mfuqua23 Posted September 19, 2004 Report Share Posted September 19, 2004 Right now, I only have one verse. I just wrote this in the late morning 10- 11:30. This will be a really good read. U probably can guess what beat I followed wit. This girl from NY I saw last nite inspired me 2 write this verse, but I 'can't explain it'. [i]Sept. 18, 2004[/i] This girl came around in a New York minute Sat on the trunk of the car, wit a New York image I wanna get the digits of ya size, and where U reside Let me tell U what I'd do, if ya friends weren't beside U Take ya hand and have a good connection grip Look U directly in ya eyez, and connect wit lips It'd be 4 one nite, but I respect U miss Never 4 get this, when I give U bliss We can wish upon each other while the stars R out Make a map of our bodies, and follow that route I'm shivering but these degrees won't make it hard 2 please Strip however U want, I ain't hard 2 tease U look right wit that street light causin ya body 2 glow Already late gettin home, so baby let'z take it slow U know the principles of pleasure when we're 2gether So good the 1st time, next time U make it better Beyond belief U went below like Monica hail'd 2 the chief Use the "s"s 2 describe U, soft & sweet Commiting 2 U, wit ever action Remember the 1st time that U felt the passion ______________ (a line I'll use which I thought was cool and creative).. U heard the "Passion of the Christ", well this the Passion of Mike Probably get wit various ladies, there ain't a perfect type I gonna get away from usin beats on my album after this one. But until then I'll find it, cuz this song will be so dope. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted September 19, 2004 Report Share Posted September 19, 2004 Liking it! Cant wait to read the rest of it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted September 19, 2004 Report Share Posted September 19, 2004 :ditto: tell me how it turns out, im dying dope rhyme man well done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted September 19, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2004 Thanks again Brakes & Joe. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted September 20, 2004 Report Share Posted September 20, 2004 Hey, liking your rhyme style and flow in this one man! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted September 22, 2004 Report Share Posted September 22, 2004 It's hot! That reminds me of somethin' that I wrote about a girl that I met when I was in high school who moved from New York, there's a lot of cool chicks there man, I love going there to meet girls! :switch: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted September 22, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2004 Thanks. Actually, she came in my area. A friend of mine brought her over, cuz the girl wanted 2 lose her virginity. And I was wonderin why her other friend was jokin and stuff. But I found out. And nah, we ain't do nothin. We didn't even really talk. I didn't know what 2 say 2 her wit her friends standin there. But she was pretty. Then the next morning I thought back 2 that scene. And just went wit the flow. And as U can see, it turned out pretty good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted September 23, 2004 Report Share Posted September 23, 2004 I was listening to "Shorty was da Bomb" by DMX and I was thinking about this verse that you did, especially when he said: "We only did it for that night But man that pussy was good" :roll: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Daedalus Mortality Posted September 23, 2004 Members Report Share Posted September 23, 2004 yes, this is pretty good, even tough i normally dont like love lyrics and it gets a bitch mushy for my taste the lyricism is good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted September 23, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2004 DM - dang, ain't seen U in awhile. Hey man,. what u expect? The song is called "Passion". It'z necessarily love lyrics. More like Sexual Enjoyment. lol I guess. But it'z good that U can rate something your not used to. Thanks man. bigted - haha. I don't know how. U got me wantin 2 listen 2 that song again. it'z weird that u can remember this verse like that. I remember almost the whole thing, and it'z only been 5 dayz since I wrote it. That'z like a rare thing 2 me. I'm definately gonna love recordin this song. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted September 23, 2004 Report Share Posted September 23, 2004 And if that girl ever hears that song she'll be like "damn I wish I stayed with him"! That's the feeling I want girls to feel when I release an album one day and it has on some songs that I wrote about when I was with them! :ditto: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Perry Posted September 23, 2004 Report Share Posted September 23, 2004 Yo dope flow man. You get **** recorded ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted September 23, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2004 bigted - Well, I found out some info on da girl. She's got "high standards". A guy wit a car, cash, all dat and stuff. I ain't got none, but I'm workin on da car part. Cash too wit this new album. As Geoffrey says "She was a HOT little number." Perry - nah. This one ain't recorded yet. Plus I'd prefer if my rhymes weren't called ****, dope ****, hot ****. whatever. I hate that. But if ya askin me if I record, the answer is yes. Check out some of my audios if U haven't already. Just click my link below. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted September 24, 2004 Report Share Posted September 24, 2004 Hey fuq word to the wise, keep your mind on your music, if she can't except you for who you are now, you don't need her, she sounds like a golddigger to me, there's plenty of hot chicks out there, but you need one with a good personality as well as a good looking body, they're hard to find. :dunno: I'm not gonna throw cash in a girl's face for her to be my girl, like Will said in the Fresh Prince, "Ain't No Honey Fly Enough To Make Me Go Through All This" when he was trying to act like Carlton to talk to the bougey girl and then acted gangsta when he found out that she liked thug guys. That episode was funny but had a good message to it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted September 24, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2004 Yo man. I know dat. I've don't write 2 get girls. I write about em, but not 2 get em. If I do, it'z a plus I guess. Yeah, when my friend told me bout her i was like "Oh OK. She was still pretty tho." I'll never see her again tho. Maybe Spring Break. She lives in NY. I live in PA. I get whatcha saying tho. I alwayz knew things like that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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