Members bagotrasho Posted March 31, 2005 Members Report Share Posted March 31, 2005 (edited) Hey I think it still needs a little work but heres my bnew song just wrote it today “ANGEL” Verse One I’m here to tell a story About this girl who just ignores me She’s a real fly honey Not just in it for the money To a relationship she brings passion Always up to date in fashion To get her number dudes be dashin She’s got these two nice Ol’….. And this real tight Ol’…. But there’ just one problem She’s so stuck up only goes out with the flyest of men It’s just one relationship after another again and again So I’m pickin up my paper and pen To tell you bout’ this girl dat thinks she’s an angel…… CHORUS She thinks she’s an angel She thinks she’s an angel Isn’t she just so perfect? She thinks she’s an angel Cuz they way she talks, laughs, and sings Hey girl if you’re such an angel LIFT ME UP ON YOUR WINGS VERSE 2 Hey! What’s wrong with you? Why do you ignore me every time I try to talk to you? You be like “Boy Talk to the Hand” Ok listen you just don’t understand So let me explain it to ya It don’t matter how fly you be You should still talk to guys like me Well now guess what you lost the chance Now you’ll never get me forget the romance I no when I get big You’ll come crawlin on your knees Beggin like “PLEASE go out with me” “Take me to those Celeb parties!” “Can you get me on OPRAH?” Let me think “Uhhhhhh nope a” So listen to this beat I ain’t kissing your feet I don’t care if you the hottest girl out there Your time to get me ran out there Every time we talked online you’d act all nice And I’d try to get romantic with you Then the next day you’d have copies of the conversation AND PASSIN THEM OUT People pointing and laughin at me IT MADE ME WANNA SHOUT I wanted to go over there and smack you in head But I’m too nice for that so I just crumpled my anger up tossed it under the bed CHORUS VERSE 3 Ok you got the picture yet? Don’t ask the girl out unless you're a star or I’ll bet She’ll laugh right in your face Make you feel down and disgraced Doesn’t matter time nor place She don’t got feeling for others Basically she’ll make you feel like **** But she doesn’t tell any of this to her father and mother Around them she’s ‘Daddy’s little girl’ The perfect child it makes me wanna hurl Why do you put up this act for mom and dad? Then come to school and be actin all slutty and bad Makin guys feel like dirt Wearin these tight shirts and skirts Does mommy know your school’s biggest flirt? What would daddy say? If he knew how you actin all day Well that’s it this rhyme is threw I bet now I’m the guy you wish you woulda gotten to knew You always gotta eat your food off a golden plate Well’s heres my word girl “YOU AIN’T THAT GREAT!” CHORUS (2 TIMES) Edited March 31, 2005 by bagotrasho Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted March 31, 2005 Report Share Posted March 31, 2005 If people were kinda dazed to ya song, these lines would catch em... -"She’s so stuck up only goes out with the flyest of men It’s just one relationship after another again and again" And I'd change the chorus to wings instead of wing. I could've swore Angels had a pair. Just a small note concerning that. I really liked the rest of it. It would be a nice listen. :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bagotrasho Posted March 31, 2005 Author Members Report Share Posted March 31, 2005 And I'd change the chorus to wings instead of wing. I could've swore Angels had a pair. Just a small note concerning that. LOL thanks for pointin out my mistakes guess i forgot to put an S i'll add that in Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted March 31, 2005 Report Share Posted March 31, 2005 It's a nice lil' storytelling song, I could get a visual from reading that, nuff props! :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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