J-o-e Posted May 30, 2005 Report Share Posted May 30, 2005 Heres a different song that i've wrote for my upcoming album ---- Hear Me Written By J-o-e Ladies can you hear me listen to me closey, can u feel me? if i was dangerous, would u kill me baby girl, please just hear me i never real done a song like this before, so imma do it as soon as we had a relationship, i just threw it straight out the window, u said that i called u a ho but girl, please believe me i never said so... you know all of them haters who just want us to break up we're going to let them win, so come on lets make up i remember listen to our favoirte album, hard if i didnt love you, why did i say so on your birthday card you know im the type just to be all shy i can hear you weeping, i can see you cry, i see it in ur eyes that u miss me, u wanted to kiss me, but ur boyfriend thinks im a prick, he wants to diss me he can never measure my love to his, a meter long just one love song and one more night to do wrong remember the times i sang rhymes, just to see you smile i started to freestyle, and you made it all worthwhile i love the way you laugh, the way u cry, but most of all i'll hate to see you have to say goodbye baby maybe we can work things out, i didnt mean to shout i wanted to keep u, i never meant to push you out so before you flip me off, grab my stuff and ship me off listen to me closey as i say.... Ladies can you hear me listen to me closey, can u feel me? if i was dangerous, would u kill me baby girl, please just hear me i dont want to drive you away, i want you to stay im a fool, dont worry the stupid things i say coz i know this love is true, went for a drink, u sed only a few only meant to be two, i never meant to kiss you i just wana hold you close, i'll never be ghost i promise, if u dont believe me, tie me to a post you body is making me fien, just like my dream for u to be in my arms, but they are to be broken it seems girl you tell me what its like to me in love especailly when i get it from my nan up above i asked if you loved me, you shoulda told me from the start but u broke my heart, broke a specail thing we had, its apart i beg for you to take me back, baby i admit i was whack but thats beside the fact, would u love me more if i was black dont get me misunderstood, i aint racist we had it trust on lies, its lust on your cry but let me tell you i'd rather die than life with you for the rest of my life just for the fact that you can be my wife so girl your smilin. can you feel me? listen to me closey as i say "can u hear me" Ladies can you hear me listen to me closey, can u feel me? if i was dangerous, would u kill me baby girl, please just hear me the thing that makes you different from every girlfriend is that your the one who was the closet to say to ill stay to the end all these other girls dont mean nothing to me dont get it wrong, u do mean something to me u are something real good to me, would u kill for me or if i was broke and needed money, would u deal for me aint it crazy because baby i bet you think of me now im out of your life i bet that the love ship sinks coz of me just coz of my loose lips, would of you been better if i never sent you that poem, and that love letter you cant hide the truth but my pride wit u on my side without i go crazy without my baby, but maybe why you complainin about the times that u sed i didnt know ya well nows your oppurtinity, come on baby let me show ya if even my songs ain't number one in them charts imma just say that your always number one in my heart coz ever since i started this rap spit, u kick up a fuss but every minute, this rap spit goes into 4 us for a future, but dont you get that? all the dealers that dealed me im just glad to know that you heard me.... Ladies can you hear me listen to me closey, can u feel me? if i was dangerous, would u kill me baby girl, please just hear me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Bracesup Posted May 30, 2005 Members Report Share Posted May 30, 2005 Well, since I have only read lyrics of yours where you totally rip everybody to shreds, this was kinda surprising. :hmm: Really deep and sensitive lyrics there, homie. Maybe if you could record it over an instrumental of Game's "Don't Need Your Love", it would be great. :dj: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted May 30, 2005 Report Share Posted May 30, 2005 "but u broke my heart, broke a specail thing we had, its apart i beg for you to take me back, baby i admit i was whack but thats beside the fact, would u love me more if i was black dont get me misunderstood, i aint racist we had it trust on lies, its lust on your cry but let me tell you i'd rather die" - these would be noteworthy lines to a great review of this song. Nice Job Joe Dope song overall. Many would feel this cuz U capture the emotions of people's relationships. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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3cookies Posted May 30, 2005 Report Share Posted May 30, 2005 whoo hoo... that was sweet Joe... chiKs do like to see the sensitive side of guys come out sometymes. Im a sucker for a song, thats kinda like a love letter... I didn't know u were working on your album, but keep at it bro. :1-say-yes: peace, cookie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Mike Posted May 30, 2005 Report Share Posted May 30, 2005 Well, since I have only read lyrics of yours where you totally rip everybody to shreds, this was kinda surprising. :hmm: Really deep and sensitive lyrics there, homie. Maybe if you could record it over an instrumental of Game's "Don't Need Your Love", it would be great. :dj: ← i just put that song on to see if it would fit good and it does, youve got a good sense of...music putting in the background-ness Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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