Da Brakes Posted November 2, 2011 Report Share Posted November 2, 2011 * 16 lines each * 2 days to post your verse (read rules if unclear about this) * Big Wilie to spit first Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Willie Posted November 2, 2011 Report Share Posted November 2, 2011 It’s a rhythmic attack as soon as my lyrics get dispatched I’m pulling you back like the umbilical cord is still attached Blocking ya skills arteries like it’s a lyrical heart attack It’s a jail metaphor like you getting arrested for cardiac Out of this world like Venus, like you getting served like tennis Feel the wrath of a menace like my first name was Dennis I'll book you in for surgery to remove my punch lines from your brain Your style is expressionless like I Botox'd on your mind frame I could assassinate Bill Gates and ‘Access’ the ‘Outlook’ of myself As the lyrical Microsoft, coz as a ‘Publisher’ my ‘Words’ ‘Excel’ You can exhale into your hand but you shouldn’t hold your breath I’ll fill out your death certificate and then sign it with this text If I made a staircase to my brain you couldn’t step to my demeanour I’ll just leave you for dead like your girl dumped you for necrophilia It aint over ‘til the fat lady sings, I’m starting to get bored So give your mum a call so she can relieve her vocal chords Good luck Tallen! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted November 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2011 48hrs are up... Big Willie to progress to the next round Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Willie Posted November 4, 2011 Report Share Posted November 4, 2011 Waste of a verse Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted November 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2011 At least you got a practice one in! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Willie Posted November 4, 2011 Report Share Posted November 4, 2011 True enough, sucks you never got a chance to spit! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schnazz Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 That was a good verse man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Tiger Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 Yeah, it's a shame you didn't get to use it against Tallen for real. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VIsqo Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 Thats sad man, that was a waste of a round great round.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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