An echo of heartbreak falls along with the tear Tempted and taken in by the lips to leave an embittered taste I consume my own grief. The droplet of pain becomes a part of me again, And the memory will never leave me, neither will the tears The cycle begins again and I start to feel numb I sit alone just thinking. It’s so hard to be alone. Staring into a flame makes the pain settle It allows for a pause in time to reflect on life. I have come to the conclusion that life it like a candle flame And once it’s blown out, it’s gone forever We can never get our lives back when we are gone What’s important is what we leave behind What happens to a candle when it’s gone? The important thing is what it did in the short time it was here. Tears help me to appreciate what I have I am thankful that I am alive That I have family and friends around me And that I will always be loved I hope the paths I take in life are right for me And that the tears will decrease in time I want to live a long and happy life And look back at the end and smile.[/b] i wrote this after my cousin died[/color] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted September 13, 2004 Report Share Posted September 13, 2004 I love the ending of the 2nd poem U posted. Poetry and lyrics R 2 different things. But they all relate in a release of emotion or creativity. I actually have some poems I've written. might but some up sometime. Poetry is a great thing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted September 13, 2004 Report Share Posted September 13, 2004 Great Kimmie!! It brings something different to the board!! Not alot of people post up their poetry! I really liked it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kimmie Posted September 13, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2004 [color=purple][quote]I actually have some poems I've written. might but some up sometime[/quote] put them up, put them up! :rock: thanx breaks! :thumb: [/color] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazzy Julie Posted September 13, 2004 Report Share Posted September 13, 2004 yeah kimmie even wrote a poem about my guinea pig that died (i helped a bit), its sounds stupid to write about that but i made her and i loved that little pig. She has yet to write a poem anout me tho ,lol. yeah brakes put them up, i was gonna write a poem when i was really depressed the other day, but i didnt even have time to write it (how sad), then my feelings went away when i eventually got time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kimmie Posted September 13, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2004 [color=purple]i wrote one about you julie....best friends![/color] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted September 13, 2004 Report Share Posted September 13, 2004 I like those poems Kimmie! :thumb: I could tell you wrote them from your heart. I like to write peoms too once in a while about things that go on in my life and I feel they're more personal than my songs i write, myabe one day I might post some of them so y'all could get to know me better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kimmie Posted September 13, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2004 [color=purple] thanx :) definately! go 4 it! poems mean alot to me coz i write them when something had effected me really bad whther its good or bad, usually rejection or love lol![/color] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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