WesSyde Posted May 19, 2005 Report Share Posted May 19, 2005 jeez dude it took like 3 years 2 respond your rhymes are far far away from bein bombs they're soft and harmless more like drops of rain your hardest rhyme couldnt bring any pain no need 2 respond 2 u cuz i didnt consider that a diss my rhymes are clean, no guns, drugs or piss how u gonna bruise my lungs? i think you're just sore cuz all that huffin and puffin could certainly injure yours if you're a modern day DeVinci was that your Mona Lisa? porque si fuera usted, yo tendría prisa because that would fail on comparison, not a work of art at all i don't try to be hard, no need to grab my balls my rhymes hit u like a bird crap on your head it's stunning, surprising and scars u 4 life like Pep and Tajai said "what u are is what u do" Right now u ain't doin nothin so what does that say about u? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Icarus Posted May 19, 2005 Members Report Share Posted May 19, 2005 jeez dude it took like 3 years 2 respond your rhymes are far far away from bein bombs they're soft and harmless more like drops of rain your hardest rhyme couldnt bring any pain no need 2 respond 2 u cuz i didnt consider that a diss my rhymes are clean, no guns, drugs or piss how u gonna bruise my lungs? i think you're just sore cuz all that huffin and puffin could certainly injure yours if you're a modern day DeVinci was that your Mona Lisa? porque si fuera usted, yo tendría prisa because that would fail on comparison, not a work of art at all i don't try to be hard, no need to grab my balls my rhymes hit u like a bird crap on your head it's stunning, surprising and scars u 4 life like Pep and Tajai said "what u are is what u do" Right now u ain't doin nothin so what does that say about u? :thumb: progress is for cool people Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted May 19, 2005 Report Share Posted May 19, 2005 theres really not much u can say coz every single rhyme, wont go away rhymes bad and good, there always racing u never kno u can beat me, look who im facin its ridicilous how sh!t came to this ive never responded violently, without a fist always talk first then see if u can walk if u can, then ur the type of sicko who will stalk im sorry to interupt ur little B!tchin session but look at the master, just take a lesson its all ya need, to get the flow and the content explicit or not it dont matter cause im doing this constent i hope in a few years ill be rich and laugh at ya'll heavy day workin, just wana chill out and play basketball its a shame that the game aint the same its all strange rappin isnt rappin anymore, its completlely changed if u dont completely rip ur oppenet, u get ripped imma get pushed over the edge, i might of flipped but thats a matter that i have to take in my own hands im a man and the plan aint the same, i dont understand whats the difference between 2 lines and 20 lines? like the difference between 20 songs and 1 good rhyme its a mistake, i dont mean to break, your concentration might get too excited, kicks in the penetration call me whatever you like, coz honestly i dont care i cant bare that all the money i earn, i have to share its none of your problems, so why take it out on ya? if i flow for ya? maybe do a little show for ya? would u like it if i rap quick, rhymes so sick times running out, and all i can hear is that tock click.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rawad_m Posted May 23, 2005 Report Share Posted May 23, 2005 now isten to this rhyme i bring, all you that are just in it for the bling, you all need to envisage, it takes more to rap then a silly image, will smith know's what i mean, and even pac dident just wanna be seen, they had meaning in every verse, wanna make you immerse, can 50 do that, emnem, the Game? man if u listen to them no way your gunna stay sane, now listen, get this down, thebest rap is never just bout a sound inever just image, never about howmuch you can curse, never about how much your worth, ..... bla, bla, ...this was jsut a quick freestyle of mine( this was the first time ;) cheers,im a new member, great freestyles u guys have, Rawad Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rawad_m Posted May 23, 2005 Report Share Posted May 23, 2005 some more freestyle: u all tryin to out rap each other, go runnin home to ya mothers, how long did it take you to rhyme, man how did ya pass the time, can nobody rap as quick as this, eloquent, intelligent, never a miss, will smith'd approve, man did your rap ever make people move, get them down, and with a pumping bass, nobody even cares about Nas, cause the joints got a spark, im about to make me mark, the rap world aint ever gonna be the same , when once and 4 all I get rid of Em and the game, just get ready, cause my ****'s about to blow, duck, or i'll make you reep what i sow, the commercial crap is dead, and thank God the mak's returning cred, back to the old school days, when rap was not about what ya'd get paid, how much you'd get laid y'all lyin you probanly need to pay to get laid, cause fifty, your as ugly as God's ever made, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rawad_m Posted May 23, 2005 Report Share Posted May 23, 2005 some more freestyle: u all tryin to out rap each other, go runnin home to ya mothers, how long did it take you to rhyme, man how did ya pass the time, can nobody rap as quick as this, eloquent, intelligent, never a miss, will smith'd approve, man did your rap ever make people move, get them down, and with a pumping bass, nobody even cares about Nas, cause the joints got a spark, im about to make me mark, the rap world aint ever gonna be the same , when once and 4 all I get rid of Em and the game, just get ready, cause my ****'s about to blow, duck, or i'll make you reep what i sow, the commercial crap is dead, and thank God the mak's returning cred, back to the old school days, when rap was not about what ya'd get paid, how much you'd get laid y'all lyin you probanly need to pay to get laid, cause fifty, your as ugly as God's ever made, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted May 23, 2005 Report Share Posted May 23, 2005 look at this, your stalling u cant help it, but your fallin u may not kno it, must trust me i curse coz who hasnt cursed at me? its simply ur raps are all the same mine i keep sane, with an aim to shame your an early cat, i can handle that he dont kno bout rap, ill pin him to the mat make him tap, why u rappin bout rappers who never heard of u they dont even wana word out of u, ill put word on u ok, we in a will smith forum, thats all cool but i aint gonna tell kids, drop outta school be a fool dont want them to have the same mistakes i did battlin off so many haters, no money makers when i was a kid i do agree with ur issues, but ur needed tissues how could u misuse? for that i must abuse.... its not my fault, i start beef, break teeth brush em off my shoulder just like a leaf.... ur rhymes are new school which mine are old i dont care coz imma be writing the game thats told... give me one day, imma grow the top cant stop till i drop it like its hot, i'd like to be known as a songwriter, not a lyrical fighter, making my game even more tighter understand every line, every rhyme, and every dime go into be progressin, but its a blessin, i took it as a sign now take yours and see who's is flawless, every night savin up just to get that cordless infra red micrphone...without any wires now i feel like Prince and Bago who gets fired... from this board of ours, no flashy cars, just ordinary people, cant take that then step back, j-o-e with the hat tilted back.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Bracesup Posted May 23, 2005 Members Report Share Posted May 23, 2005 Let's just begin with the obvious, Rawad, Posting rhymes twice can't get you an award, Disillusioned with fact that you're in the big time, Just another passer by without any creative rhyme, Listening to the Game is the reason why I am sane, You can never beat Em 'cause you're walking down the wrong lane, The future of yours will turn out just like any other, A broken marriage without your child or its filthy mother, No hope of a record contract is destined to be your harsh reality, Keep whining all your life, cause Will ain't gonna show you pity. Commercialism is much needed, you may hate it or like, Fifty saves the rap game now, so you better take a hike, Spare us with this nonsense about sleeping with a hooker, I ain't gonna pay a ho 'cause my soulmate is my lover, Resistance to temptations always keeps me going, Let's see you make me reap 'cause I know what I'm sowing, Just a first time poster yet you started dissing every member, You just might slip with your ego trip, you better remember, Make peace with you inner self and come out of this illusion, It's about time someone realised and sent you to an institution. Byes. :grin: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rawad_m Posted May 24, 2005 Report Share Posted May 24, 2005 Let's just begin with the obvious, Rawad, Posting rhymes twice can't get you an award, Disillusioned with fact that you're in the big time, Just another passer by without any creative rhyme, Listening to the Game is the reason why I am sane, You can never beat Em 'cause you're walking down the wrong lane, The future of yours will turn out just like any other, A broken marriage without your child or its filthy mother, No hope of a record contract is destined to be your harsh reality, Keep whining all your life, cause Will ain't gonna show you pity. Commercialism is much needed, you may hate it or like, Fifty saves the rap game now, so you better take a hike, Spare us with this nonsense about sleeping with a hooker, I ain't gonna pay a ho 'cause my soulmate is my lover, Resistance to temptations always keeps me going, Let's see you make me reap 'cause I know what I'm sowing, Just a first time poster yet you started dissing every member, You just might slip with your ego trip, you better remember, Make peace with you inner self and come out of this illusion, It's about time someone realised and sent you to an institution. Byes. :grin: ← You guys absolutely killed me , your pretty good , sorry i dident introduce myself( i dident know this forum was that accessed, most forums you dont hear from people in ages). Anyway, my names rawad and im from melbourne australia, im a huge dj jazzy jeff/will smith fan. Anyway, the reason i posted was that i really admire people who can freestyle, and I just wanted to see if i could do it, usually I suck at rhyming, (maybe it showed), i think you guys who can do it are pretty mad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted May 24, 2005 Admin Report Share Posted May 24, 2005 , Anyway, my names rawad and im from melbourne australia, im a huge dj jazzy jeff/will smith fan. ← dude where in melbourne are you from.. I'm the creator of this site and live in melbourne.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rawad_m Posted May 24, 2005 Report Share Posted May 24, 2005 , Anyway, my names rawad and im from melbourne australia, im a huge dj jazzy jeff/will smith fan. ← dude where in melbourne are you from.. I'm the creator of this site and live in melbourne.. ← hey, i live in clayton, i go to uni there.. what about you? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted May 24, 2005 Admin Report Share Posted May 24, 2005 oh okay.. im out near greensborough Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Bracesup Posted May 24, 2005 Members Report Share Posted May 24, 2005 Hi Rawad. You were damn good for your first time freestyle, man. :2thumbs: And yeah, guys pretty much post many battle raps time to time here. :haha: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rawad_m Posted May 24, 2005 Report Share Posted May 24, 2005 My reply to joe and Braces up: Please please joe and braces up, just cause I’m a first timer dont mean i cant light it up, im a rookie at the game, but that dont mean I’m the same, my rhymes have meaning, do your rhymes get a crowd feeling, you say im a passerby, just another fake rapper living a lie, but can a fake drop rhymes as quick as this, make ya never miss, every word, every line, every diss, and make ya like who was this, im sick of all the wannabes, I wanna restore rap to what it used to be, These are my first ever rhymes, Ill get finer with time, But for the moment, the present, the benchmark, i think ive set it P.s: i woulden't call this a freestyle case i went over it and fixed it up a bit, and hero1 you live in Greensborough?, i lived there pretty much all my life till i was 14, cheers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted May 24, 2005 Admin Report Share Posted May 24, 2005 P.s: and hero1 you live in Greensborough?, i lived there pretty much all my life till i was 14, cheers ← well Monty actually.. but yeah..small world..its about time more australians rolled through this site..switch getting to #1 an all Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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