MissAshley Posted October 4, 2004 Report Share Posted October 4, 2004 (edited) My Heart's Soul...written@5:15am 10-4-04 I'm sitting here wondering what tomorrow will bring to me And I'm happy because an Angel started to sing to me Her lyrics told me I could be whatever I wanted to be And as soon as I unshackled my soul, I'd truly be free So I took her advice and used it to the best of my ability Because I couldn't let insecurities overcome mental agility I must stay on task, focus, and do my best always Because happiness is measured in good faith and not in good praise I must follow my passion wherever it leads In order to mend my soul; my heart must bleed And rid itself of pain and make room for a vacancy To keep ahold of my passion and the places that it's taken me My joy on paper, my soul's center in a pen Everyday I hope and pray this song will never end My soul wrote the lyrics that my heart sings And the chorus plays everytime an Angel spreads its wings Edited October 4, 2004 by willjadafan Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members willsmithfan1 Posted October 4, 2004 Members Report Share Posted October 4, 2004 Really good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazzy Julie Posted October 4, 2004 Report Share Posted October 4, 2004 what a great way to get out of writers block, i really liked it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted October 4, 2004 Report Share Posted October 4, 2004 :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted October 4, 2004 Report Share Posted October 4, 2004 I loved every bit of it. Felt like a rap verse. Very Very good. I got really n2 it when I read... "So I took her advice and used it to the best of my ability Because I couldn't let insecurities overcome mental agility" - that was such a flowing set of lines. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissAshley Posted October 4, 2004 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2004 thanx a lot guys! I'm an aspiring author and poet, and I recently wrote my second free verse piece that kinda turned into a poem and nobody's read it but my Mommy and I wanna post it and see what you guys think...it's probably different from what most of you might be used to though, I'll post it later Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted October 5, 2004 Report Share Posted October 5, 2004 It flows so well! :thumb: Keep on posting 'em! :rock: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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