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Two New Songs


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Sup y'all,

I've uploaded two new songs on my soundclick! I was wondering if y'all could check it out and tell me what you think!

One song is the megamix I did a couple months back! I just putted it up online!

Check that out!

The other one is a song I did for my girl! It's just one verse! Over the Bonny & Clyde beat! Let me know what y'all think!

here's the link!

My soundclick

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I was just at your page yesterday checkin out some of ya old stuff. Guess I shoulda waited. But anyway, I heard that megamix already. Matter fact I have it. My favorite part was when the Luniz came in.

"Adore You" - It's nice joint. The lyrics is real cool. I think U could deliver better tho, like make certain words or lines stick out. Maybe even double vocal. I honestly didn't really like the overall flow of the song. There were spots that fit and then some that didn't. Probably cuz of the length each line had. I always have trouble with this when rappin' a new song that goes perfect wit a beat, but I'll have a line or two that just isn't rhythmically correct and I have to adjust how and when I say it. Even if a lyric seems to perfectly fit, try to vary a lil bit just for the fun of it. U might come out with better results that U like. (and I mean doing this before U record. maybe just havin fun practicin' rhymes to beats) I must say, 'The First Coming' is coming together nicely.

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Thanx 4 the feedback man!

I need to record more tho! I need to get that feeling of recording! I geuss now would be a great time to record some more songs!

I need to get a hang of that double vocals tho...could somebody teach me how to do it?

If other peeps check it out, feedback is always welcome! :wiggle:

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Double vocal could just be u rappin it again wit a slight difference in tone. Will does it. 2pac for sure also. Party Starter is the quickest song I can think of that has bit of it.

I think I get what you mean! I need to work on that!

thanx man!

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