J-o-e Posted February 22, 2005 Report Share Posted February 22, 2005 hey i thought i'd do a battle since i havent in ages, so whoever wants to respond wit a verse by all means do.... i can rap for ages without losing my focus i spit magic, listen me go, hocus pocus raps my hustle so who can compare to that? im tired of battlin the same old cats im sick and tired, of these fools that are wired and most of all, its sickening to get fired i need cash in a long way, i dont wana go astray of the subject im talking about, i cant get pay this is crazy, im going attack anyone for any reason, its treason if i have fun i aint callin out no names, but its a game instead of 10 minutes of fame, for u its shame look in my eye and then go to sleep ya'll are wimps when i see u weep u cant hack the pressure of it all but jus before i fall, i promise to stand tall i was disqualified in the last battle for being late now homey geuss what, its my fate to rip anyone who dare oppose me, but call me out, remember u chose me let me say that ur all alone now look around, nobodys home now isit your time to shine, spit a crime but in the real truth, theres a fine line between crap and rap, slap and a mac can i please turn around and abuse u straight up confuse u, lyrically lose u Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bagotrasho Posted February 26, 2005 Members Report Share Posted February 26, 2005 guess ill be the only guy to take him on then you say youll lyrically lose me' you got it backwards cuz ur the one thats lost i crumbled your rhyme up and in the trash it got tossed you aint ever met the likes of a guy like me im white full of talent and im only 13 just like the prince i keep it clean you say youll beat me man your rhymes i disect i cut your rhymes up like jazzy cuts up the record and now your wrecked im no where near the level of anybody i can barely spit a rhyme but still i hhave you sittin there mezmorized my rap puts you in a trance and i hit you from behind now people will say my rhyme are meedyocer well those people are a buncha jokers my rhymes may be average but if you battle me youll go home in tears cuz you just got embarresed in front of your girl and all your friends when i start rhymin its the start of your end on the rap scene im kinda new but i can still see DR SUESS hhas better rhymes that you one fish two fish red fish blue fish you say youll beat me man you wish like i said i cant rap well but i figure o wut the hell ill keep rhymin no ghetto or hardcore keep that stuff for the record store cuz ill get on the M-I-C then youll see you cant battle me cuz youll surley lose it aint breakin news you knew you didnt stand a chance wen i grabbed the mic your music career flashed before your eyes because it started to die now dont you cry just cuz im fly i ask why? did you even bother to rap your rhymes are so boring i almost took a nap but back on the subject your career is wrecked cuz you wanted to know just how good i could put on a show that wasnt your plan now im passin the mic on to the next man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted February 27, 2005 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2005 ayyo, u rapped the same stuff in the other thread now its my undivided attention that i live this post for dead bagotrasho talkin about me takin out the trash boy one more false more and ill straight whoop your ass ur right u can barely spit a rhyme, so its my time read my line, and then thats it over, no beef, its fine now tell me how can i lose? when i have no reason to abuse u barely dissed me? when im gone i bet you missed me? just last night when this freak of this girl kissed me you'll be the last person on my list that i gotta diss my carrer flashed between my eyes? im hittin all the flies dodgin all the lies, now how u gonna determine who dies? case closed, raps done, here i go again, doin this sh*t for fun now bagotrasho tell me whos won? what? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bagotrasho Posted February 27, 2005 Members Report Share Posted February 27, 2005 well listen up son you already sayin u won i didnt even start to rhyme if u wanna beat me its gonna take some time see u dont understand i couldnt care less about this battle man cuz i have my hopes set higher just like old school the roof the roof the roofs on fire one day ill be a star and youll be some bum sleepin in his car talkin bout "man i remeber wen.... yo forget the past this is NOW that was then while yall be dissin youll be missin me gettin bigger and better ill be on the red carpet im becuase im the trend setter just like p diddy people follow me cant u see wut i do they do who looks up to u? NO ONE thats right cuz my rhymes r tight theyll win me the fight so u gots to relize this battle means jack u outta wack mak see wen i get famous to the radio ull be listenin my rhymes r glistenin u say ur doin this just for fun but thats a lie u just want to be number one but u cant cuz i already reserved that spot im wuts hot ur wuts not i cant wait to read your next set of rhymes in this rap fight cuz i no i make u stay up all night thinkin "ooh how can i beat um" o well wuts where huh wut heres the first clue U CANT that may not make sense but im do fly i can go double platinum off of some crazy rant thats just hoqw much ppl love me so listen up sonny i aint in the game for the money or the fine honeys i mean thats a plus but so wut id do it without the fame and the glory just so i could tell a story made up of rhymes i love the game after im trhough it wont be the same my rap leaves ppl with a blank look on der face kids singin repeatin my rhymes tryin to keep up wit the pace i prove that it dont matter wut ur race if u can entertain then youll be loved it dont matter if u aint a gangtsa thug hey i loved the part in your last rhyme where you said one more false move ill straight whoop your ass but i loved it even more wen NWA said it the first time was it a coincidence or did you copy der rhyme? i aint accusin u of sh*t i just makin a point and thats it so now that im finished and my rhyme is polished post your next rhyme but heed my warning ITLL JUST BE DEMOLISHED Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted February 27, 2005 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2005 i didnt have to say it but u pushed me, didnt u i can spit 62 bars and have 32 cars and i wont be through im just gettin started homey dont its ur fate sometimes i wonder if ur the fish and im givin u the bait what u trying to say, im gonna get domilished man your rap carrer ended before it started, pure ammolished now tell me whos gonna control me? thought u gonna show me? thought u didnt know me? u kno all i say now is blow me your a menace to rap coz ur hardcore, my flow is flawless ever since i got this cordless, mic so quick flow, u kno everytime my show hits the dough, its over another ho but since im jus pissin around for the sake of pissin around listen to me now, pissin around just for the underground to me this **** is so easy, i can write so simply and destroy you with even breakin a sweat, wana bet? its a race and im setting the pace ready set.... why u callin me sonny for, ur nuttin but a cheap whore whos always at the candy store, coz u nothin else more see if u wana fool wit me then foolin is a big mistake when i hit the rap world, i came with a huge shake ur runnin outa time, maybe out of rhyme, maybe its fine who knows all i kno is im gettin this rap shirt sorted, im in my prime homie what u gonna do coz i jus ripped it took the odds turned em around and then flipped it im re writing the script, im the ****, now what u gonna spit fool u can touch this so dont bother trying, frying ur word status is pretty dying, im lyin for your diginity dont make me make another rhyme coz its gonan be a trinity now can i explain myself without doubting myself that selffish people get whats comin to them whack MC's my one and only ambition in this world is to get my cheese so im beggin u please, get down on ya ****ing knees and do what ya want do what ya flaunt, homie its your go, what now? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted February 27, 2005 Report Share Posted February 27, 2005 Wait a minute now let me jump in the round I see how there ain't nobody "Humpin' Around" Like that song from Bobby Brown See though this is "my perrogative" I already spot to hit Y'all easily got knocked a bit Without me even throwing a shot attempt I already have more points This is like Jordan comin' back to destroy All the kids in the league I can easily toy They're 30 but they rhyme like they didn't even reach puberty I'm turnin' 20 and I'm bringin' this game back where it needs to be This is more than just destroying the both of y'all See how this flow's just raw This is just spring training but I'm ready to brawl Like Rickey I'm gonna run past them all See like Heavy D, Big Pun, and 8 Ball I'm "On Point" And if this was b-ball I'd be like Ben Gordon is at the point When you hear me like The Poor Righteous Teachers sayin' "Rock This Funky Joint" I got 5 years of hits already for the crowd to enjoy Day in and day out, I've been eating, sleepin', and mc'in I got a lot of flame now, 'cause my heart burns with versatility Unlike Jay-Z I'm gonna "Change The Game" now 'cause I back the words I speak It's time to be original for a change, no use to repeat When I retire 50 years from now, I'll be known as the lyrical king of 'Jersey And y'all be reminicising the priviledge it was to kick it with me Even if u diss me, you won't limit the goals that I'm soon to reach Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted February 27, 2005 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2005 bigted are you campable to make a rhyme? are u smart enough to read the sign this wasnt ur battle to begin wit, settle the beef punk u betta get back for a crack ya teeth now u wana start this ****, weve been down this road remember, im the grown turtle ur the toad dont think u can out class me, or out rap me coz simply ill constructively eliminate you never hate you, girls never wana date you? what you listening to if ur rappin like that? no offence but dawg that was just plain whack thats not rap how can i understand that i never did plan to be a man standing straight lookin at my pain understand the game and the meaning of my name ya'll know nothing about me so stop judging homie i aint going no where i aint budging but i dont want no hard feelings, so the beef can be stopped but since it just started theres no rush for ur album to be flopped begin of my day is the end of your night im telling you right now imma do it right imma rip this the way i want to coz i can if ya'll dont like my plan, its a scheme u dream to much, to much to cream, what it seems end of the rhyme and bigted my vocab still stronger than yours soon ill be in ya record stores nuttin else but no flaws its my buissness and homey u better get a witness coz nobody in the world wana miss this...haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bagotrasho Posted February 28, 2005 Members Report Share Posted February 28, 2005 (edited) YO man lay off bigted hes a bulls fan so hes my homey to da the end u no J-O-E i was gonna ask u about a ellaboration to make a collaboration i wanted to no if ud be my parter by my side well yo man u talked bout ted now the offer died mabye if u apologize we'll settle this fued and together well ride cuz ill give u props i liked your rhymes they were hot id like to have someone like you in my crew on the spot but in defence of my dawg ted wen u said that stuff it made me see red just like a bull wen i see red ill attack ill hit u so hard youll life'll be outta whack now a couple of rhymes ago u said i was hardcore well u got the wrong mesage u were the one callin ME a whore well if u apologize to ted ill take back this next diss its a rap battle so if i dont diss people will get pissed see if u dont join with me ull never go no where while im goin platinum ull be losin your hair u wanted to no if i wanted to make a betr hey i do and here it is i bet u if u dont join wit me ill get big and ill travel the world with securioty follwin me across the border and youll be the guy at taco makin and takin my order u said dont make me rhyme again or itll be a trinity well make u counted wrong u already rapped 3! how am i supposed to belive u can spout wen u can barely even count? well thats all im sayin did u say sorry to bigted now im kinda tired im goin to bed Edited February 28, 2005 by bagotrasho Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted February 28, 2005 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2005 i aint gonna apologyze for what i said ur gonna go shed a tear in bed "How he gonna diss him like that" coz im swinging dawg, wit a baseball bat what u got? 1,2,3,4 ur rap games sore my rap styles crazy, urs is a complete bore i will never turn my back the point im making look at ur, drug addicts lookin at the joint ur breaking i aint never gonna lose my hair, ur never gonna be there its just a shame i had to diss u first coz of the verse coz i robbed ya purse and i dont like to repeat the stuff i say coz im just on my peak of peer pressure, now dont u dare speak its my turn to burn this line, burn this rhyme homie stop playing its my time, to be on top when u c me in the charts, look at the number one spot u gotta believe kids get killed in trash cans and all ya'll can rap is about them damn afgans screw them we have problems on our own soil let the kettle settle others u will let it boil and im boiling inside, its just my pride never be hesitate to hide, always fighting punching off the haters who oppose me, there lighting there spliffs and then gets the show going but me in the lime light gotta rhyme tight, flowin too much rhymes i spit lines so quick like a train remember the game and most of all remember my name Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bagotrasho Posted March 1, 2005 Members Report Share Posted March 1, 2005 ah ha is that all you got? if you wanna be a rapper boy i sure hope not see cuz im the master blaster read all about it open your door run outside and shout it people on the corner sayin "who ripped that hot rhyme?" heres the answer i was the one to spout it so JOE u think over that offer at all cuz it still stands u gonna accept or just sit there playin with your LIVESTRONG band? o yea by the way HOW OLD ARE YOU cuz youve gotta have somethin better to do instead of battlin a 13 year old and wuts even worse your LOSIN lets resolve the battle or your in for a bruisin you say ive run outta rhymes man i got millions of rhymes in my mind and you say im not good enough to be a celeb? man i spout rhymes like spiderman shoots webs buts the difference between me and him is my rhyme cartridges never run out these dope stupid crush crunk funky fresh rhymes i shout theyre like will's career my rhymes will never end forever and ever theyll keep runnin even after i die like tupac ill keep comin out with raps and theyll go platinum lets count the ways 1 2 3 4 theyll create new levels of platinum for my record sales but u still wanna battle man your rhymes i impale ill pull out my sword and chop your rhymes up ur rhymes are gettin weaker as they go along man thats enough see thats wut separates me and u my rhymes keep goin like that lil pink bunny and once i get big ill be rollin in money but on the other hand your dont last long people wanna here your rhymes less than they wanna see roseanne barr in a thong oo sry thats kinda wrong but see its worth it cuz your rhymes die before u can even type um i dont even see y u bother ta write um nobody likes um except u thats it sry but its reality you dont have the ability to put out a hit i mean u got the potential but u need to work on your essentials u use all your good rhymes right away then u cant think of none the next day thats not a rapper thats a one night stand y dont u go pick up a guitar and join a punk rock band they aint got ta do nuttin sounds like the job for u my friend you say evryones gonna remember your name how they gonna do that wen u aint in the game do wut me and my friends are tryin to do write some good rhymes and try and gt them on the radio u never no u could be the next fresh prince but still i na rap battle ill be the one to make u wince no matter how big u get ill still take u down, settle the bet so please dont even fret lets just end this battle now before you get beat down but i guess now after me sayin that ull act like a lil child and respond with some doo doo rhymes u think is da bomb but they wont be so you can quote me just stop it now but u wont take my advice ill come on here in a few days and youll have you rhymes but yo man heres the word your rhymes i gettin old like jerry rice he can still catch but can run u no just like u can do the structure BUT YOUR RHYMES DONT FLOW so yo i guess u will im endin it now so write your little rhymes and think u won but ull never win wit that attituide son Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted March 1, 2005 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2005 ugh yo, i dont wana be like this but theres no choice is there only enough reasoning for 1 voice this is crazy when u say im lazy when i flow bitch this is my dough, this is my game and since i wrote my name i show no shame ill stand tall and when its all over i will never try and through a brick in the back of your rover see u jus say i forfiet and then u gotta sit and listen to the real MC flow, look at my show ill tell u how rip a crowd up so many times, so many rhymes its like that movie but wit rap, erm hitch they aint got a job for me huh? i shoulda produced switch someones gettin mad inside, jesus christ it hit ur pride u got realivtes comin in? im sure theres a low tide u dnt even derserve spittin amongst me but this rap **** will forever be reserved for j-o-e i dont care if ur 13 yrs old, u wanted some so if im giving u some for fun and when im done ill make sure ill put a sticker on u sayin "Ripped" look at the way j-o-e just flipped the script look how he rhymes its so crazy, he should be my baby u gonna shut up or am i gonna make u? im not even botherin but i can lyrically shake u what u gonna do when i strip all your rap sense here i go, watch me rip u alive, it makes no sense so go on trash, ill bash ya head wit some tools im bustin in, and im makin sure them fools are leavin in body bags, and u can take the rubbish out now what the HELL U ON ABOUT where i can shout but ill never doubt, am i goin on or do u want me to stop if u say stop ill say stop but till then shut the F*ck up, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bagotrasho Posted March 2, 2005 Members Report Share Posted March 2, 2005 EXCUSE ME FOR MY LANGUAGE ITS JUST FOR THIS SONG I AINT GHETTO OR TRYIN TO BE IT Man you tell me to shut up yet the one who keeps talkin back i said to settle it but u had to respond again with some rhymes that were outta wack man get your stuff straight get your rhymes back in line cuz theyre diein under mine theyre batteries are out theyre runnin outta power then all i have to do is spout some little rhymes that will devour and let me guess you say sumthin like "YEA YOUR RHYMES ARE LITTLE" man ur becomin so predictable im feelin sorry for your usless dribble just like PAC said "I ain't a killer but don't push me" sorry for my language but joe ur actin like a pussy heres my point ur a hypocrite and u cant deny the **** every single rhyme ur talkin crap and cussin ever song it becomes more and more and then u say im a problem CUZ IM HARDCORE? ur the one out there sayin to shut the **** up u may cencsor it but man u still thought it up that dont excuse u from nuttin i just wanna get my point across i aint hardcore or ghetto i may be white but i rap i dont listen to heavy metal! i may not have cds, and agent, a label and all that but thats just cuz im a kid and i cant find a partner to enter the game by my side i dont wanna go alone i want someone by my side and i aint got a girl or nuttin to back my sorry ass up cuz im a ugly mutha ****a and the girls at school just wont suck it up! and see wut the hells on the inside the personality the charm to all u ****in bitches i dont mean to alarm! i no wen im famous ull be grabbin for my arm but i aint gonna let u come within a state of me WELL MAN I DONT CARE WUT U GOT TO SAY ABOUT ME CUZ I AINT POSTIN BACK THIS **** WACK SO GO AHEAD AND TALK ALL YOUR **** GODAMNIT I JUST WANNA BE A HIT IM GONNA KEEP IT CLEAN IOTS JUST RIGHT NOW IM MAD AS HELL THE GIRL SAYS NO EVERYTHINGS GOIN WRONG SO TO ALL U MTOHER ****IN HATERS IM MOTHER****IN GONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scyhigh99 Posted March 3, 2005 Report Share Posted March 3, 2005 (edited) i'm white, in a stereotypical way can't jump or rhyme or flow, but hey i don't care, it's my birthday and i'm here to jump into this battle with a verse beyond compare in horribleness, but that's fine with me it's not like i ever intended to be an MC i'm just bored, and avoiding homework so i'm here boldly going beyond like captain kirk spittin rhymes, and wasting time this must be a crime to take u rappers in your prime fill your contest up with this slime i'm, so incredibly untalented but I still rep Boston better than marky mark ever did and finally, in conclusion j-o-e and bagatrash: you're not amusing think you got skills? you're fulla delusion do us all a favor and go into seclusion no more wack raps, please, no more abusing why'd i feel the need to diss? how confusing Edited March 3, 2005 by scyhigh99 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted March 4, 2005 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2005 ive just taken out the trash have i pushed someone so far? im leavin u for dead inside, ash to ash but dust to dust its a must, how many bar? u dont get it yet do u, ur crazy arn't u? u losing ur tempter arnt u u cant hack to be an MC talking about me cussing isit in your nature to start fusing saying i dont cuss in my rhymes and then go on a mad one homie im doing this for fun, rippin it 1 by 1, anyway im glad your gone, i can sing my song y u can go someway and play wit that thong man put that away, nobody wana see that it aint rap, ur talkin pure crap im rechargable so if i did run out imma come back next week about to shout i dont stop hollerin, its what i do next we someone gonna say yo what the hell happened to you i dont have to prove myself to anyone, anything i wish i was rich enough to buy things, any ring and give it to ya girl and she be like ohh u so kind oh j-o-e give it to me baby, hit me with one more line or maybe one more rhyme, whatver i say theres a meaning i geuss that u didnt get lean back, u didnt stop leaning but i dont stop learning, my knowledge grows stronger just like my vocab, he just keeps getting longer but dont take me as a groupie i wont hold your arm ill never try and harm, but if you hear an alarm better run fool coz im on my way for a pay day i knew i was whack once, fell back and went astray u sed u was an ugly mother, not gonna sware, not another idiot who tried to beat me, to j-o-e its so easy im drifiting past oppenets, for me its so breezy why u quoted pac words for, u dont derserve to i geuss ill beat u last, give u a place and reserve u who said i was gonna be a hater? its one of those debaters u kno one of the ones i go past and then go c ya laters now scyhigh jus coz its your birthday imma not abuse u but the answer to your question......imma confuse u completely illuse u, u gonna wake up thinkin u a rap star but ur dreams are too high, jus plain too far i got skillz to heal, keepin it real u kno the deal the case is sealed, u gotta feel what imma do to win this battle coz i started is to leave ya dreams dead, jus broken hearted nuttin u can do to move me from my spot u want sum, come on homie, give it ya best shot.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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