fabman Posted March 18, 2005 Report Share Posted March 18, 2005 Why All This ? (F. Froio) Tell Me Why We don’t look at the sky Tell Me Why All this Negative Things My 1st example is rap music All this negative things Nothin’ bout love anymore Like there were before Bout beatiful things, yo Only violence no, no, no All bout killing While their money’s filling U Can’t Feel The Vibe Can’t Feel What Many Artists Describe Ev’rybody wanna be a gangsta Da coolest Pranksta Why did they kill Jam Master Jay or 2Pac If now they still could rock? Tell Me Why We don’t look at the sky Tell Me Why All this Negative Things 2x Why can’t we give to poor kids? There are so many children dead Because they haven’t a piece of Bread The only things they bring are death and scars Killing, warriors feel like the superstars Why can’t there be peace Only bombs exploding and blooding knees Human beings are dying While soldiers in their jets are flying Why the so many people died in the Twin Tower’ Because Osama and co. had to show their power? Man, don’t understand me wrong I’m not talkin but violent movies But bout reality: Haven’t we learned somethin’ so long And That’s Why I Write this song To ask Why Why? Why? Why? Tell Me Why We don’t look at the sky Why? Why? Why? Tell Me Why All this Negative Things? Why? Why? Why? 3x That's a very serious track for my style, but I like it... Tell me how u find it. What u like of it, what u don't like--- THX! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lerkot Posted March 18, 2005 Report Share Posted March 18, 2005 I like a couple of the rhymes but I prefer the first song you did. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted March 18, 2005 Report Share Posted March 18, 2005 I didn't like this line 'Why did they kill Jam Master Jay or 2Pac' It should be "and'. u could just take the 'or' out also. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted March 19, 2005 Report Share Posted March 19, 2005 It's pretty good for a serious song, but I would change a few of the words a little bit. good story though! :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted March 19, 2005 Report Share Posted March 19, 2005 :ditto: Have you been inspired by the Will and Mary J song? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fabman Posted March 20, 2005 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2005 no. haven't heard it yet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted March 21, 2005 Report Share Posted March 21, 2005 Good job! :afro: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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