Mike Posted April 19, 2005 Report Share Posted April 19, 2005 (edited) The following song is based on when i lived in maryland. This was grades 3-5 "Food Chain" Written By Will is Ill (Mike) Im gonna tell you a story and its hard to tell Before i had friends and records to sell At the lunch table, just me and three guys Those people,my friends before my status did rise The opposite table was full, all we did was stare More people came to sit, had to pull up a chair They had so many friends it was so unfair They had jokes and secrets, and decied to share But what i didnt know, they were all bout me (Chorus) All this info must rack your brain Yes i was at the bottom of the food chain So many stories its all insane I got so many memories and so much pain Its twelve 'o clock, reccess the time i hate To sit alone, or run away is what i'd debate I chose to sit alone, and then i started to dwell I didnt do anything from then to the bell Skip a head to valentines, give one to the girl thats hot I look in my box and twos all i got She wasnt one of them (Chorus) Crazy best friend, and his name was Nick The girl i liked, saw me like i had no d*ck Now nick had ADHD, and he was always psyched He would do anything, just to be liked Visits to the full table, he danced or made a funny sound What he didnt realize, he was entertainment, a clown I didnt either, i thought he was cool Apperantly i was the dimond in the ruff, the unfound jewel (Chrous) Kickball time and they picked me again Me and Danny I. ,were the field men Now danny was popular, big man on top He saw my Philles hat then the ball did pop "Nice hat man" he commented to me I said hi to him back as cool as i could be One popular person thinks your cool then your cool too Well, i you heard this before now i know its true (Chorus) Well i became popular and left my other friends behind I thought they pulled me down, they were dull and i shined Best friends call me mike, friends call me petrow Nick called me mike, but now calls me petrow No longer calls me mike he thinks hes so retro (Chorus) Big news, movin back to N.J. That was three years ago right to the day I hated this, I was the man, I wanted to die But all i did was break down and cry And i dont know why On the ride home, head out the window and i started to sing Comin back home became a beautiful thing (Chorus) x2 Edited April 22, 2005 by WILL IS ILL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted April 19, 2005 Report Share Posted April 19, 2005 I like the idea u have used many small verses, 2pac did this with the song "Wonder Why They Call U" wont say the last word because its insultive to women haha.... but overall i think its great lyrics. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Jiggy Posted April 20, 2005 Report Share Posted April 20, 2005 hey that was a touching song, gives me an idea, i never really did get personal wit myself in a rhyme, so when i go home im gonna try that, cuz believe it or not i got issues. and oh yeah fresh prince had small verses on "here we go again" :afro: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fan 4ever Posted April 20, 2005 Report Share Posted April 20, 2005 Im gonna tell you a story and its hard to tell Before i had friends and records to sell At the linch table, just me and three guys Those peolple,my friends before my status did rise I stopped reading after those lines...Please man! Keep it real! Unless you are really selling records and you have a huge status, you shouldn't be saying that! Keep it real in your songs! :poke: (now if you do sell records and you are this HUGE MC, then i didn't say **** :wiggle: ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Jiggy Posted April 20, 2005 Report Share Posted April 20, 2005 try tellin that to the rappers in the rap game, how many do you think are gangsters, how many do you think shot about 50,000 ppl imagination is a part of rap it's like an attention grabber braggin is part of rap; pay attention to rap period :afro: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted April 20, 2005 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2005 (edited) I stopped reading after those lines...Please man! Keep it real! Unless you are really selling records and you have a huge status, you shouldn't be saying that! Keep it real in your songs! :poke: (now if you do sell records and you are this HUGE MC, then i didn't say **** :wiggle: ) i knew someone would comment on that, just because im not famous doesnt mean i cant sell records. and the status, i meant social status in school, like being popular just some notes Edited April 20, 2005 by WILL IS ILL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fan 4ever Posted April 20, 2005 Report Share Posted April 20, 2005 I stopped reading after those lines...Please man! Keep it real! Unless you are really selling records and you have a huge status, you shouldn't be saying that! Keep it real in your songs! :poke: (now if you do sell records and you are this HUGE MC, then i didn't say **** :wiggle: ) i knew someone would comment on that, just because im not famous doesnt mean i cant sell records. and the status, i meant social status in school, like being popular just some notes Oh my bad! So you are selling records?? Tell us about it man, how's it going? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted April 20, 2005 Report Share Posted April 20, 2005 fan 4eva he didnt say that, he said "Doesnt Mean I Cant" means he could Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bagotrasho Posted April 20, 2005 Members Report Share Posted April 20, 2005 hey nice rhyme Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted April 21, 2005 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2005 thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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