DevilsJim89 Posted March 28, 2005 Report Share Posted March 28, 2005 I've finally made a new song. It's based on my recent experiences with my girlie, well ex-girlie and how I've been feeling. Title: Missin' You Date: March 28, 2005 can't stop thinkin bout you complete complextion of my boo time between us, never froze it flew but i never want to say im through because girl, late at night when im alone thinkin of hearin your voice and feelin your tone when we used to be up late on the phone my feelings never changed, drama happen now i sit here, quietly rappin' about the good old days, great times can't be described even in eight rhymes theres just something about the way face to face or in school just sayin hey i can't think of another way but missin' you is what im tryin to say (Chorus) im missin you from my heart its true aint nothin' new just wanna be with you its been awhile since it ended maybe you went on, but my heart aint mended my insides still twisted and bended emotions hurt and dented im a man girl, still maturing and growing livin' and learning bein smart what im showin listenin to old songs, take me to the fall halloween evenin, swinging and all relaxing with you, because you were at my side i was bein myself, aint nothin to hide when im around you, you make me feel free people tellin me to move on but let me be teenage love it maybe common or rare but i loved bein with you playin in your hair i look at the pictures of us together i want to be the exception of nothing lasts forever (Chorus X4) If I had one wish, i would wish for you but right now theres nothing i can do possibly gone thanks to my mistakes moved on maybe but my heart still aches like a part of me is not attached girl, you had it all and it was unmatched your eyes sparkle, and your face glisten let me explain, just please listen without you i just feel torn apart im tellin the truth, straight from my heart im missin' you (Chorus x6) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted March 28, 2005 Report Share Posted March 28, 2005 That's a nice song writing about your experiences, living and learning through everything in our lives makes us smarter and helps us come up with strong lyrics if we choose to, good job, I enjoyed reading that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted March 28, 2005 Report Share Posted March 28, 2005 Yo Jim. Great emotion to get off. Sorry to hear it tho. Since I was listening to my JJFP instrumentals, I happen to rap it wit "Ain't No Place Like Home" and it goes great. Keep ya head up man. I know U ain't gonna let her dictate U. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted March 28, 2005 Report Share Posted March 28, 2005 Good song writing thats exactly what i try and do, write with experience.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WesSyde Posted March 29, 2005 Report Share Posted March 29, 2005 dope lyrics man, i wish i could write like that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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