mfuqua23 Posted October 3, 2004 Report Share Posted October 3, 2004 I was layin back listen 2 Mobb Deep's 'Amerikaz Nightmare'. I got hyped up 2 write. So I got up and put it down. Check it out. [i]Oct. 2, 2004 (1:30 a.m. - 2:47 a.m.)[/i] CHORUS: Can't figure out what'z goin on cuz they ain't prepare Wonda Bout My Thug, I know I got em scared Existed, but wish it was never there Like Freddy on Elm Street, I'm in their nightmares Street survivor, makin it live-er, livin' the ghetto ways Star guy, shootin' the sky, gonna make sure I stay A worthy figure, worthy n****, in the rap game Realest they ever heard, but everybody's scared 2 play Put me on the scene, debut track #13 Krazy darkness wit music, my brain'z not functioning I option between things that I win and U lose Around a lot of people, now tell me whose f***in' who Lose dough, die slow, agonizing time ticks slow Ya b**** goin messin, get heated while unclothed I been shown the same things as U, but I got it quicker Mine was positive, while yours was negative n**** Now dig that, shift and type ya name, get ya space back Ain't livin' on computer screens, cuz I'll cause a virus attack See the future, so they rewind it back Already knew they try 2 figure that; wonda bout my thug CHORUS It'z either freeze and stop or melt and drop Don't matter bout the process of murder, eyez gonna watch Ain't a movie but ya chest is stretched like a widescreen Ain't showin titties, but girls gone wild with their screams cuz they got scared at what was air'd out No beef wit me, U was talkin s*** U wasn't about How many aspire 2 be hard, get females hot & wet Must be on some J.E. & 112, if U think like that My thug is generous cuz I let people depend on this I could be without,a nd not even give a **** That'z how I'm runnin this and I don't have 2 bring a gun 2 get what I want quick Try 2 be a hater like Chappelle's Silky Johnston Rush U and let ya body lay there Naturally finding a new route man, damn wish U was aware of this, but U can't figure it out man CHORUS Look what it took 4 U 2 realize that if U don't settle down, possibility he can take ya life Is it really precious? Don't know why U keep on pressin' it Don't want thangs, 2 bad, I'm a be affectin' it Encountered the cops at age 9, 4 the 1st time Indirectly, but they wanted 2 make sure I didn't shine 2nd time, I was 16, cop car would've hit me if I didn't run, that front end was gonna stick me Then they check me 4 alcohol, thinkin I'm no good at all Like another youngsta causin' problems at the mall 2 be in love wit this thug life, it'z all good 2nite Y'all punks don't talk ride or die, unless U know what it means, aight? The description seems too complicated 4 these ones that always debate it, and wonda bout my thug CHORUS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members willsmithfan1 Posted October 3, 2004 Members Report Share Posted October 3, 2004 Are you gonna put it up on your site? cos I think it's pretty good... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted October 3, 2004 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2004 I don't think so. I have 2 figure how it goes 2 the beat. I gotta loop it and then see how it sounds. Thanks, but I don't think this ones gonna be on there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members willsmithfan1 Posted October 3, 2004 Members Report Share Posted October 3, 2004 Ahh ok then... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted October 3, 2004 Report Share Posted October 3, 2004 Keep it up! :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted October 3, 2004 Report Share Posted October 3, 2004 It's aight man, it ain't the best you did but it's good though, don't try and say n**** too much though, 'cause a lot of cats say that already and that gets played out in my opinion, it's cool that you get inspired by artists but you gotta remain original, I know you could do better, I'm gonna say this to motivate you man if you really wanna make success out of this! :ditto: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted October 3, 2004 Report Share Posted October 3, 2004 Its good man, i liked the topic of the song and the way it flowed, shout us up when u drop the vocals 2 this man, love 2 hear it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted October 4, 2004 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2004 (edited) Brakes - thanks bigted - I only said it twice. The words I put in just seemed right. This is like the final chapter of these kinda lyrics 4 me. There's some true and imagination in this song. I know it'z not my best, but it'z gonna be off the hook. At least, the way I'm feelin this vibe 4 this song. Basically, Mobb Deep got me in the mood 2 write. It'z original. May seem like some in there tho. joe - I might not put this one up. Depends on how it turns out. (not that it'll be bad) Edited November 13, 2004 by mfuqua23 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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