Schnazz Posted November 22, 2005 Report Share Posted November 22, 2005 Are you going to post the new version when it's ready? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted November 22, 2005 Report Share Posted November 22, 2005 He should. The whole album too.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted November 22, 2005 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2005 (edited) oh course ill post it, i want to show my improvement. but this album wont be done for a long time. if its takeing this long for one song picture 9.....yeah so dont get too anxoius. Edited November 22, 2005 by WILL IS ILL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fan 4ever Posted November 22, 2005 Report Share Posted November 22, 2005 You made the beat yourself and wrote the lyrics yourself! That's something man! It's not a bad song...just try to improve it...like you are going to! Looking forward to hear more from you! Keep it up man! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted November 22, 2005 Report Share Posted November 22, 2005 For your first song this is really good! Like Fan 4ever said keep practising and keep going you will only get better!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted November 23, 2005 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2005 http://s38.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1ASI1LQ...883FQ5GIZ4Z2NBJ heres an updated version. the music in the back is a little soft i think. but i think the beat sounds a little distorted and i dont know what more i can do to make it sound better. feedback as usual. compare it to the first recording please.i think i need to loosen up even more though. get the flow down even better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted November 23, 2005 Report Share Posted November 23, 2005 I think your flow was better on the other version. There was too much bass on the new version. Liked the other version more believe it or not. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted November 23, 2005 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2005 (edited) playing the other one again... it is better, it was alot clearer and i had a better flow. im wondering if its cause of the beat. i dont like that beat though, at least for that song. im thinking of taking the old one and just adding hardness to it liek i suggested. but i already recorded over the beat and changed it. but i still have a copy of the song. ughh im so stupid some times :willvspaparazzi: Edited November 23, 2005 by WILL IS ILL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted November 23, 2005 Report Share Posted November 23, 2005 Yeah, the other beat was better, it fit with the song more and your flow was better on the old one too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schnazz Posted November 28, 2005 Report Share Posted November 28, 2005 I like the old version much more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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