MissAshley Posted July 7, 2005 Report Share Posted July 7, 2005 (edited) been bored and writing, don't know exactly where I'm going with this, but let me know what you think so far: Chapter One: Love of the Game My dreams of writing would be untouchable if i didn't respect the art It would be pointless to lift a pen if the words weren't from my heart I wanna make the spirit cry, I wanna touch the soul If you're feeling incomplete I want my words to make you whole I wish to be rich in my successes, something like Lady O But I refuse to let where I've come from be overshadowed by where I could go There's no time for people trying to throw a wrench in my plans There's a miracle in my mind and a pen in my hand So excuse me as I take this moment to digress Because the key to my future unlocks the door to my success I dream in full screen technicolor of life- changing rhyme My heart bleeds for the universe because this world is mine- For the taking This is history in the making I'm one step closer to my greater calling;whatever it may be The end is near, the sky is falling, something I never thought I'd see And that makes it more important for me to take this given opportunity Add a dash of me and a splash of ingenuity Stir it up, let it cool, then dish it out in bits and pieces If this was an observation of my life, this part would be the thesis Just a sneek peek, a little teaser of one chapter This is only the beginning the greatest stuff always comes after..... (to be continued with Chapter Two) -ashley Edited July 7, 2005 by willjadafan Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted July 7, 2005 Report Share Posted July 7, 2005 Wow. This was very good. Each line was deep in it's own right. I really liked this. "It would be pointless to lift a pen if the words weren't from my heart" - so true. But I refuse to let where I've come from be overshadowed by where I could go" - Nice way to let it be known ya aint playin'. Question, why exactly is this put in "chapters"? Some type of inspiration? A different way to organize a song? A song that's an audio novel or book perhaps. Interesting spark of an idea I'd say. :thumbsup2: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissAshley Posted July 7, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2005 (edited) actually i really don't know ( pitiful ain't it? lol) but something is telling me to take it in that direction, b/c there's lots more i want to say and i wanna kinda connect it, so far i'm not sure how i'm gonna do it, i'm just gonna let the words guide me lol thnx for ur input i really appreciate it Edited July 7, 2005 by willjadafan Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel Amor Posted July 7, 2005 Report Share Posted July 7, 2005 That was real dope Ashley. that was real insightful. :respect: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted July 7, 2005 Report Share Posted July 7, 2005 wow, that was deep. I really enjoyed reading that Miss Ashley. :2thumbs: peace, cookie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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