mfuqua23 Posted September 17, 2004 Report Share Posted September 17, 2004 I just wrote this. 2day I got hit like crazy wit lyrical inspiration. I listened 2 2pac + Outlawz album Still I Rise. 3 songs. "Letter 2 the President", "Black Jesuz", and "High Speed". High speed helped me write this one. Once I wrote the chorus, it was all great. Anyway, I've been teased and bullied, felt like I was unpopular, and things like that. People ask me "U gonna shoot up the school". joke or not? hmm. Well, I think this song can represent 4 all those have experienced since emotion. And those thinking about doing it. Find a way 4 them 2 see it'z not necessary. Here's the 1st verse and chorus.... Check it. [i]Sept. 16, 2004[/i] Would they still try me, if I was violent wit a burner? Instead of being silent, gettin knowledge as a learner I'm still concerned with the way we're actin' Need 2 revolutionize the times w/ new actions Often askin if I'm ok or fine What'z in my mind, am I thinkin of pullin a Columbine Comically viewed, I'm seen as weak-willed like I can't stomach a kill, when I'm holdin some steel I've dealt wit bullys, wore hoodys, and rocked pullys Even my so-called friends couldn't understand me fully Negativity imprisoned me 2 think all the same Every comment made about me, made me feel like a lame Felt hopeless in my youthness Bad roads traveled, can't believe that I'd do this Ruthless aggression, list organized 2 perfection Finalize the shots 2 be fired without a question Determine ya destiny 2 die Just like ya dealer that sells weed, make U destine 2 get high Bustin better than gang marksmanship Know how 2 creep like a Blood and make U bleed like a Crip Stripped of the innocence, now U got no defensive Enough 4 both of us, but U can take all the regrets Dreams set, reality's comin ahead Looked me str8 in my eyes, this is all that I said CHORUS Whatcha gonna do when my mind ain't well and I gotta a Future Wit A Gun Shootin em up, not givin a f*** No surprises, U better duck ________________ This is my favorite song that I've created so far. One of my best, if not THEE. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted September 17, 2004 Report Share Posted September 17, 2004 It's dope! :thumb: I wrote a song called "If I Had A Gun" back in April of '03 when I was still a senior in high school, I saw that some of my friends were turnin' their backs on me, so I wrote this when I was pissed off, it made me feel better. I'm just gonna post a piece of it here for y'all to check out! Verse One: I don't wanna hold a grudge Why don't y'all show me love I try to enlighten you and you don't give a **** You just like to fight and fool, then give me a shove But now if you ever touch me Know how that's foul and not funny Why are you tryin' to make my heart turn cold? I'm not tryin' to start turnin' old And become a bitter soul My innocence has disappeared My perdicaments have appeared Into my decisions to rap clear Instead of blind and unguided I'm no longer a child But don't make me turn vile You can't determine anything that'll make my soul gone I saw a lot of things that are raw I don't discusss them all And I learned to grasp on tall 'Cause I don't want my life to end tomorrow I can't take all of this sorrow Of the world that doesn't care How much love is there If I been comin' up shorthanded Into what I've been planning Doin' something the right way has been hard and demanding If I chose the wrong path I could have fulfilled them more fast But my life could have gone in a flash If I was trying to live fast I'm tired of hearing what these punks have These long days won't last I ain't gonna go crash Good things will become a blessing When it takes longer to get them I'll be willing to cherish them So I shouldn't be thinkin' negativeness But... Chorus: If I had a gun In my hand And you called me a pussy How would that be fun? You would ruin my plans And I would go to the penetentury Fortunately I don't have one I know how to be a man You should feel lucky 'Cause without shootin' a gun Makes me a bigger man And you the pussy When I could beat ya without one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted September 17, 2004 Report Share Posted September 17, 2004 Deep songs guys! Good jobs! :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted September 17, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2004 Thanks Brakes and bigted. Man, we R so alike. Your starting 2 creep me out. I had trouble following your chorus tho. All way round dope. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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