J-o-e Posted October 23, 2004 Report Share Posted October 23, 2004 Yet another set of lyrics from me, feedback please....i was wondering cause this is a different sorta song, an emotional one i like to feel Momma You Was Right Written By J-o-e you was right im sorry i was wrong thats why im dedicating this song to the only women i love at the moment see i forget to get you a gift on mothersday and your birthday, but you still didnt care you was the only one to see me butt naked and bare you said i wasnt going the right way at school i was such a fool not listening to, i took the highway kept saying to my friends get out of my way see in school i was kinda pissed off and now all i do is just cough attention seekin, im sorry momma you was right i just of lost my sight Momma You Was Right Hard For Me To Say But Momma You Was Right You Gave Me Somewhere To Lay when i was ill you made me better thats why im sorry for reading your letters cause Momma you know you was right i wish i just knew it, but i learnt it the hard way im sorry for saying so much stuff gave me a place to play food on the table, clothes on my back i dont care if anyone says this song is whack all the matters is that you forgive me but now i can see see i had a go at you for no reason atall but then cause i learnt the hard way i was aiming to fall see i can write a rhyme, but now i can see all the signs this is hard for me to say but its true sometimes i got some clues and got the blues for no reason at all, didnt matter to me i slept and all them drinks you bought i kept and then drank them all and you didnt know thats why this rhyme is made to flow Momma You Was Right Hard For Me To Say But Momma You Was Right You Gave Me Somewhere To Lay done so many wrongs it can never be right i remember the first day you taught me to fly a kite but by that time i was already thinkin and then i had to, no decison but started drinkin at school i had to do a presentation refused to do it, got sent out of class and suspended you said it was ok, but dont do it again i can believe you said that i done it again my fault im apolygze for all the things i done wrong but all these words i spit are never to long see momma i broke that latch and still you always gave me the match we were never to poor, i had a good life but i still think my life sucks but then i strife please forgive me im your son, J-o-e Momma You Was Right Hard For Me To Say But Momma You Was Right You Gave Me Somewhere To Lay Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted October 23, 2004 Report Share Posted October 23, 2004 It'z good, but I think U acknowledged in the song too many times that she was right and U were wrong. Seeing as how U open wit the song, and provide specific examples, there was no need 2 say it again thru-out the song. U already got that point across 2 ya listeners and readers. U could adjust the chorus 2 cover the song overall better. As far as rhymes go, it'z not extraordinary. Just a simple expression. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest princen8 Posted October 24, 2004 Report Share Posted October 24, 2004 its pretty cool Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted October 25, 2004 Report Share Posted October 25, 2004 Nicely done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted October 25, 2004 Report Share Posted October 25, 2004 I could tell that u wrote that song from ur heart and the best songs are the ones that come from ur heart, they don't have to be great lyrically, but if you say something important, then I think that it's dope, great job! :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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