Members bagotrasho Posted April 2, 2005 Author Members Report Share Posted April 2, 2005 yea just for fun k aint got a beef wit either of u Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Jiggy Posted April 4, 2005 Report Share Posted April 4, 2005 yall rhymes are tight, yeah i do it fo fun, i aint got no beef either; im a kick another freestyle 5th period :afro: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Jiggy Posted April 4, 2005 Report Share Posted April 4, 2005 Bagotrasho where are ya skills/ you got no mo skill than D'angelo/ however he feels/ you sound like a trashbag/ you might need to change yo name to talentless Ms.scalawag/ I spit flows sicker/ I damn near spit flu's/ you tha biggest disappointment like Ashton in Guess who/ now about that long verse comment/ my point was that if you can't say what you got to say in a short verse/ then your skill are in a hearse/ :afro: :ali: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted April 13, 2005 Report Share Posted April 13, 2005 last but not least, i am a rap beast after 11 lines of words jiggys rap has ceased your rhymes are weak, have you much to say? make them longer, im like the third to tell you today get youself some glasses or look at the screen better your flow is bad...straight up freaky just like loretta but i give you props and respect you for tryin i hope i didnt burn you too hard, i didnt mean to make you start cryin look at you, a big willie, a whopping 35 posts tryin a be a verteran and now your already toast i bet your not good at sports cause your not good at defence and nobody can picture you good at offense hey, the truth is the truth, and sometimes it hurt your rhymes are dead, buried in dirt well im gonna stop now, you've been embarressed enough so walk it off and pretend to be tuff one more thing for you to remember raps not your bag man, try joining a choir or a better idea just stop and retire Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted April 13, 2005 Report Share Posted April 13, 2005 my rapping is the same of scrapping ur in my submission and ur tappin nuttin more excitin than a battle being won but homie dont get me wrong, its for fun dont take it serouisly, u doin it for fame i couldnt hack that, it would drive me insane its crazy some say that im gone in the brain but i believe what im sayin all the time if u dont like this rhyme, read it line by line ur not old enough ur man but think like a boy just looking at the nine and think its a toy but i dont want to go on like a rada so ill just buy this prada, and lucci ya'll know im rich enough to have gucci Jokes! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Jiggy Posted April 13, 2005 Report Share Posted April 13, 2005 willisill yo rhymes are cool, i aint gon front wit cha/ but it's only my duty to get on point wit cha/ in case you havent fully read and understood my last post/ you know tha one when i roasted bagotrasho into toast/ i said say what you got to say in a short verse/ i see you got board and had nothin to do but count tha lines in my verse/ and thats tha worst/ you say i dont play defense, why should i/ i play offense so well it doesnt matter if you got the ball i/ rhyme so dangerous you might need to wear a vest/ cuz i shoot off rhymes that can penetrate yo chest/ and that goes out anyone else that wanna test/ In case you havent noticed this rap page has been put to rest/ :switch: :ali: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted April 13, 2005 Report Share Posted April 13, 2005 Put to rest? Well its time to revive it Im a drop the bomb and it'll be hard to survive it Verse dont rhyme with verse You wanted some tips? Dont be the worst Try a little harder, think it through Battle more about me then more about you You say you dont need defense when in reality its all you do Another tip:Swat the fly insted of saying "Shoo" That way their gone and cant come back to bite you And no more dukes up casue they wont come back to fight you End of my response and end of this fued Sorry to destroy you and for being so rude Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted April 13, 2005 Report Share Posted April 13, 2005 im going crazy with this beef somebody watch out before i knock out teeth homie its not my fault u got me started when im finished u gon be broken hearted nuttin else to do but pray to god and hope for a better way or maybe wot pac sed a better way will is ill what bombs u droppin all i see from u is floppin if u bite me homie ill bite u back get a classic tape and put it on the rack but dont be afraid in what i am saying just pay attention coz u the one prayin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted April 13, 2005 Report Share Posted April 13, 2005 I killed Don twice, call me the grim reaper Apu as your icon, well im the zoo keeper Look before you leap, you landed in a trap I thought don was bad, but apparently your just crap Past post you said you buy gucci and prada I thought you were a boy,your joking, you just gotta Your right, winnin a battle is exciting, its very true But you've never experianced that with the rhymes that you do I'm dont fear the words that you use battle I'm usually not scared of a little baby with a rattle Its winding down now,and your sweatin, i see Cause your thinkin of the next battle that you'll have with me My lyrically murder, it should be a mortal sin Some advice for you: dont start battles that you cant win Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lerkot Posted April 13, 2005 Report Share Posted April 13, 2005 Ive been watching this nooby fight for a long time Well now I'll show you how to rhyme I can start with the point of this somethin; ya'll suck If you get a hit or two well congrats but its only luck Will is ill all you can do is defend If you wanna battle, you have to know how to offend When it comes to you, even a new rhymer like me can cut you to pieces like if you were an kiwi To start with if beating you is like beating a hill Beating me is like beating Will together with uncle Phil Stupid comparisons is my way of saying That im sure you're praying about me not staying But I will and im here to kill Every man saying a bad word will pay a large bill -------- that sucked. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted April 13, 2005 Report Share Posted April 13, 2005 You say im defendin insted of attackin Im gonna kick you out so better start packin Three against one now i understand 'trasho And its easy for us cause we got a good flow Lerkot, nows the big man on campus Just cause he posts alot, dont mean we care bout his Your here to kill? Well now its killa vs killa I spit flames from my mouth just like godzilla You think your so tuff and that i can not take you Your starting to crack and now im going to break you Your stupid comparisons are just your way of sayin.... Nothing really, you set me up for a really good slayin Your right when you said your rhyme sucked Why you scared of bad words? Just face it your f***ed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted April 14, 2005 Report Share Posted April 14, 2005 (edited) Once again it's my turn to jump in My respect is earned you better just quit 'Cause anybody who yearns to stay will slump big When I burn up the flame you're skills will bust quick I'm a veteran in this game if you didn't know you'll soon learn this I'm here to bust a couple of rhymes Bringin' the adrenline rush like Fresh Prince and Busta Rhymes I could beat you with my head without grabbin' a nine Then I'll be tearin' up your girlfriend's spine I'm a "sex machine" like James Brown, I bring the funk to the rhyme So you better step your way down and don't waste another moment of your time When y'all lost this battle to Big Ted who penetrates the most explosive lines Edited April 14, 2005 by bigted Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted April 14, 2005 Report Share Posted April 14, 2005 Veterans die too, but there'll be no shrine I do this for fun, you come here cause you want to shine You say you rippen up my girlfriend's spine? When in reality your girlfriend is really mine Claming to be a sex machine, thats crossing the border Plus from what girls have told me, i'd say your out of order If a girl say she like you, shes messing wit your mind Either that or the girl definalty must be blind You say you use your head to battle like its something new Avoidin usin a nine when i bet you got two Just to look cool and act like you hood Can't beat me in a battle man, there's no way you could You and rap are two seperate things you gotta distinguish You burn up the flame but that flame i'll extinguish I took care of you and it was a breeze Havent lost yet, next victim please! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted April 14, 2005 Report Share Posted April 14, 2005 Aight I have to admit That my last flow was a lil' average But now I'm back to roll like killer savage If you continue criticize my words I'll snatch your necklace I know your girl remembers the times I'd be smashing it That's why she writes me letters like "Loretta" sayin' she wants to have my kids I was gonna let you slide since you can't dance, kid This is the end of your joyride 'cause I'm "Comin' To The Stage" battlin' Your style's more hyped up now like Mike Tyson and the Aftermath gimmicks The only way you'll win is if you pay me to write you punchlines, when you have wack lyrics Gimmicks over talent these days is the trend It's my job to destroy the average beats and hooks and help the rhyme animals resurface That's what'll happen when I get signed to Overbrook by the Fresh Prince You better not look for a career in rappin' and look for another occupation After witness your queer shot attempt I'm still blazin' Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Jiggy Posted April 14, 2005 Report Share Posted April 14, 2005 oh we're battlin agin I see verse dont rhyme wit verse you need hooked on phonics i see yeah i demanded tips but i was talkin about money give a shout out to J-O-E cuz his rhymes are pretty funny :hilarious: i dont have a beat so i freestyle acapella so forgive me if my rhymes are a little rocked up fella yeah Will is ill in a good way, but you ill in the worst way so eat an apple a day it'll keep tha doctor away this aint 8mile them people had a script so it was easy Eminem didnt, thats why in the movie his stomach was always quezzy I was thru but you brought this page back into action you're yesterdays news i dont even remember how we started clashin so feel me like you felt "uuhhh" on Willenium now look at willisill you see what i done did to him he's turnin red he might spontaneously combust he's sufferin from frustration he might even cuss you're one of them rappers i aint gon say need to quit but its like you hit rock bottom and you need to have a sit :ali: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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