JUSTA RHYME

[bagotrasho]

Hey heres my second rhyme still no particular subject just a little rhyme

Hey this thing called Hip Hop

Is takin me to the Tip Top

of the mountain

but I'm still drinkin outta the water fountain

bottled water and fancy jewerly

isn't what interests dudes like me

im just tryin to make a little money

mabye even get a honey

it aint so easy for us dude who look and talk a lil funny

but once i get up on the M-I-C

i go ker-azee

then you see

ima hell of a emcee

comin straight outta CHI-TOWN

believe me its a FLY-TOWN

cuz we got guys like kanye west and MISTA TOUNGE TWISTA

one time the dude talked so fast that his tounge got a blista

and jesus is walkin with MR. WEST

cuz hes ranked up there with the best

they fit in around the rest

they got other emcees with sweat tricklin down there chest

but it aint about them

its about me my names homerun

im just in the game for the fun

i aint got no gun

but I'm the one

whos gonna break the world outta the Hardcore trance

Then my music will be what ur listenin to when you dance

I've got the heart of tupac

the skill of Nas

in my rhymes i dont even pause

i keep goin and goin

never stop to take a breath

cuz those who stop and hesistate r makin their own death

cuz you cant stop to think when our battlin the likes of me

im standin with the mic wearin my nikes

well thats it im finished

this is the rhyme i spun

nobody won

yo now the song is DONE

[mfuqua23]

I liked this one all the way thru. Good job :thumb:

[bigted]

There's some good lines in there, you have better rhyme structure than I did when I started, good job again! :kool:

Edited March 27, 2005 by bigted