bigted Posted October 8, 2004 Report Share Posted October 8, 2004 What's up y'all, I was going through some of my old rhymes and I noticed that I have some verses that I used to write that I didn't count as a song or a poem, they were sorta like freestyle verses 'cause I would feel hyped after school to write some rhymes for the freestyle battle the next day in school, that's how I sharpened my skills check out this verse, enjoy! “Y'all Didn't Want It” Written By Big Ted on February 27, 2003 Your whole crew is a miscast Y'all ruined the script fast Y'all won't improve against hot **** raps That'll zoom in your heart fast And'll only move in as a heart attack Or to make that more complex It'll be a cardiac arrest Teddy brings the hardest rap to test I noticed how you thought it was easy, man now you're dead I'll give you some credit though A'ight the word deader doesn't exist yo But that's the only credit you'll get And why do I need to kill you over and over again That's the point I was originally making Dumbass, I'll wreck your rims Punk, and I'll impress your chick Quit talkin' like you're a member of Tribe Called Quest When you ain't getting' no “Hot Sex On a platter” Besides I'm the one rapper That girls wanna call master And I'm also the one rapper Who you won't batter I'm not soft as a cake mix Whatever I want man, i'm taking Don't judge what I'm making Without knowing what I'm capable of This ain't 'bout being high for the moment Get it straight how Teddy's mind's more focused This ain't 'bout being high on the dope **** Like the coke or the Chronic This is motivated 'bout mc'ing aeorodynamics Not staying on ground All the hot elevated sound Got the spot motivated to bounce With me like they blazed an ounce I'm talking literally how speciafically I dominate today another bout **** the hydro I'm just so high on life's flow Whatever cash I make, only I know I don't let out the figures Don't make me bust out another middle finger Don't ever talk down about me like I'm a bitch or a quitter Talkin' 'bout me is gonna get ya This Guerilla MC will wreck ya Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members willsmithfan1 Posted October 8, 2004 Members Report Share Posted October 8, 2004 Das really good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted October 8, 2004 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2004 I'm Glad You Enjoyed It, let's keep the feedback comin'! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted October 9, 2004 Report Share Posted October 9, 2004 Real good rhyme man. It'z always nice 2 look back on old stuff and see how good U were then, and how good U R now. (4 people who stick w/ it) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted October 10, 2004 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2004 Real good rhyme man. It'z always nice 2 look back on old stuff and see how good U were then, and how good U R now. (4 people who stick w/ it) :werd: It's a great feeling when u look at your ol' work and come up wit something new and it's all dope, I try to balance out the rhymes I write about, some battle rhymes, some rleationship rhymes, some political rhyme, mcs like LL, KRS, and FP inspire me to stay consistant as an mc! :dj: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted October 10, 2004 Report Share Posted October 10, 2004 I love the old stuff! i have countless tapes of me rapping when I was little! Some actually quite good and some so so bad!! Its good to see how much you've progressed tho! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted October 11, 2004 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2004 When I get a chance I'm gonna post more of the rhymes I wrote when I was in high school, maybe even some of my 1st rhymes that I wrote in early 2000. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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