mfuqua23 Posted December 21, 2004 Report Share Posted December 21, 2004 Hey, been a while since I had a verse up. Oct. 19, 2004 (11:23 a.m. - 11:44 a.m.) Now I got a task, that enemies don't think I can pass Wit the game changin' slow and the names gone fast The way that hip hop's rocked in the days that it came Now they say "gimme the cash", then gimmick the act on stage All I got is the Washingtons, and I'm from the city Washington of PA, and see what they say, rate my cd, on MTV Don't sweat it, off the internet, U shouldn't get it Ruthless in my music movement, gotta stay protected Disrespect it, cuz I'm a low rapper that faces neglect Wait in line 4 my time, then it be like he next I see da vets, get in their eyes, listen 2 my vibe High in the quality of lyrics, not the quantity that gets them high Only time will tell, tryna get a physique like LL Flow like NaS "Illmatic", work at it like 2pac's habit Get talkative, label stock wit it, but I don't match the price Not gonna sell my soul, I'm gonna keep it right So then it be like, U such lame, life stenched wit shame Replied "U don't realize, that inside, I'm Loyal To The Game" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members willsmithfan1 Posted December 21, 2004 Members Report Share Posted December 21, 2004 Did you write that or is that a verse from the album? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fan 4ever Posted December 21, 2004 Report Share Posted December 21, 2004 he wrote it!!! I think it's dope man!! Really!!! You need to record that!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TooFresh Posted December 21, 2004 Report Share Posted December 21, 2004 Man that stuff is incredible... UR Great!!! :clap: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted December 21, 2004 Report Share Posted December 21, 2004 man that was nice... deep.... i wish i knew how to write like that :bowdown: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members willsmithfan1 Posted December 21, 2004 Members Report Share Posted December 21, 2004 Are you gonna record it then? It's really good. :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted December 21, 2004 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2004 he wrote it!!! I think it's dope man!! Really!!! You need to record that!! willsmtihfan1 - of course I wrote it. duh! And it's currently not on any album. Like I said, it's gonna be awhile before I get back behind a microphone. Last thing I did was "New York" (freestyle) that dissed Ja, Jada, & Fat Joe. fan4ever - this will probably be one of the ones that I just gotta have my own beat. Or somethiing I hear will just fit it extremely well. TooFresh - it really is an amazing skill. It's all just a matter of how I go about using it. kbfprince - thing is, I used to think there was a certain way to write. It really doesn't matter as long as U know where ya bringin it from. btw, do U write lyrics? if so, why don't U post some sometime. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted December 22, 2004 Report Share Posted December 22, 2004 kbfprince - thing is, I used to think there was a certain way to write. It really doesn't matter as long as U know where ya bringin it from. btw, do U write lyrics? if so, why don't U post some sometime. :bang: well i used to write but that was when i was ten. i just read some of em again and they suck. trust me, you wouldnt want to read what i wrote. they just didnt flow right now that i read back on em Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted December 22, 2004 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2004 U never know. U started writing raps when U was 10. Only other rapper I know did that was NaS. If U do start writing again, I'm sure U can learn from them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted December 22, 2004 Report Share Posted December 22, 2004 U never know. U started writing raps when U was 10. Only other rapper I know did that was NaS. If U do start writing again, I'm sure U can learn from them. sure thanks 4 the advice, but im not sure about the nas thing. maybe im gonna start writing again :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members willsmithfan1 Posted December 22, 2004 Members Report Share Posted December 22, 2004 U never know. U started writing raps when U was 10. Only other rapper I know did that was NaS. If U do start writing again, I'm sure U can learn from them. sure thanks 4 the advice, but im not sure about the nas thing. maybe im gonna start writing again :thumb: Post your raps when you are done. U can become as good as rappers on this site. :thumb: Good Luck! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted December 22, 2004 Report Share Posted December 22, 2004 yeah, thanks for those words of encouragment FuQ and willsmithfan1. :rock: sure maybe ill post em, but now i just dont know what to write about. i know, write about something that you know but right now my minds blank Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members willsmithfan1 Posted December 22, 2004 Members Report Share Posted December 22, 2004 yeah, thanks for those words of encouragment FuQ and willsmithfan1. :rock: sure maybe ill post em, but now i just dont know what to write about. i know, write about something that you know but right now my minds blank Write about something you feel. Listen to Will's track. He might give you an idea. Then you'll be rapping away. Think of anything really. Something that you believe in and something you do or how you feel...you know anything. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted December 22, 2004 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2004 Write about anticipating Will's track Switch. That's definately a hot topic 4 this site. :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted December 23, 2004 Report Share Posted December 23, 2004 Hey Got Bk lol dope verse man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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