J-o-e Posted June 13, 2005 Report Share Posted June 13, 2005 This is only the first verse but the rest is yet to come. i was inspired by Bobby Valentino's "One Girl To Love" Here it is: Ain't it crazy how one girl can change a man but you gotta listen to these words. please understand that my plan wasnt made out as i thought it would i knew i was an idiot but i thought we were good really i should of learnt how to keep a steady relationship but girl you was pushing me to have a bit of companionship baby you didnt have a manuscipt. so tell me why all the fuss im getting sick and tired with day in day out shouting a cuss i dont mean to bust. but if i keep my heart where it belongs instead of me on my knees asking please whiling writing this song cant believe i was wrong. i thought we were going to be together you know like run and d it wouldnt be right to not be forever but i swear i never did the things out of spite. i loved you may of doubted it myself at times. but your heart was the clue sometimes you and your bickering saying isit a lie when i say its true im sick of arguing every night just out of spite. its sickening its crazy cause while your gone i wish i heard your bickering my love for you is thicking. so tell me why you dont want to be with me besides the fact that when i asked, you said you didnt want to live with me we was young and we was dumb but besides a love was pure as i grew older in time i knew that my love for her would get mature getting you back is the only cure. im hurting in different ways you dont know i keep it inside my pride and hope that it didnt start to show i never wished you would go, your destroying me slowley, give me a little while loved the way of your perfume and especailly the way you smile why you ask was i hostile? with you i would be able to walk an extra mile Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted June 13, 2005 Report Share Posted June 13, 2005 "you know like run and d it wouldnt be right to not be forever" - that jumped out at me. Nice lil topic going. The rest of the verses and chorus will definately pull the song together. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fabman Posted June 15, 2005 Report Share Posted June 15, 2005 After some powerful songs that's a nice laid back song... 2 thumbs up - BUT IT'S INCOMPLETE - so i can't wait to read the rest ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Bracesup Posted June 15, 2005 Members Report Share Posted June 15, 2005 Hey, I didn't know you could get this romantic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted June 15, 2005 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2005 haha. yes i can. suprised myself haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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