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Bagotrasho where are ya skills/

you got no mo skill than D'angelo/

however he feels/

you sound like a trashbag/

you might need to change yo name to talentless Ms.scalawag/

I spit flows sicker/

I damn near spit flu's/

you tha biggest disappointment like Ashton in Guess who/

now about that long verse comment/

my point was that if you can't say what you got to say in a short verse/

then your skill are in a hearse/

:afro: :ali:

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last but not least, i am a rap beast

after 11 lines of words jiggys rap has ceased

your rhymes are weak, have you much to say?

make them longer, im like the third to tell you today

get youself some glasses or look at the screen better

your flow is bad...straight up freaky just like loretta

but i give you props and respect you for tryin

i hope i didnt burn you too hard, i didnt mean to make you start cryin

look at you, a big willie, a whopping 35 posts

tryin a be a verteran and now your already toast

i bet your not good at sports cause your not good at defence

and nobody can picture you good at offense

hey, the truth is the truth, and sometimes it hurt

your rhymes are dead, buried in dirt

well im gonna stop now, you've been embarressed enough

so walk it off and pretend to be tuff

one more thing for you to remember

raps not your bag man, try joining a choir

or a better idea just stop and retire

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my rapping is the same of scrapping

ur in my submission and ur tappin

nuttin more excitin than a battle being won

but homie dont get me wrong, its for fun

dont take it serouisly, u doin it for fame

i couldnt hack that, it would drive me insane

its crazy some say that im gone in the brain

but i believe what im sayin all the time

if u dont like this rhyme, read it line by line

ur not old enough ur man but think like a boy

just looking at the nine and think its a toy

but i dont want to go on like a rada

so ill just buy this prada, and lucci

ya'll know im rich enough to have gucci

Jokes!

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willisill yo rhymes are cool, i aint gon front wit cha/

but it's only my duty to get on point wit cha/

in case you havent fully read and understood my last post/

you know tha one when i roasted bagotrasho into toast/

i said say what you got to say in a short verse/

i see you got board and had nothin to do but count tha lines in my verse/

and thats tha worst/

you say i dont play defense, why should i/

i play offense so well it doesnt matter if you got the ball i/

rhyme so dangerous you might need to wear a vest/

cuz i shoot off rhymes that can penetrate yo chest/

and that goes out anyone else that wanna test/

In case you havent noticed this rap page has been put to rest/

:switch: :ali:

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Put to rest? Well its time to revive it

Im a drop the bomb and it'll be hard to survive it

Verse dont rhyme with verse

You wanted some tips? Dont be the worst

Try a little harder, think it through

Battle more about me then more about you

You say you dont need defense when in reality its all you do

Another tip:Swat the fly insted of saying "Shoo"

That way their gone and cant come back to bite you

And no more dukes up casue they wont come back to fight you

End of my response and end of this fued

Sorry to destroy you and for being so rude

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im going crazy with this beef

somebody watch out before i knock out teeth

homie its not my fault u got me started

when im finished u gon be broken hearted

nuttin else to do but pray

to god and hope for a better way

or maybe wot pac sed a better way

will is ill what bombs u droppin

all i see from u is floppin

if u bite me homie ill bite u back

get a classic tape and put it on the rack

but dont be afraid in what i am saying

just pay attention coz u the one prayin

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I killed Don twice, call me the grim reaper

Apu as your icon, well im the zoo keeper

Look before you leap, you landed in a trap

I thought don was bad, but apparently your just crap

Past post you said you buy gucci and prada

I thought you were a boy,your joking, you just gotta

Your right, winnin a battle is exciting, its very true

But you've never experianced that with the rhymes that you do

I'm dont fear the words that you use battle

I'm usually not scared of a little baby with a rattle

Its winding down now,and your sweatin, i see

Cause your thinkin of the next battle that you'll have with me

My lyrically murder, it should be a mortal sin

Some advice for you: dont start battles that you cant win

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Ive been watching this nooby fight for a long time

Well now I'll show you how to rhyme

I can start with the point of this somethin; ya'll suck

If you get a hit or two well congrats but its only luck

Will is ill all you can do is defend

If you wanna battle, you have to know how to offend

When it comes to you, even a new rhymer like me

can cut you to pieces like if you were an kiwi

To start with if beating you is like beating a hill

Beating me is like beating Will together with uncle Phil

Stupid comparisons is my way of saying

That im sure you're praying

about me not staying

But I will and im here to kill

Every man saying a bad word will pay a large bill

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that sucked.

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You say im defendin insted of attackin

Im gonna kick you out so better start packin

Three against one now i understand 'trasho

And its easy for us cause we got a good flow

Lerkot, nows the big man on campus

Just cause he posts alot, dont mean we care bout his

Your here to kill? Well now its killa vs killa

I spit flames from my mouth just like godzilla

You think your so tuff and that i can not take you

Your starting to crack and now im going to break you

Your stupid comparisons are just your way of sayin....

Nothing really, you set me up for a really good slayin

Your right when you said your rhyme sucked

Why you scared of bad words? Just face it your f***ed

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Once again it's my turn to jump in

My respect is earned you better just quit

'Cause anybody who yearns to stay will slump big

When I burn up the flame you're skills will bust quick

I'm a veteran in this game if you didn't know you'll soon learn this

I'm here to bust a couple of rhymes

Bringin' the adrenline rush like Fresh Prince and Busta Rhymes

I could beat you with my head without grabbin' a nine

Then I'll be tearin' up your girlfriend's spine

I'm a "sex machine" like James Brown, I bring the funk to the rhyme

So you better step your way down and don't waste another moment of your time

When y'all lost this battle to Big Ted who penetrates the most explosive lines

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Veterans die too, but there'll be no shrine

I do this for fun, you come here cause you want to shine

You say you rippen up my girlfriend's spine?

When in reality your girlfriend is really mine

Claming to be a sex machine, thats crossing the border

Plus from what girls have told me, i'd say your out of order

If a girl say she like you, shes messing wit your mind

Either that or the girl definalty must be blind

You say you use your head to battle like its something new

Avoidin usin a nine when i bet you got two

Just to look cool and act like you hood

Can't beat me in a battle man, there's no way you could

You and rap are two seperate things you gotta distinguish

You burn up the flame but that flame i'll extinguish

I took care of you and it was a breeze

Havent lost yet, next victim please!

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Aight I have to admit

That my last flow was a lil' average

But now I'm back to roll like killer savage

If you continue criticize my words I'll snatch your necklace

I know your girl remembers the times I'd be smashing it

That's why she writes me letters like "Loretta" sayin' she wants to have my kids

I was gonna let you slide since you can't dance, kid

This is the end of your joyride 'cause I'm "Comin' To The Stage" battlin'

Your style's more hyped up now like Mike Tyson and the Aftermath gimmicks

The only way you'll win is if you pay me to write you punchlines, when you have wack lyrics

Gimmicks over talent these days is the trend

It's my job to destroy the average beats and hooks and help the rhyme animals resurface

That's what'll happen when I get signed to Overbrook by the Fresh Prince

You better not look for a career in rappin' and look for another occupation

After witness your queer shot attempt I'm still blazin'

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oh we're battlin agin I see

verse dont rhyme wit verse you need hooked on phonics i see

yeah i demanded tips but i was talkin about money

give a shout out to J-O-E cuz his rhymes are pretty funny :hilarious:

i dont have a beat so i freestyle acapella

so forgive me if my rhymes are a little rocked up fella

yeah Will is ill in a good way, but you ill in the worst way

so eat an apple a day it'll keep tha doctor away

this aint 8mile them people had a script so it was easy

Eminem didnt, thats why in the movie his stomach was always quezzy

I was thru but you brought this page back into action

you're yesterdays news i dont even remember how we started clashin

so feel me like you felt "uuhhh" on Willenium

now look at willisill you see what i done did to him

he's turnin red he might spontaneously combust

he's sufferin from frustration he might even cuss

you're one of them rappers i aint gon say need to quit

but its like you hit rock bottom and you need to have a sit

:ali:

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