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Momma You Was Right


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Yet another set of lyrics from me, feedback please....i was wondering cause this is a different sorta song, an emotional one i like to feel

Momma You Was Right Written By J-o-e

you was right im sorry i was wrong

thats why im dedicating this song

to the only women i love at the moment

see i forget to get you a gift on mothersday

and your birthday, but you still didnt care

you was the only one to see me butt naked and bare

you said i wasnt going the right way at school

i was such a fool

not listening to, i took the highway

kept saying to my friends get out of my way

see in school i was kinda pissed off

and now all i do is just cough

attention seekin, im sorry momma

you was right

i just of lost my sight

Momma You Was Right

Hard For Me To Say

But Momma You Was Right

You Gave Me Somewhere To Lay

when i was ill you made me better

thats why im sorry for reading your letters

cause Momma you know you was right

i wish i just knew it, but i learnt it the hard way

im sorry for saying so much stuff gave me a place to play

food on the table, clothes on my back

i dont care if anyone says this song is whack

all the matters is that you forgive me

but now i can see

see i had a go at you for no reason atall

but then cause i learnt the hard way i was aiming to fall

see i can write a rhyme,

but now i can see all the signs

this is hard for me to say but its true

sometimes i got some clues and got the blues

for no reason at all, didnt matter to me i slept

and all them drinks you bought i kept

and then drank them all and you didnt know

thats why this rhyme is made to flow

Momma You Was Right

Hard For Me To Say

But Momma You Was Right

You Gave Me Somewhere To Lay

done so many wrongs it can never be right

i remember the first day you taught me to fly a kite

but by that time i was already thinkin

and then i had to, no decison but started drinkin

at school i had to do a presentation

refused to do it, got sent out of class and suspended

you said it was ok, but dont do it again

i can believe you said that i done it again

my fault im apolygze for all the things i done wrong

but all these words i spit are never to long

see momma i broke that latch

and still you always gave me the match

we were never to poor, i had a good life

but i still think my life sucks but then i strife

please forgive me

im your son, J-o-e

Momma You Was Right

Hard For Me To Say

But Momma You Was Right

You Gave Me Somewhere To Lay

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It'z good, but I think U acknowledged in the song too many times that she was right and U were wrong. Seeing as how U open wit the song, and provide specific examples, there was no need 2 say it again thru-out the song. U already got that point across 2 ya listeners and readers. U could adjust the chorus 2 cover the song overall better. As far as rhymes go, it'z not extraordinary. Just a simple expression.

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I could tell that u wrote that song from ur heart and the best songs are the ones that come from ur heart, they don't have to be great lyrically, but if you say something important, then I think that it's dope, great job! :thumb:

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