J-o-e Posted April 8, 2005 Report Share Posted April 8, 2005 its unfinished, but i just want to share it and collect your ideas....i need to think of the best type of chorus ------------------------- No More War Written By J-o-e tell me why did the daddys all go to war// u kno its another loop hole in this law// the justice of freedom of speech is a fraud// please every night on my knees praying to the lord// please no more war it cant be stopped anymore// this is about the time i said i didnt care about the law// but i love what i do baby, and i know it may seem crazy// but maybe u could learn to appriechate me, rest in peice// for the soliders who died in war, u got a peice of my heart// ur souls remain in the depth of red light district, what a tart// but then again theres a war bein faught for soil, for oil// the pressures hot and the kettles gonna boil// the president cant deny what i say in anyway// hes cryin in his sheets what he started, he gotta finish// or run away, and im serouisly sayin straight up vanish// and this aint a threat, ill go to jail for that// its just a bet, that the irans got a bat// and gonna try kill there way out of a cage// but u gotta come and overcome the war of rage// and its much more agression that i can write on a page// why did u get the youth to recruit at an early age// an early funeral for a great men, it was back then// when bush didnt give a damn and jus wrote with a pen// puttin up with blair, they didnt care, its all rare// but maybe they should learn to share?, its too much to bare// so please homey i dont wana go on ya tour// i just want u to listen to me when i say no more war....// you leaders been scared of us rappers for years// sheddin tears for the homies who passed, my peers// u didnt care, u thought jus another sacrifice// but dont u understand your playin with someones life// one solider in war is like a spear ciggerate// but you will be hurtin as soon as theres a debt// u cost someones life how does it feel?// u like to kill? you think its all real, but its the deal// u dont care about the soliders family who died// or at the funeral i saw the children, they cried// whats goin on we won the war now leave it alone// come on now, send the daddys back home// who vowed at the start of the war who would last the end?// its sad to see childhood memoires of a friend// and he died right infront of your eyes, because of your lies// how come he dies? ya'll know it aint fare another peice of the pie// the goverment is bull****, and thats it i dont care who knows it// i aint scared to show it, someones car, forget it tow it// if u stopped the war, then maybe change the law, cant come in?// my bloods gettin thin, god forgive me i didnt mean to sin// coz u kno if we cant get in the front we'll get in through the back// this is to the blair and bush your ideas are just plain whack// leave em alone and they wont do jack.....// Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted April 8, 2005 Report Share Posted April 8, 2005 Right on! :ali: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Jiggy Posted April 8, 2005 Report Share Posted April 8, 2005 good message, thumbs :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted April 8, 2005 Report Share Posted April 8, 2005 Real good song the whole way thru. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted April 9, 2005 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2005 Thanks Bigted, Don Jiggy and FuQ thanks 4 feedback! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bagotrasho Posted April 9, 2005 Members Report Share Posted April 9, 2005 hey man great concept i think you can iomprove on the flow of the rhymes though but overall :thumb: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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