DefCEM Posted August 31, 2011 Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 Hi everybody, i just finished my first serious attempt to write some lyrics and record it. this was done in pretty basic way. i'll be in the studio next week to make a more professional and cleaner version. I wanted to share it with you guys and need some honest opinions even if its in german. http://www.megaupload.com/?d=O6TXE8D2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted August 31, 2011 Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 Obviously I can't understand German but what I can hear flow wise is very good. You stay on beat throughout the track and you ride the beat which I think is key to get the best out of a track!! Great job on this Def.... looking forward to hearing more and more from you? Just one thing.. when you go to the studio make sure your vocals are raised just a little! Can you rap in English? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DefCEM Posted August 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 well, i could try to rap in english. its way harder for me to write and flow in english due to my limited english skills. but i could try, i think it is a good idea. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted August 31, 2011 Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 I'm not saying you should rap in English I was just wondering! Don't try and change who you are and do YOU!! You got skillz! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted August 31, 2011 Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 I speak German, I listen to some German Hip Hop too. I think your flow is pretty good, especially for a beginner. You sometimes sounda just a little bit insecure though, but I've heard a lot worse on the internet. I think you need to work on your lyrics a little bit more though. I like the subject, but a lot of your lines do not veel very natural, often times the lyrics feel kinda forced. You need to smoothen that out. Thats my opinion. I like the Beat. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DefCEM Posted August 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 thanks turntable, i will work a lot more on the lyrics. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted August 31, 2011 Report Share Posted August 31, 2011 By the way I think you should not rap in English. I think it makes more sense to rap in ones own language and stick too it. Unless one has more than one "First-Language". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Tiger Posted September 1, 2011 Report Share Posted September 1, 2011 Yeah, good flow for your first "attempt." I'm not sure what you were saying since I don't speak German, but I like to think it was about little ducks in a line, following their mother duck. Nice job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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