Members Mc-Bad Boy Posted June 7, 2005 Members Report Share Posted June 7, 2005 (edited) i'm sick from all will smith's heaters so i wrote this: btw its not done yet [Verse I] There are a lot of people how doubt Will Smith But don’t doubt him or u gonna hit Lots say that he don’t do rap and his game is whack But don’t lie to you’re self this man can act This man can rap Let go out and watch “Hitch” Later we can drive out and scream “You Saw My Blinker B!tch” At the club we could dance with “Switch” We can do it until we get rich And if it’s not enough we can Getting Jiggy Wit It At midnight we gon’ have a nightmare in our street Its all be good if u just don’t doubt Will Smith [Verse II] Ok lets talk about some big hits, how about summertime Or “I’m looking for the one”, yeah this song is fine Coz “I came to get down” yeah I like that line Or how about “The Rain” nah it’s not a good example the sun is shine Hu I know lets go dance with “Party Starter” Yeah that’s right Will is gonna make you party harder And if u don’t have any cool moves its ok u can listen to “If U Can’t Dance” Ask Will all u gotta do is just slide here your chance Just take your ass to the dance floor Still need help? Just knock my door Or ring my bell Yeah, this song is done well “if I don’t believe what u believe I’m going to hell” This is “Ms. Holly Roller” this song were good at sell Aight now Let’s talk about thins in him that are not the same Lets talk the only man who stand up agents Eminem In two word Will Smith is just THE MAN So dont doubt that man try to be one of his fans Edited June 7, 2005 by Mc-Bad Boy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted June 7, 2005 Report Share Posted June 7, 2005 That Was Cool man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loco Posted June 9, 2005 Report Share Posted June 9, 2005 Funny Idea, but the rhyming is weak. don't do: time/fine/line shine and so on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Mc-Bad Boy Posted June 12, 2005 Author Members Report Share Posted June 12, 2005 k thnx man im still new at this thing... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bsharp13 Posted June 26, 2005 Members Report Share Posted June 26, 2005 idea=decent lyrics=need some work elevate man...peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted June 26, 2005 Report Share Posted June 26, 2005 (edited) I imagine english isnt ya 1st language. I saw minor grammatical errors. So props for at least that. "But don’t doubt him or u gonna hit" - just add 'or u gonna get hit' The rhyme was fine. Raps dont have to be all advanced. U could rap the simplist lyrics and still come at it. For an early rap, it's just fine. Edited June 26, 2005 by mfuqua23 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted June 29, 2005 Report Share Posted June 29, 2005 really cool, maybe u can teach me some rhymes, cause' im not a very good rapper in english Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Mc-Bad Boy Posted June 30, 2005 Author Members Report Share Posted June 30, 2005 as u can see im not a pro 2 but man all u gotta do is give it a shot try 2 write, post it over here and the guys will help u good luck Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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